Its fun to see them leave and go on a vacation..

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Very cute! Loved it! It was short though!

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aww this is so cute! i like it alot. update!!

Author's Response: I'll try! Thank you for leaving a review!

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I liked this chapter, but I can't wait for some more!

Author's Response: I know..hopefully Easter Break will give me some inspiration.

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Hi this chapter was worth the wait. It was really good I can;t wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: good, glad there are no pitchforks being thrown! Thanks

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that was good.

Author's Response: thanks!

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That is so cute! I love how nothing bad is happening, because something bad almost always happens and it's refreshing to read a story where everything is perfect. Love it!

Author's Response: I warned you all this was going to be pure fluff...lol. I like perfect, I can't help myself, I'm glad you like it too!

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OMG I Love it!

Author's Response: YEAH! thanks!

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it's so hard to read these stories now! it was so great and i loved this story..now it only gives me headaches switching eveyones name in my head


Author's Response: lol...I was thinking that during the prank too! So kudos for reading and reviewing anyway! Thanks!

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I really liked it but I hate the new rule where all names that have to do with the books have to be taken out. I wish they didn't have to do that but some people just copy and steal the stories too much. I liked the chapter but I hate the new rule.

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved that chapter, but I should just tell you that the changing of character names was only temporary....Thanks for reading!

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awsome story i cant wait 4 u to rite more!!!

Author's Response: thank you!

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this chapter is wonderful. as are all your other chapters. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thanks, and even more thanks for reading this during the April Fool's prank (I'm sure that was...difficult)

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Ok why do you blame Ron? Oh well good chapter and i can't wait to see more:)

Author's Response: you'll see why I blame Ron in the next chapter, but I do love him!

Thanks!

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WOW. amazing.plz update soon! 10/10

Author's Response: working on updates, I promise!

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Oh that was cute

Author's Response: cute is what we aim for....thanks

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Excellent! Can't wait to meet the babies!

Author's Response: lol..that might be awhile...but thanks!

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I really enjoyed it. That piragua stuff sounds yummy! Lovely chaper, keep up the amazing work.

Author's Response: Piragua rules by the way....and so do you, thanks!

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I loved how you described all the locations, it felt so real and I really just wanted to go there! Also, the way you end it a bit serious, but then the last line picks up the fun-ness again. I can just picture Hermione and Ginny, I feel sort of jealous of them. Again, I love this story, and I'm so glad you updated!

Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, but I added that last bit at the last minute and I'm glad I did because Harry's thoughts are a little intense and you're right, it's all about the fun-ness. My descriptions are working, I'm so happy! And don't worry, Tengo celos tambien (I'm jealous too!). Thank you again!

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“¡Bueno!” Great chapter as usual, nothing less than expected and then some. PLEASE tell me that this isn't the end of their trip (it doesn't look like it though lol) because I am having too much fun reading it! ^.^ Great descriptions, great energy/flow through transitions of the days. Some people can't pull off putting multiple days in one chapter, but you did it, quite flawlessly too. I wish I wasn't so out of it so I could respond more, but alas, I cannot. If I think of anything else I will post it on your meet the author page. Thats all for now,

~The Amazing Bouncing Ferret Mr. Malfoy's Owner

Yes, yes, you DID win. Rub it in my face why don't ya? I would have won if I wasn't kicked off the computor for almost two hours RIGHT WHEN IT WAS UPDATED! lol Sorry, kind of annoyed, and tired, so be it. I will win next time! :P ^.^

Author's Response: no not the end of their trip, that would be cruel. I'm loving the compliments for this chapter, thank you but I don't know about "flawlessly..." I love the Meet the Author page...lol
~scarlet

rotflol...this is an intense competetion btw.

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El Morro should be paying you for this advertising. Now I want to go! Really descriptive chapter. Probbaly a good thing because I'm not sure if my mindset right now could process your dialogue.
Yes sometimes I'm sure locals just like to have fun with tourists. I guess that's the price we pay for visiting their (amizing) homes.
I really like the closing paragraphs with Harry's thoughts, I'm sure that's how he would think. Interesting to note that this is also the soldier mindset of keeping the world safe for their love ones.
But then at the end, they just want to have fun.
Did I win?
~Draco

Author's Response: Well, obviously I love El Morro so much that I'd advertise for them for free. The real pay off is knowing that my descriptions were good! YAY!
Locals are fun people, but honestly who doesn't like messing with tourists?
I nailed Harry's mind set?!?!?! Yes, another confidence boost, lol
You did win this round ND: 2 PF:1
~DelRosa

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I love it!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

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Great story so far but I noticed one thing about your spanish:

De donde es
That says "Where is"

To say Where are you from you say De Donde eres

Author's Response: Thanks for looking out, but "De donde es" is also the formal way to say "Where are you from". Es can be translated as he, she, or you (formal). Glad you liked it.

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