49 Reviews Found

Review #1, by whisky 

13th June 2010:
u have a blog? can u tell me what it is so i can read it??
and by the way, this story just keeps getting better, and better, but i feel like now i just want them to snog the living daylights out of eachother
both frank and jess, and lilly and james
PLEASE, LET IT HAPPEN IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Author's Response: Omg of course! It's on my author's page! it's the first thing on there, so click my name and it will lead you to it!

thanks for following my story and becoming a trusted reader ;]


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Review #2, by Blue Biro 

7th February 2010:
aw, gotta love Frank!he's my favoruite! :)
100/10! :)

Author's Response: Frank is very much amazing, I'm glad you've noticed :]

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Review #3, by lokita95hp 

6th January 2010:
wow I take it back I♥u!
xoxo
hope

sorry gotta go it's midnight!

Author's Response: hahah, okay thanks for reviewing! glad you love me again!

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Review #4, by Amelia Bones 

29th December 2009:
Wait, what? Surely Frank's ma is around when Neville is alive? She takes care of Frank and Alice when they're in Saint Mungo's, and she always harps on about how great he is etc. I'm confused.. But, still, fabbity story :) a few grammatical errors, but that's okay, you're doing a pretty good job so far!

Author's Response: There is no Alice in this story, love. And besides that, I didn't say she was necessarily dead..so she could possibly be around. just a thought :P

Thanks for the review!


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Review #5, by HP FanFic Lover 

24th September 2009:
Lily and James deserves to be with each other! Especially James...
I really feel sorry for the bloke. Argh, I hope I don't feel that way when I met the one guy that I'd love forever.
Frank finally trusts someone. Lily.
I love Frank now.
As a brother. LOL

Author's Response: Frank is the brother we all want :]

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Review #6, by Fireball Nymph 

26th August 2009:
I love the talk between Frank and Lily. Really nice, and, I think now we know more about Frank. That's good. Bah, he was too mysterious anyway. Wow, what Frank's mother did, did you ave it planned, or it just came? I think it was sweet of how he called Lily his sister. And James knows he's in love with Lily. A lot happened, and this was awesome!

Author's Response: Yes. Frank was quite to mysterious. I wanted people to see that he was really soft and quiet inside as well as loud and mysterious. And yes, I had that whole thing planned since the start. Lily being called his sister though, I threw that part it. I was in the moment when I was writing this piece lol.

This chapter was very busy and full, totally. You got it, babe! I'm glad you enjoyed all aspects of it.This was one of my recreation chapters ;P thx for the review!


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Review #7, by Jellyman 

8th April 2009:
Oooh, interesting development! Frank seems really sweet in this chapter, I liked him a lot...I'll admit he was getting on my nerves with his whole high-and-mighty I'm-practically-a-god routine (even though he says he doesn't want to be seen like that :P).

Author's Response: aha i know, frank is a plausible character...you'll grow to love him like i said ;P thanks for reviewing!

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Review #8, by twinkies 

19th March 2009:
I don't know about forshadowing but I can see a relationship about to form between Lily and James. It was all a huge misunderstanding.

I really love this chapter because Lily is trying to find herself and I'm at that stage in my life where everything seems to be going wrong but then sometimes I look up and realize that I'm not the only one suffering and I feel really bad for hogging all the attention.

10/10 for inspirational writing!!!

Author's Response: awe :) that's probably one of the nicest reviews i've ever read! *tear drop* i always try to make this story all about quality and originality and i know that not many fics really talk about their characters as people, and how they think of their life. i wanted to show HPFF, with this story, that it can be hilariously funny and still deep...that all hope isn't lost and that just because it makes you laugh your butt off, it can still be a story of substance. so thank you for that ^_^

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Review #9, by DimondMoon 

28th January 2009:
wow, that was an awesome chapter
and damn Lily is lucky, I haven't had a drink in months, I miss it haha
rating: 10/10

Author's Response: ahahaha.
don't we all...


