Reading Reviews for Extempore, Chapter 8: Eight
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Harriet T Cauldron 

17th January 2007:
There was a lot of philosophy type stuff in this chapter, very heavy. I liked it though.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Review #2, by mybabyblaze 

8th August 2006:
this story is so beautifully written. i love it so much! and your banner is absolutely gorgeous!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm always happy to have a new reader! ((Thanks for the compliments on the banner, by the way. I really enjoyed making it.))

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Review #3, by PhoenixStorm 

6th August 2006:
yay, look at that, you do have an update up! :D I also note that you haven't replied to that review mind :p . Anyway, as always, I loved the chapter, you just have a way of drawing a reader into a story and making them feel in the position of whichever character you're focusing on. It's all so real in your fics, and this chapter is no exception, you've taken Remus and explored him so well that it's easy to relate to what he's feeling and his reactions to the situations you put him in.

The beginning of this had me worried, but it was a great way to illustrate what Remus is dwelling on, and how acutely he can see Tonks being hurt or killed. You write the bond between them brilliantly, and everything you do write makes sense. Your characterisation of them both is also spot on.

I really liked the part in the meeting room, detailing the expressions of the others and drawing parallels to what Remus has experienced in the past. The part about how he no longer feels shocked or reacts the same is particularly striking, and I hope he manages to hold onto his humanity. But at least while he still has Tonks, I'm not so worried. I also really liked what Moody said, There's more to lose this time, it homed right in on the truth, and it fit very well in the atmosphere you'd created. Great chapter, I look forward to the next update :) .

Author's Response: See, I told you you were going to miss an update if you skipped off to do your thing :P I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, because it's all your fault that it exists. ALL YOUR FAULT! :P

I'm really hoping that the beginning had you worried because you were afraid Tonks was being throttled in a battle and not because it was poorly written or it sucked - but I figure you would've said something so I'm just going to let it go.

I hate you and this is all your fault.

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