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Review #1, by PhoenixStorm 

25th July 2007:
Ooo I loved this chapter!! It was a...calm chapter, sort of, but I just liked how Remus was written here. I mean, I do normally, but so many little things in this chapter made me love him all over again :D . I liked his remaining insecurity even now the fear that she wanted you only because she didn’t understand some aspect of your personality, and the funny things that made him like Tonks like No where in your progress out of the school – or back into it, when you realized you’d forgotten your cloak. I was also very amused by When you set this date with your future wife, your choice in location was motivated by the safety in numbers instinct.

Now normally I just leave your typos and stuff alone, but I found this entertaining so am going to point out should have been an easy feet is the wrong feat :p .

I really really liked the scene where Remus is looking through Dumbledore's stuff see him in a way portraits never could. His belongings, his angled hand-writing and his silly but oddly profound statements all lived on in these documents, that just made me miss him :( . And the intro to the scene about boxes was fun lol. I wanted Tonks to love it though, and damn you and cliff hangers :p . Great chapter though! :)

Author's Response: LOL! Typos like that happen to me all the time :)

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Review #2, by DAC 

24th January 2007:
Ahh!! I need the next chapter son!

I really hope Tonks doesn't break Remus' heart. I might have to beat her with something if she does.

Simply Fabulous!

Next Please!


Author's Response: I know! I know! I'm sorry! I got to the end of that chapter, started 18 and all of a sudden my inspiration went ka-dunk! right down the tubes, but I'm back to working on it again, i swear!

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