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Review #10, by Lucy_Fleur 

29th December 2008:
oh lordie.
well done. your getting so deep. did me proud.
i love untouched the song. it reminds me of twilight...if you havent... read it goddamn you read it. and it did this chapter justice. congrats little wan

Author's Response: yes yes,be proud ^_^
thanks little wan =)
and yes, i read twilight about a year or two ago? in less than a day... so... yes,you could say i was hooked for a while lol.


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Review #11, by ellaxoxo 

2nd December 2008:
wow.. [good wow just in case. psht. as if i could say anything negative about this!]

JAMES in LURVE. x33 AWE TO THE MAX, i knew it was coming but it still made me all fuzzy and warm inside. he wants to hug her. he wants to kiss her. he wants to love her. (sings rest of song from miss congeniality)

and okay, before it was official that i liked frank, but now it is being proclaimed to the entire universe that i love him so much.. =]
how effing awesome is he?! you created a great character. i wanna snuggle with him and feed him chocolate colored strawberries, provided he is not allergic. ;]

btw. good name for the chapter. i was singing untouched the whole time, and still can't get it out of my head. =P .

keep it fresh xD
ellaa

Author's Response: you get brownie points for quoting miss congeniality.

ahaha, no frank is not allergic to anything ;D besides a certain someone . but i would think of it more as an ADDICTION. you just wait until i update.. i'm going to experiment with diff point of views. you'll love frank even more.


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Review #12, by marauders_rock 

25th November 2008:
i hate u...i absolutely hate u for the horrible blog u wrote!! n dont u ever leave out ne spoilers in the open...do u hear me?!?!? it's bad enough to wait for the actual chap...dont worsen it by tellin us wat mite happen...n why doesnt lily shave off amos' eyebrows instead of james'? n why does frank hav to butt in?!?!? ugh..u're infuriatin...neways i'd really like a cry for u update too...i'd review other chapters too but right now i have no time at all..neways i still hate u...

NEVER EVER LEAVE SPOILERS AGAIN!

do u hear me woman?!?!

~vish

Author's Response: AHAHAH . when did i ever say whom she chose to shave of eyebrows? i never said anything ;D don't go off guessing like that and then yelling at me for it.. hah.

i won't leave spoilers, not anymore lol.
:D and thanks for the review! btw, i already updated ;] it's in the queue. it even said that in my blog entry too.


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Review #13, by jameslily1313 

24th November 2008:
OH WOW!!! I LUFFLEZ IT SOOO MUCH!!! ITS AHHHMAZING!!! poor frank. and jess. and lils. and james! remus needs some lesson-learning tho. and i REAAALLLY dont wanna wait til the next chappie comes out, so if ur really gonna make me wait, BE QUICK!!! ahaha. 10/10 for schnitzel!!! xP

Author's Response: ahaha no it's already in the queue. thanks for reviewing! and if you wanna check up for story updates, click on my blog, on my account page! thats where all the news is :D

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Review #14, by Tanya1032 

20th November 2008:
AMMMAAAZINNNG CHAPPPIIIEE!
Yeah. It was that great.
Can't wait for more!
Lots of love,
Tanya. And all the voices inside my head.

Author's Response: thanks, tanya! it's nice to hear from you :D

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Review #15, by A_Drowning_Fish 

20th November 2008:
GORGEOUS chapter . . . as always xD
you're a GREAT writer, honestly you are AMAZING!
did you make your banner yourself? ?
WOW if you did and if you didn't still a good banner.
hmmm. . . maybe you should not update quickly more often -
34 reveiws with one chapter?!
nah. you still have to update fast - i adore your story! and being the center of the universe and everything . . .
haha - i wish!
anyway 10/10!

Author's Response: XD thank you so much! you all keep me so humble :] and yes, i always make my banners, unless i give credit to someone at TDA (a beautiful lie) :D thanks for the great review and rating!

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Review #16, by LauraLongbottom 

17th November 2008:
woah...
-Im so glad you updated!!-
Frank is so wierd!!..but still awesome..and oh poor james!! plz lily go out with him already!! =P haha
Lily needs to tell jess! shes such an awesome friend...!!
cant wait for next chappie!

Author's Response: thanks for a great review, love :D

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Review #17, by slytherin_princess_1923 

17th November 2008:
omg u r such a great writer i love this story
keep them coming :D

Author's Response: THANK YOU! awe =] you're so sweet. i will def. keep the chappies coming!

