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130 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Kelsey Marie 

26th June 2012:
Okay I'll admit I wasn't to hot on the idea of reading a story from James' perspective but I love this! He's hilarious and absolutely how I imagined him to be. I love the little quirks about him (i.e. saying cap'n) and his eccentricity!

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Review #2, by S 

20th May 2012:
Is it really necessary to keep having the characters point out that Micah is Jewish? I'm just on chapter 2 and it's mentioned enough that it almost seems racist.

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Review #3, by IndigoSky 

3rd April 2011:
I'm just going to ask one question - are you a Scrubs fan? Because with the whole 'J.D' thing and the fact that you can't stop saying 'frick' makes me think you are. :)

Loving this story, by the way!

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Review #4, by Siriuslover177 

19th February 2011:
Aww!
Why does he have to brake them up?
Dobby. :P
Loved it. :)

-Siriuslover177

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Review #5, by wonwon_myhero 

25th January 2011:
Wow. I never picture James Sirius Potter as being a spaz almost...think it that's Wealsey blood. Just saying. ;P

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Review #6, by GinnyPotter25 

29th December 2010:
Haha, "Dobster, if you will."

I love that paragraph, it made me LOL.

Really likin' this!

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Review #7, by PetrificusTotalus 

15th August 2010:
LOL another awesome chapter!
James is jokes :)

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Review #8, by Mellaluna 

7th February 2010:
i love it so far, its really funny, thanks heaps.

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Review #9, by Gaiapet 

13th September 2009:
Still funny! More and more favorite lines!

"Stupid old git, always patrolling the corridors with his stupid hedgehog."

"You have Tourette's now, J.S.?"

"That was a stupid, lame, and weird thing to say,"

"Why not train as hard as we can so that we can be the best Quidditch players we can be?"
"Cos it'll be painful and time-consuming?"

"Fie on you. Fie! This is not what Quidditch is about! Quidditch is about hard work and perseverance and discipline, and impressing the girl you fancy by casually slipping in, 'Got to run, I've got Quidditch practice.'

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Review #10, by unicorn_fan 

26th July 2009:
bless him no one will believe him that its a catastrophe lol =)
at least Dobby gets it
xx

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Review #11, by thats disrespect, man 

22nd June 2009:
i dont care how frickin' (it IS fun to say) awesome your frickin' (haha. i feel powerful...FRICK) story is, DO NOT DISRESPECT THATS WHAT SHE SAID JOKES! THEY. ARE. SO. FRICKIN. FUNNY. well, theyre really funny when theres an awkward silence after someone says something that can vaguely be warped into a thats what she said joke.

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Review #12, by thats disrespect, man 

22nd June 2009:
i dont care how frickin' (it IS fun to say) awesome your frickin' (haha. i feel powerful...FRICK) story is, DO NOT DISRESPECT THATS WHAT SHE SAID JOKES! THEY. ARE. SO. FRICKIN. FUNNY. well, theyre really funny when theres an awkward silence after someone says something that can vaguely be warped into a thats what she said joke.

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Review #13, by .... 

15th June 2009:
Heya!
I know i've read only 2 chapters of your story, but so far i'm really enjoying it, i've been reading books on this site 4 awhile now and i really like the funny side of the story, as some of the other stories are quite sad, and being an over emotional bundle of joy i cry ALOT at sad things. I'm finding your story hilarious and I LOVE JAMES SIRIUS POTTER!! He's a nutter and i really can relate to him. A quick question, Tegan Llewellyn, was her last name inspired by the the obernewtyn chronicles? it just in the book there is a man called Brydda Llewellyn and i really don't think the name is common. Anywho really loving your story and must get back to reading it...

Your ever faithful Gryffie

The Tonrar

P.S Tonrar means devil in eskimo ;P
P.P.S more reviews to come! this isn't the last you'll see of me!
P.P.P.S my new word ATM is bitchin' meaning cool or hot e.g that jacket is totally bitchin'
P.P.P.P.S soz if that offends :)

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Review #14, by ingenious 

11th June 2009:
This is turning out to be a great story but I wish you had started when he was in his 1st year. I think it would have been easier to understand that way and more interesting because you know the characters more and can sympathize with them

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Review #15, by rhysus2008 

25th May 2009:
OK, not bad. But not much seemed to happen. I don't really know what to expect, but I hope there is some kind of plot in this story and its not all fluff.

And sorry if I seem like I'm being harsh, I guess I am, but not in a nasty way! Promise! I'm just not loving the story... yet.

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Review #16, by vampire girl 1944 

12th May 2009:
ahahahahahahaha
i love commander cool!
hes exactly like the first james potter hehe well like i imagined james. i dont actually know him personally obviously seeing as hes fictional, but wouldn't that be cool? to meet james potter...
ah im rambling a bit. anywho...
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
KEEP IT UP!

~VAMPIRE GIRL 1944~

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Review #17, by PrincessPadfoot 

7th May 2009:
Another excellent chapter. How do you do it? What's the secret? How can you make me laugh at everything you write? How? Okay you don't have to share your secrets with me. My Favorite line(s): ďI mean, Iím only Jewish and itís hard. Youíre black. Not that there's anything wrong with being black. Itís just that people automatically assume you like rap music.Ē ďAnd that I talk like this: Hippibity bibbity, give me da slibbity!Ē

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Review #18, by lily_evans_ginny_weasley 

2nd May 2009:
I love the way he talks!!

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Review #19, by Felix 

4th April 2009:
“And that I talk like this: Hippibity bibbity, give me da slibbity!” -- What the FRICK :D

"Commander cool"
I'm dyng here, it's hilarious.

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Review #20, by Spicky 

20th March 2009:
you are HILARIOUS!!!
LOVE the story!!!
AMAZING!!!
:-)
xxx

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Review #21, by katey 

3rd March 2009:
I love the way James talks
he's hilarious, =D

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Review #22, by Burnt Cheese 

2nd March 2009:
Do you know how very jealous I am of your amazing, fantastic writing ability? I mean, it's only just the first chapter and I can honestly say that I'm HOOKED. Your characters are vibrantly written (espesh James himself), the writing is virtually seamless and your dialogue is so darn witty. Frick (couldn't help myself - it's catching on) I want to write as good as you! :(

Ah well, I really hope you never ever ever abandon this story. :D Not when you have so many fans. Off to the next chapter! I'm ready to be wow-ed...

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Review #23, by Fragile Words 

24th February 2009:
Ha, there's not many stories from James' point of view that are actually this funny xD I love this...

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Review #24, by FutureAggie09 

4th February 2009:
Haha you go, dobby! Good boy!
Lol i really liked the "commander cool" part. Well done!

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Review #25, by skeet500 

1st February 2009:
it's getting really annoying how you keep calling that one kid "the jew" and keep talking about how he's jewish and all. who cares what religion he is? it doesn't make any difference either way. it's completely fine that he's jewish, i just don't think people should be defined by what religion they practice.

Author's Response: I do apologize if it's annoying or offensive, but I see Micah as very proud of his particular faith but also slightly insecure because he's in the minority of Hogwarts students, so he loudly defines himself in this way. I totally agree with you, but we are all different and sometimes I think it's okay to acknowledge those differences in a positive way. I hope that makes sense... =)

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