13 Reviews Found

Review #1, by mgmve 

26th May 2009:
I hope her plan doesn't interfere with Hayden's! Why does Naomi want her mom to fall in love with Hayden? Or is this all a dream?

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Review #2, by Groundswell 

1st March 2009:
Another well written chapter.
I think you did the anger Ahyden felt towards Naomi justice, but I sort of don't understand how he could forgive her so fast. I guess that's the way it is when you're in love with one, but at the same time, she had lied to him... I guess I had expected a little more talk from her side before he should forgive her.
But I simply have to know, why does Hayden have to make Cho fall in love with him. It's kind of disturbing, to be honest. haha. Falling in love with the daughter's best friend... Hmm.
I think Hermione is so sweet when she's looking after Draco. Even though she'd never admit it to Ron and Harry, she's starting to warm up to the thought, and I love the way you're doing that!
Really good chapter. Liked it a lot.

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Review #3, by FanofCards25 

26th November 2008:
And so the plot thickens ... I am now left wondering why Hayden is supposed to fall for Cho? Is Naomi Hayden and Cho's love child? I must read on to find out. I know I have said this before, but you really are doing a great job in keeping the reader's attention :)

Author's Response: Hi FanofCarts25!
LOL What a pretty theory. But no, Hayden 'has to make' Cho to like him, and not fall in love with her. That's something different. :p
Naomi and Hayden aren't blood related, that's all I can give away.
Thank you for the feedback. *hugs*

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Review #4, by Lillylover22 

15th November 2008:
why would naomi need hayden to get her mum to fall in love with him? 9/10 =]

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Review #5, by gitgit 

14th November 2008:
i wonder why naomi wants cho to fall in love with hayden
that was an interesting chapter

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Review #6, by zEthHPfrEaK 

8th November 2008:

I wonder why Naomi wants Cho to fall in love with Hayden... I mean, then she wouldn't be born...

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Review #7, by SpringTime 

5th November 2008:
Now that is in an interesting developement I wonder why Naomi asked that of him? I am certainly curious. Not sure if I like Naomi, she seems kind of nasty to Hayden. Wonder i there is a reason for that. hmm...

Author's Response: Naomi is a really nasty character, but she will do great things, so don't worry. :D Thank you for the comment again. :D

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Review #8, by rowenaravenclaw94 

19th October 2008:
good job! i wonder what hermione's gonna think of hayden with "cho"... 10/10! great story! i luv it!!!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: You'll see what she'll think of Hayden and "Cho" together. lol
Thank you again! :)

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Review #9, by Labby 

16th October 2008:
That line keeps on staring at me.. You have to make my mum fall in love with you. I want to know what it means.. why does Hayden have to do that? I wonder if it has something to do with the fact someone else might get Cho to fall in love with them.. someone who won't make the future so good for Cho. Man, this story is really screwing with my head. I really love the ideas and thinking about what's going to happen. I liked the last scene of this story too.. interesting. Great chapter!

Author's Response: LOL ^_^ This question will be answered in chapter 13. It'll begin to make sense in the next chapter (ch.12), which I've already written. I'll be posting it very soon. :)

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Review #10, by Girldetective85 

13th October 2008:
The plot thickens! So Naomi has been a witch all along, living with foster parents who didn't support or understand her magical ability. I can't blame her for not telling Hayden - she must have had her reasons to and besides, she wanted to stay safe and she wanted Hayden to stay safe. So she knew Hayden was a Malfoy and the son of Draco and Hermione all along? And she's been protecting him at Hogwarts, too - casting memory charms on all the professors and making sure that no one thinks twice about Hayden belonging in Slytherin House. I like the way you described the differences between Naomi and her mother - I would have imagined Cho to be shy and sweet, and Naomi to be more brusque and forward too. Naomi and Hayden are adorable together. But now Hermione has seen them together and believes he's with Cho! At least this will help everyone think Cho loves Hayden, just like Naomi planned for her own secret reasons...

Author's Response: Aww, babe, you are awesome! Did you know that? :D Thank you for the re-review. I love it! :D

Yeah, you are absolutely right. She knew it all along, but Hayden didn't know that she had known about him all the time. He was completely clueless...
One of them (I'm not sure yet) will cause to ruin the Dramione-relationship, and this will lead to that whole dysfunctional future relationship... lol I have to come up with some idea but my brain is not functioning at the moment...

Thank you! :D *hugs*

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Review #11, by SilverEssence 

12th October 2008:
wtheckk naomi! why do you wasnt hayden to fall in love with your mum?! oh, what house was naomi in to make her dad disappointed??
great work!

Author's Response: Why does Naomi want Hayden to make her mother to fall in love with him? Everyone's asking that... and the answer is so simple... :)
Thank you for the comment! :D

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Review #12, by Potterholic 

9th October 2008:
Interesting! I've always been curious about Naomi, and I'm glad we get to see her now. She's interesting, and I wonder why she wants Hayden to make Cho fall for him. Hermione's part was interesting as well. I love how she was curious about Draco, and that girl next to Draco was Astoria, right? I'm looking forward to see if she's going to be around, and definitely looking for more Naomi. ^_^ Great work, keep it up!

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Review #13, by Mistress 

8th October 2008:
I love it! I like the Hayden parts a lot.

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