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Review #18, by ParalyzedInHeaven 

16th November 2008:
awww. i just want to hug Frank=) I do feel bad for Lily though... great story 10/10

Author's Response: i love frank! thanks for liking my story, and for leaving a review :D

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Review #19, by Starved4Romance 

15th November 2008:
So... much...Awesomeness! Woo hoo, I frickin love this story!... ... !: D I am totally hooked onto this story pppllleeasee write more!!

Author's Response: ahah i will. all in good time ^_^

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Review #20, by CommonSenseless24 

12th November 2008:
LOVE IT!!!
i've missed this story terribly; fanfiction is not the same without it!

i must say, i saw the Lily/Frank friendship/brother-sister relationship a long time ago; i couldn't wait till that happened and now it has. !yay!

hmmm... i can't think of any foreshadows at the moment, but i always get them after i reread the chapter

great work! and i hope the next chapter won't take as long... :D

Author's Response: awe, hpff would def. not be the same with out great reviewers like you! i hope the next chap won't take as long either.. lol. keep your fingers crossed! pray for me to have a free day where i can write - they're killin' me lol.

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Review #21, by Padfoots Property1217 

12th November 2008:
OMFG!
IM LURVING YOUR STORY! ITS JUST KEEPS GETTIN BETTER AND BETTER! LOL
I CANT BELIEVE LILY GOT SO DRUNK! HAHAHA THANK GOD FOR FRANK, HUH?
OMG I THINK IM IN LURVE WITH FRANK, HE'S SO SWEET! LOL.WELL I BETTER GO.LURVED IT AS ALWAYS AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON! AS WELL AS YOUR OTHA STORIES AS WELL! THEY ABSOLUTELEY POSITIVELY ROCK!
HEHEHEHE

Author's Response: thank you!!! :D

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Review #22, by Marauderess 

11th November 2008:
AW that was such a sweet chapter! So touching! Dammit you're gonna make me cr-cry! *starts sobbing* That- sob- was- sob sob- such a -sob- emotional- chapter -sniff. Okay i'm good now, really i am.
The thing about Frank wanting a sister cause of what his mom did, that just... hit hard. I mean i know this is fiction but the thought of abortion has always made me depressed, i mean the baby never even gets a chance, and that's just sick. But it's a good character builder for Frank really it is. Helps me understand him a bit more.
This was a bit more serious chapter but the thought of McGonagall drinking a cosmo, friken hilarious! XD I am so totally going to pull that refrence some time at school this week and everyone is going to give me weird looks. Like the time i made the 'drunker than a turkey on thanksgiving' referance. Cause i mean think about it, all those people that fry their turkey in beer or all those people that cook it in sherry or wine. That turkey's got be one drunk bird by the time it's finished cooking! Right?
i'm a little bit disapointed there's no pic but i think i'll live.
love your work, this was a great i mean slammin! chapter as usual, and i can't wait for the next one. Cause it will be just as slammin as the rest were!
10/10 :D

Author's Response: that's exactly what i wanted it to be: a good character builder :] see, when step up gryffie says theres a reason for everything, there is. listen to her ahah.

i know i laughed about mcgonagall sipping a cosmo. i had to throw that in there.

thanks for the slamming review!


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Review #23, by NitumJ 

11th November 2008:
one word. just one
BEAUTIFUL!!!
i love frank!
lolz... but he is my favourite~!!!

Author's Response: FRANK is a crowd favorite ;P

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Review #24, by haileythefan 

10th November 2008:
Intense chapter, I mean lily was in hysterics, and Frank, was discussing his own life...hope you update soon.

Author's Response: ahah yeah it was intense to say the least. and i will try, dear!

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Review #25, by dramaqueen6 

10th November 2008:
Wow, great chapter! I really loved all the writing in this, it was magnificent. It was still humorous, but I love that this chapter adapted to be a bit more dramatic than others, while still keeping the general tone of the story. Great job.

-dramaqueen6

Author's Response: magnificent?! o.O really!?!? *blushes* thank you!

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