21 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ignotus_Peverell 

19th January 2009:
I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first story on HPFF, so it's good to know that it's actually somewhat good. ;D

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Review #2, by coolkitty 

17th December 2007:
Love the story!!
sooo going to my favs!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the story! It was my first one posted. Also, thanks for the favorite!

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Review #3, by AussieAnatomy627 

8th November 2007:
The ending was extremely well-written!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I thought for a long time about the ending, and wanted something that readers could remember.

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Review #4, by jenkent 

16th October 2007:
That was a cute ending! Great job!

Author's Response: That's what I was working up to... basically, someone shouts James's name both at the beginning and end of the story. Thanks for reviewing all of the chapters!

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Review #5, by addicted12 

4th September 2007:
hee! love that ending! keep up the greta writing! But only one thing.didnt the marauders NOT know about the Room of Requirements? you said that potter started the rumor that they were snogging there, but that doenst make sense.anyways.great story! fantastic writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I will definitely continue to write. Erm, James started the rumor about Lily and him dating and all that. I'm not too sure about this, but didn't Hermione say that the room might be Unplottable so they couldn't place it on the Marauder's Map? I think the Marauders might have known about it. I mean, they are the Marauders. I might clarify that in the chapter. Thanks for pointing that out to me!

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Review #6, by DemiusLupin 

11th August 2007:
WOW!! i LOVEED it!! XD Really great! Last bit was genius and i loved the whole Muffin king bit!! That was just...HILARIOUS! lol..couldnt stop laughing for like 7 minutes ..(Yes i timed it!) U shall go in my faves!!..authors that is lol! ~*~DL x

Author's Response: Thank you for all of your kind words! Yes, I wanted to end the story with action, and what better to end it with what I started out with? The beginning and ending both have someone yelling James's surname. I am glad that you like the Muffin King parts, they were originally written because I was bored, and Sirius's little golden paper crown. Ah, I once had a friend who couldn't stop laughing for ten minutes. I timed it. Thank you so much for adding me into your favorite authors list!

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Review #7, by Lily_and_James_4eva 

11th August 2007:
lol, loved it!!!
hugs and cookies
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Author's Response: You loved it? That's great, thank you!

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Review #8, by the nutty imp 

4th August 2007:
Slight correction: He and Sirius used it often during the summer at his house (He and Sirius had often done so during the summers at his house)

I like your invention, the diligo nemesus, maybe it ought to be capitalised.

Poor innocent Snivellus *L*. I would expect that James will be in trouble. *L* Good ending

It was a fun and light piece - great characterization of the Marauders and convincing OCs. I'm glad you didn't make Peter to be a shifty character - afterall he was a good friend to them during those years. And you also avoided that age-old cliche of matching your OCs with Sirius/Remus. That was refreshing. :) Once again this was an enjoyable piece. :) amusing till the end.



Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out to me!

I'm glad that you liked the characterizations of everybody. And yeah, I dislike those stories full of the Remus/OC or Sirius/OC cliches. Thank you for reviewing every chapter, they have been very helpful!


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Review #9, by JamesandLilly4ever 

2nd August 2007:
I Loved it great job

Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #10, by mike 

30th July 2007:
I love this story, especially the ending. You have talent! More stories soon, please! Marauders preferably..,

Author's Response: Haha, I know. Probably my favorite part of the story is the ending. Don't worry, I will also have some Marauder story in progress. Check my author page!

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Review #11, by bob the almighty 

30th July 2007:
oh god i loved this chapter. H! you have really come a long way with this story. i mean there is so much description in this story. SO MUCH. okay? it shames the dramiones. the oh so crappy dramoines which people demand so many reviews for. like i had to read this one story, y'know? 'coz it was popping up everywhere on the recently added story list. that author must be full of themselves. conceited. arRogant. okay... sorry but i just hate those kind of authors.

so where was i? okay i just wanted to point something out. i have been your one hundredth review on this story! now you can fedeX this to your friends and go "my readers have decided to marry my story. Disturbed, i am." oh yeah. wasn't that great/ teaskldjfklasjdklfsjkldfjaskldf

those random letters are the joy of my story reading experience. seriously. im glad you finished this before deathly hallows. i enjoyed this a lot. i will expect some more stories from you in the future! more marauder stories okay. please... NEVER write a dramione. they should all go rot in the place where the war is going on.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing all the chapters of Prongs' Mischief. Now it has finally hit one hundred reviews, thanks to you and all the other reviewers! *party*

Right okay then. I really wanted to finish this story before the release of the last book. This story has been with me for so long... since fifth grade. Yeah, I really did start this story in fifth grade! Shocker, hmm?

