But but but but but but I don't want Draco to come baack! Report Review
This fic is good but the one thing that is seriously starting to annoy me is the amount of magic that you are making Juliette able to do, she would not be able to conjure her own breakfast or really do any of the things that you are making her do, she is 6 (or 7 cant rememer which) Report Review
Oh dear, now I'm worried how this story will end. You mentioned it having a surprising ending (in not an always good way), and this chapter has me guessing. Not even half-way through yet, but I'm still reduced to freaking out. :P Does that not suggest that perhaps your story has caught my greatest interest? Juliette is a wonderfully mysterious character. I don't know if it's because of her age, but she also seems much older than her years, understanding complex ideas and, at times, switching roles with Hermione. Sirius has indeed "seduced" both mother and daughter, but has Draco been so successful? Once again, this is excellent stuff, leaving me hungry to read more. If this is what you could write two years ago, I'd love to see what you can do now. ;) Report Review
oh no!! something bad is going to happen isnt it?! Please nothing to do with sirius dieing!! 9/10 for sirius leaving!! ='[Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review! Report Review
That was a fantastic chapter. Full of little things. Like the idea of sirius doing Julliets' pig tails in a rush, resulting in them being wonky. That made me laugh so much as I could picture it clearly, showing such detail you put in your stories. And the way you described what happened that morning through Julliet. And the comment Sirius made as he had his coffee. All brilliant moments. This chapter was full of them. Well done. Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! Report Review
will sirius disapear once the wish has been fullfilled? oh noAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
i hate that he's going after draco. and that stupid locket. when do we get to learn about it?Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
Aw... I think Draco will die or has already. But aw Sirius and aw Juliette...Author's Response: He's died already??? Oh, that's creepy. Report Review
Oh my. I have to go eat now, and I don't want to leave. But, I will... and then I will return promptly and finish what you've written thus far of this AMAZING story. Every single wonderful little bit of it- I'm in love with it!Author's Response: lol, thanks for reading it (don't starve yourself, now!) Report Review
Juliette amazes me. She's so on top of things and so adult like. then the next minute she's a regular kid again. It's like watching a real kid bouncing from one thing to the next. I love thatAuthor's Response: *hugs and kisses, my love* Report Review
aw.SIRIUS CANT GO AWAY! Damn Damn Damn Damn! Why does it need payment? Its unfair to take him away...atleast i hope it doesnt take Sirius away.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
aww, i love juliette, she is the cutest thing! and she's so brave! you did a really good job with her character, exactly harry and hermione's character mixed! great job! i don't know if i want hermione to end up with draco or with sirius! ahh, decisions decisions! great chapter!Author's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
haha...wow, what kid says "conjure" haha wow...Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
awww...he's a sweet heart!! he may be a dog in bed...in a good way of course...lol haha...literally but he's a gentlemen! lyl lylAuthor's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
I can't believe Sirius actually went after Draco willingly.. I hope they both come back ok...Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Aw. Okay, so don't kill Draco. I thrive on drama.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
the big question is, was he telling the truth or lying to her? either way you've made an interesting twist hereAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
It was nice to learn more about it and I loved seeing Sirius and Juliette interacting againAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
Awwwwwww....not to sure why I find that adorable ;)Author's Response: Thank you!!! Report Review
Like the chapters with JulietteAuthor's Response: Thank you!!! Report Review
Oooo, the plot thickens! So something has happened to Draco then? At first, I was sort of annoyed with Hermione to blame Sirius for not being more forceful. I mean, he DID tell her. Whew, glad she realized for herself that she was wrong for blaming him. I really think it says a lot about Sirius' character that he took off to rescue Draco. And also that he sat around long enough to have a cup of coffee, telling Remus he was too anxious. It was like...he cared, but he wanted to make a point that he didn't care THAT much. I dont know how to say what I'm thinking? I hope you're getting my drift, I know I'm hopeless. But really, I liked that about Sirius. And I thought it was funny that he knew what Hermione's reactions would be and told Juliette exactly how to handle it and what to tell her. Speaking of Juliette, that must be one talented girl. I forget how old she is now (ugh. Again, sorry for disappearing for a bit) but to be able to conjure her own breakfast??? Wow! And then there's Hermione, stubborn and determined to do it the Muggle way. The locket. I like how it actually gives your desires rather than just showing them like the mirror of Erised did. But I'm getting that horrible feeling again that when this ends, Sirius will not be around? It was a small comfort that he said the repayment assumed the wish was fulfilled. But then I remembered how just in the last review I mentioned how Hermione seemed to be happier. I guess I'll just have to wait and see.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
such a good story! its really believable and the plot is certainly juicy. more more!Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! Report Review
I hate that damn locket.Author's Response: Thank you bunches! Report Review
They were sweet at the beginning. Nice and almost married likeAuthor's Response: Thank you bunches! Report Review
Oh, that locket is sooo mysterious! I've rifled through your previous chapters for clues about it, and none of it looks good for Sirius. I hope you'll let us, your gentle readers, down easy -- my gloom-o-meter is going off right now. Ah, Draco. You've made me run the gamut of emotions for him, haven't you! Now, I don't know WHAT to think. At least they know where he is right now. We shall see! BTW, you write mysteries really, really well. You have a really fine sense of timing, drama, and intrigue. It's a treat to read.Author's Response: Poor, Sirius. Not looking good for him, is it? *sobs* I'm glad you are bouncing around with Draco-that's exactly what I wanted! Thanks for the great reviews! Report Review
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