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Review #1, by PhoenixStorm 

18th July 2007:
*bounds back in* See, this is me catching up before you start updating lots to finish before the release, the queue is little, other stuff can wait, I want to catch up on this and don't plan to leave this chair until I am significantly closer to the end of what's up so far :D .

I like this chapter, it was fun, and while I'm not entirely sure anything happened plot-wise, I like the extra look at Remus and Tonks and it's good to see how they've developed. I liked how you had them both out together, and the distinction you made to how she is with him not and not just standing beside him. You still have little sentences and bits that portray the characters so well, especially Tonks even though it's not from her POV, like Weighed down by dozens of bags and parcels, she seemed to finally be heavy enough to keep her feet on the ground without sliding and It wasn’t that bad! I know I haven’t driven in a while but I still passed my exams. I can imagine it being easily within Tonks's character to drive badly, but mind you, at least she's passed her test, something I seem unlikely to do in the next decade :p .

Your least favorite part of the holidays was buying gifts I find this shocking :p . Gift shopping is the most fun kind of shopping!! I adore it, and while I am not made for the kind of all-day shopping trips half my friends seem to enjoy, if it was in the pursuit of matching presents to people, I'd last a lot longer :D . Wrapping them is also fun, so I reckon Remus deserved the situation he got himself into at the end ;) .

I think the thing I liked most about this chapter though, was Remus and Tonks's relationship. It's easy and comfortable and they laugh together “Are you picturing him in a lacy apron as well?” She nodded as you spoke and her giggle broke into an true, easy laugh, and you make it seem so right when you say things like but the comfort of simply having her around proved too much for simple fear to drown out. I just like that; it's not overstated, but just there :) .

Author's Response: lol, hey driving is hard!

I guess i always figured that gift buying would be most difficult for lupin because he would never have been able to afford the things he wanted to buy for people and when cost wasn't an issue, he would, at the very least, want to give them all something deeply meaningful to make up for his emotional ineptitudes and always end up feeling as though he fell short.

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Review #2, by Ydnas Odell 

28th December 2006:
It took me awhile to develope a taste for this story, most because the POV is alien to me and a lot of people are turned off intitally for whatever reason by 'You stories', but now I'm addicted to this and seeing how well you pull of this style inspired me to take a shot at the POV.

Anyway just want to tell you how wonderful this is.

Author's Response: *smods* I"m glad you like it! I'm always up for a new convert and I really like reviews ;)

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Review #3, by DAC 

27th December 2006:
Lovely as always. Perfect chappie for the holidays.

Hope your holidays are great,

This is fantastic!


Author's Response: Aww, thankies :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #4, by Leia Arletta 

27th December 2006:
Haha too bad it had to end there. What happens with the chair?? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter...

Author's Response: ;) But isn't it more fun not knowing? It is for me, anyway. Alas, I've not been particularly inspired to write. Nevertheless, thanks for the review!

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