lovedd it!
please wright more it was amazing the writing especiallyy!!
I hope we get a name soon :)

Author's Response: thank you :) it is a oneshot though, so the story's over now xP heheheeh thank you so much for reviewing :D

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I really liked it=) I guess it gave a whole different look to who Sirius was. But you kinda mentioned that it was a Sirius/Lily?? So I'm a bit confused..

Author's Response: nooo, it wasnt a sirius/lily... dunno when i mentioned that...

But anyways, thanks for reviewing! :D

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What a fantastic one-shot! I loved it! I'm intrigued by the last paragraph, the last day of October is the 31st when Voldemort striked the Potters. Did that have any relevance?

A brilliant piece of work, you are very talented and I'm going to see if you have any more stories posted! lol 10/10 :D x

Author's Response: Yeah, Sirius had left to look for the Potters, and in that moment they're shipping him off to Azcaban. And she lost him.

Thank you so much for your wonderful review

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Hey, I really liked it, but I couldn't tell who was the Narator, probably because I wasn't paying attention (not saying that that is a bad thing). Is it Belletrix, maybe? You said her nname somewhere in there.

Author's Response: I didn't write the name of the Narator. Shes nameless. She was a Slytherin and Sirius's at some point, but nothing more (: Thank you for reviewing!!

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This was so sad. I knew that one character was Sirius, but I'm not sure about who the other girl was. I was close to crying when I realized this. I love it. Great work. You're a genius.

Author's Response: Thank you :) You werent meant to know who she was. She wasnt any of the 'famous' ones :P

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it was really good-it gave you that sad and mysterious air

Author's Response: haha thanks

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Wow, very well written.
I really liked the style of this =)

Author's Response: THANK YOU :)

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this is probably the best one-shot i hav read!
i love it!
it is so sad and so good and basically freaking amazing!
sorry, i'm rambling!
i specially luv the bit about his father's funeral.
you wrote the whole thing so well!
10/10

Author's Response: thank you!

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