13 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LunerEclpz 

23rd August 2007:
i really have to keep reading ... soo.. extra.. good. loved it. much... must ... read more!!

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Review #2, by andharrywokeup 

4th February 2007:
A wonderful beginning. You need to watch out for your tenses...you skip from past to present. Otherwise full of potential :) ~ Andy, reviewers circle on SAYS.

Author's Response: Ahh.. thank you. I will fix it. Thanks :D

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Review #3, by pisceandreams 

15th December 2006:
Great chapter. I'm not usually a Hermione and Ron fan having recently been converted to Hermione Draco, but I can't wait to read this story...or more of it anyways.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #4, by Pink_Princess12 

9th October 2006:
Wow, this story is very impressing! I mean really! The pictures add alot, but your writing is very powerful, and i can tell you have written before. Well on to the next chap. would you mind checking out one of my stories?

Author's Response: thanks heaps. Will do seeing yourve reviewed so much

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Review #5, by Rose 

1st September 2006:
Loved it so far! Off to the next chapter!

Author's Response: aww thanks! :)

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Review #6, by dance10191 

18th August 2006:
good writing i really enjoyed this chapter hope you write more soon

Author's Response: I hopefully will. thanks :)

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Review #7, by loony** 

17th August 2006:
keep on writing, I like it!

Author's Response: I will :P

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Review #8, by PhoenixTailAndHolly 

17th August 2006:
I liked the story, even though this chapter is more like a prelude. I liked the way you were able to give us a good starting point for your story. Please update regularly.

A side note: try not to get Ron too depressed. It'll make the readers depressed too. That said, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh I'm glad at least someone likes it. I will hopefully post one up by the end of tomorrow.

Yeah, but he's suppose to be isn't it, imagine the love of your life leaving your for years.

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Review #9, by HermioneG149 

17th August 2006:
Wow. I truly despise Ron/Hermione stories (and Ron himself), but this made me pity and feel for the guy. Maybe I'll grow to like the ship. *shrugs* Oh well. Hehe. I loved this! :D


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it even though you hated the ship. *smiles* it's my favourite ship *laughs*

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Review #10, by The5Potters 

16th August 2006:
Very good! I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #11, by DeathByMoonlight 

10th August 2006:
Awww....write more? Was really good!!

Author's Response: yeah, i'm going to soon. :)

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Review #12, by mary_hpfan 

8th August 2006:
that's so sad i meen how could hermione do such a thing =(
update soon plz =P

Author's Response: thanks... i know! and i will

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Review #13, by mrs_heather_grint 

8th August 2006:
Uhm. It's a pretty good start. Some spelling and grammar mistakes. Oh. In this sentence:: A 12 year old man rolled over and slowly opened his eyes to see the bright sun shining through the blinds. Did you mean 21? I think you did. Well, byee. Keep writing :].

Author's Response: i fixed that mistake and thank you

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