4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by pieface 

12th October 2009:
i really like your story so far, i love your description and language used, its really beautiful lol :)
i think that with luna you can either do it and do it really well or do it completely shit, and you have done her character soo well, you've encapsulated all the characteristics of luna really nicely and almost unpredictably lol (if that makes sense...) but it works!
btw ur chapter images are brilliant! i dont know if you've done them yourself but i really like them, maybe thats just cause im totally in love with james mcavoy, but still.. :)

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Review #2, by Mimi 

10th July 2009:
it was fantastic and very romantic I think you are a very good writer and I thank you for this wonderful chapter.

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Review #3, by fatmermaid 

6th May 2009:
God! If thing keep going the way they are going, Luna and Rolf are going to need to get a room! But really, their love is so sweet and gentle and pure, that all knowledge and sense really aren't needed.

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Review #4, by Twinsmom 

27th February 2009:
Very nice scenes. But, even with Luna singing Rolf's praises, I still don't feel as tho' we know him very well.

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