Reading Reviews for Extempore, Chapter 16: Sixteen
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Review #1, by DAC 

17th January 2007:
OMG I'm so excited for the next chapter. But this one was suoub as always. I think I was upset as Lupin at the thought of Vertiserum on Harry. my only little (well I won't say complaint) thing is that there was not nearly enough Tonk/Lupin time in this chapter, However that is understandable.

17 Soon? PLEASE?

Again, Great Chapter...


Author's Response: I start to worry that I write too much of them. Being that the story is told from his perspective, it is feasable that he spends a lot of his time with Tonks but I'm trying to walk the fine line of making sure that he's not spending too much time with her, ya know? I'm awful and striking a balance and, as I near the closing point of the story (trust me, we're not that close) but it did seem like it was time to start tying up the plot a little bit :P

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