I will definitely write more Marauder stories in the future. In fact I have several Marauder stories that are works in progress. Check out my author page for them.


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Review #12, by city by the BAY 

20th July 2007:
Am I the only one who noticed this? You know the tree that they're cutting the leaves off of? Well.. that tree... the name. I put it in a Latin translator thing and it means something like love tree! Very clever, Amy, VERY CLEVER!

I'm really happy that you finally finished this story. How long has it been up? Since November of 2005, right? Wow. That's a long time now that it is in black and white. Anyways. Erm... haha, I LOVED the ending. So the beginning and the end all involve someone shouting "POTTER!" That's great.

I think that you really did a good job on this story. Considering that you started this when you were only ten. I see a lot of stories on the archive... stories written by fourteen-year-olds. God, they are HORRIBLE. I read a story where Luna is in the same class as Hermione and she goes, "Wow. I just kissed Draco and Harry. Felt good!" Ew. Out of character!

Can't stop saying this. But this is really good for your first story! I can't wait to see your other completed stories. Wait... this is your only one, isn't it? You seem to have a lot of plot bunnies hopping around. Well, good luck and I hope you enjoy Deathly Hallows!

-city by the BAY

Author's Response: Congratulations on figuring out what the name of the tree meant. I was hoping that someone would figure that out.

Yeah, the story both begins and ends with someone yelling James's surname. Hah. Somewhat of a cliffhanger, left for the readers to imagine what will happen next.

I'm glad that you thought I did a good job on this story. Ew. Did someone really write that story? Wow... that's... just sad. Luna is really out of character in that story.

Thanks, and I hope you enjoy DH too!


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Review #13, by Action Evans 

15th July 2007:
Wonderful story... but in this chapter you repeated 'James' and 'Lily' too much... but hey, no biggie. I thought that the ending was a little... I don't really have a word for it, but it just didn't have a lot of... PIZZAZ... if you know what I mean? Anyway, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for giving me your opinion on the ending, but I think I just may keep it like that. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #14, by harrypottergirl 

14th July 2007:
i love it i cant wait to read your other stories

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it. I frequently update my author page with new stories and chapters, so yeah. =D

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Review #15, by HelloKitty 

11th July 2007:
oh no!!! lily will start hating james again!! well...maybe james was doing something nice for snape to show to lily he was nice...nah!! of course he wouldn't do that!!! they were an inch away from being togther!! in the next chapter,after lily is done yelling at james, make them friends again! i definately rate in a 10!

Author's Response: Nah, James and Lily are together. And this is the last chapter. Just a bit of a cliffhanger so you can imagine what happens next. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #16, by Firenze Fan 

3rd July 2007:
lol! how sweet! but u made one little mistake: u wrote that slughorn said he would pick lilly and james, not pick them UP.

Author's Response: Oh, my bad. Thanks. =D

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Review #17, by Queen of the Universe 

27th June 2007:
that was really good! god do i hate snape! isn't he a half blood? if so why would he support voldemort when he's not a pureblood? i don't get that. anyways good story, but i didn't really like the ending because it was a clifhangers, i hate those!

Author's Response: You should reread Half-Blood Prince if you don't know why Snape is a Death Eater. =) And I'm glad you liked the story, but the ending was really necessary. You can only imagine what Lily will do to James. Hah.

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Review #18, by Strawberry 

19th June 2007:
it was really good and sweet. im glad u kept writing. please keep writing and i assure u this story will be a hit!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. You can always read my other stories though, I think they're a bit better than Prongs' Mischief because I wrote that a long time ago.

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Review #19, by Helovesmenot18 

19th June 2007:
i loved your story and im glad that you finally finished it! Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you loved the story.

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Review #20, by hpef1006 

18th June 2007:
I love your ending! That was really cute how they got together but as usual, James is James!

Author's Response: I know, James will always be James.

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Review #21, by LadyDux14 

18th June 2007:
*Laughs* Oh my gosh, the end was hilarious!!! "It was me that spread the rumor"... yeah... so I liked the big twist at the end, great story.

Author's Response: lol, yeah I was sorta writing up to that moment. Glad you liked the story!

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