5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Potterholic 

10th December 2007:
Loved it! I really like how you conveyed her fear and how you opened and ended the chapter with the dream. The little Percy/Penelope moment was cute, even if it was brief. ^_^ Keep up the good work!

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Review #2, by Elf_ears13 

31st July 2007:
This was so haunting and cute - I loved that she thought of Hermione as a "little Gryffindor," since so often in the books we see the students only through the trio's eyes, and obviously a second-year would look little to a sixteen year old. Percy's line about being selfish was cute, since he didn't realize that he was being selfish by not considering Penelope's feelings. I really like this look at one of my favorite minor characters, as I think you gave her more realistic thoughts and emotions than I could.

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Review #3, by I_am_ever_so_Sirius 

29th May 2007:
Awesome chapter; really well written! Anyways, I was wondering, if I remember right, she wasn't attacked then... your idea or have I forgotten? 10/10

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Review #4, by andharrywokeup 

25th October 2006:
Really, really excellent. I think with the HP universe, we forget that there are some 'normal' (for lack of a better word) people who are not so swamped in adventure that they have time to hurt, and time to be affected by trauma. This was a really wonderful insight. I would say that canonly, Penelope would probably recognise Hermione, but having her not even knowing what year she was in really worked in this story. 10/10 ~ andy x :D

Author's Response: Yay, 10/10! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

I agree. Many minor characters are often forgotten in the books. But that is where the magic of fanfiction comes in!

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Review #5, by Jessi_Rose 

21st October 2006:
You did a wonderful job with Penelope! The fear you created within her was palpable... So well done! The last line was a powerful one, I think tied the fic together in a great way. 10/10! ^_^

Author's Response: I was having a lot of trouble with the ending so I'm glad you thought the last line was good. And, 10/10! Wow, thank you!

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