26 Reviews Found

Review #1, by eterna_romantica03 

20th February 2011:
I just discovered your fic and can't believe how good it is! Best plot I've read in years! Love the slow pace building up to what I know it's going to be a very entertaining, full of angst story. Fantastic work!

The description of their emotions is just perfect. So far Hermione and Ron are in character. Ron pigheaded as he was in the books, Hermione over thinking. Nice to have something smart to read. Thank you!


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Review #2, by Abhorsen 

26th November 2010:
Oh my goodness. That was fantastic! I love this story! I don't have any constructive criticism for you though. I'm honestly trying to come up with something, but your characterization is fantastic and your dialogue is so strong. And I'm hampered by the fact that I just want to keep reading.

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Review #3, by HP0247 

5th January 2010:
Wow - that was a brillant chapter! Holy cow!

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Review #4, by Mary Emma Granger 

2nd January 2010:
OMG, so many twists I'm starting 2 get dizzy. I mean, Ron's sterile, Draco can't have kids cuz of a spell. OMG!!

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Review #5, by Elle_ 

5th November 2009:
'that if it hadn't of been for his mother's' should be: hadn't HAVE been for his mother's.

'he'd probably of done himself in' : he'd probably HAVE done himself in by now.

Most people make this mistake because when you say it you say 'he'd probably've done himself in...' the abbreviated have, 've, sounds like of. SO many people do it on fan fiction but you're the only one who asked for mistakes to be pointed out. :) Great writing though. Really high standard. x

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Review #6, by hypermonkey 

20th October 2009:
Quite the epiphany.


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Review #7, by Wanted Free7 

30th September 2009:
Whoa. Major cliff hanger. That was AMAZING! 10/10!

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Review #8, by Mrs Padfoot 

3rd September 2009:
Yay that he knows now! Kind of a seriously weird spell if it doesn't actualyl care whether people are married or not, i see your explanation for it, it just seems kind of forced...a good chapter though really!

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Review #9, by kayoko 

30th August 2009:
I love this chapter! Poor Draco! The drama! XD

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Review #10, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans 

6th April 2009:
oh my god oh my god oh my god.
not whst i ws expecting. great creativity W/ the spell/story!! love it.
lucius is going to flip!!

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Review #11, by _Kaitlyn_ 

26th March 2009:
The part about his grandfather is hilarious. And so is the part about Pansy. I like how you made him half asshole/half caring, wonderful person. He hasn't changed into some love-crazed fool since he left Hogwarts, which is something a lot of stories tend to do. Amazing ending. Amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I couldn't justify a complete change in him, he still had to have a bit of the old Draco in there...

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Review #12, by Chipmunk 

24th March 2009:
Oh snit Draco is scared xD

Author's Response: Lol, I'd be scared too if I was him...

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Review #13, by Violet Waller 

9th February 2009:
WHOA that was suspenseful! great writing!

Author's Response: Thank You

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Review #14, by Katielynn 

31st January 2009:
A Draco chapter! : ) Yeah, baby.

Yeaaah. I absolutely love the spells the Malfoys are under. I hope there are more.

I looovoe Draco. :) Very very very much.

Author's Response: I always wondered why the Malfoys had such bright blonde hair and I thought I'd come up with an explanation for that...

Oh, and I agree completely. Draco = love

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Review #15, by AkashasSpawn 

30th January 2009:
Lol Lucius must be crapping his pants. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Lol, interesting choice of words...

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Review #16, by dumbho 

14th January 2009:
draco is sexy.
ok just had to say that really quick.
anyways, loved it. gosh, so good.
( =

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Review #17, by Spicky 

14th December 2008:
really good, soonhe'lll go find them and everything will be dandy!!!

Author's Response: Maybe not dandy, but things will certainly change.

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Review #18, by SaLiEnT ThOuGhTs 

26th November 2008:
I absolutely loved the twist! Very clever!

Author's Response: Glad to have surprised you!

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Review #19, by StepUpx_Gryffindor 

24th November 2008:
BAH! I'M SHIVERING RIGHT NOW! i love draco , though, for some odd reason i love the way you've portrayed him >.< make him stop being so cute!

Author's Response: I think that's impossible...Draco is just, well, Draco. Cuteness or rather, hottness, is just a given.

Lol, thanks for the review.

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Review #20, by silencechaser 

13th November 2008:
WOW powerful chapter..Brilliant

Author's Response: Thanks :)

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Review #21, by Veela_is_me 

31st October 2008:
omg excellent chapter
dracos figured it out, i wonder if there will be a confrontation.
what if ron finds out!!
well on to the next chapter
and i guess i will find out :]

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

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Review #22, by stormy eyes 

8th October 2008:
Oooh LALA! Okay I love Draco and all but his ancestors are an odd bunch!'
Love the story keep it up!!

Author's Response: They are a tad odd, aren't they?

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Review #23, by alannalove2009 

6th October 2008:
wow. that curse thing came out of NO WHERE! i cant believe draco is so daft!

Author's Response: Well, he's not daft - maybe a little in denial.

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Review #24, by Gypsy_Girl 

6th October 2008:
Oh dear. How are his parents going to react? I'm guessing the whole muggleborn thing is still a problem, regardless of them pretending to get over it. :O Poor Draco...

Author's Response: You never know...

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Review #25, by rowenaravenclaw94 

6th October 2008:
are they going to disown him or something? that was scary. 10/10!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: No, they aren't going to disown him...

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