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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Elf_ears13 

31st July 2007:
This is, I'd say, the best second person fic I've read. It sounds so natural coming from you, especially the line, It’s hard to phrase delicately a subject you feel so passionately about, but you try nonetheless. It sounds like "normal" writing (sorry if that's not the best way to put it =P), since there are some feelings so universal that you almost automatically revert to the second person (like that sentence ...). I really like the bitter stance that Kettleburn took, and so it was neat that in spite of that (or maybe because of it), Charlie still went into the profession.

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Review #2, by Potterholic 

10th July 2007:
Wow, that was brilliant! I really feel for Kettleburn, and I love how you did the second person POV. Great work! 10/10

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Review #3, by I_am_ever_so_Sirius 

29th May 2007:
The teache before Hagrid, right? It was such a touching story... poor Gormlath... :( 10/10

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Review #4, by Jessi_Rose 

21st October 2006:
Wow, Lena this story...wow! I think I'm about speechless! For a story that was written last minute, in a style that you're not used to and a character that is little known...you did it spectacularly! I love this story, so much! It's so powerful and... just wow. You really nailed second person and even more so with creating a believable character in Kettleburn. Great job, my dear!! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jessi! It was a bit scary and hard to finish, as you know... but I'm glad you think the 2nd person worked well. And that Kettleburn was realistic... I hoped it wouldn't be too overdramatic, with the dragons and stuff. Thanks again for the great review!!! ~Lena

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Review #5, by andharrywokeup 

13th October 2006:
Lena, this was a beautiful, heart-wrenching pieve of work. Very well done. I'm afraid there isn't much else I can think to say - just that this was insperational. The world can be changed by just a few dedicated people and we all need to remember that. :) Good job with the second person, also. 10/10! ~andy x x

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful review!!! I was a bit apprehensive about what people would think, especially because of the 2nd person thing... but I'm glad you liked it, and especially that you found it inspirational. ~Lena

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Review #6, by Mrs Insane One 

11th October 2006:
What a fantastic piece of writing! I don't read many fics that deal with the 2nd person POV, mostly because they aren't very well written, but you've done a fantastic job of it in this fic. In the end you've created a very moving story that delves into a part of the magical world that few people dare to go. Congrats on writing such a beautiful work of art - and yes, it is art. - Jenn

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the amazing review, Jenn! 2nd person was a challenge, but I'm glad you think it worked well for this, and that you liked the story in general. ~Lena

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