16 Reviews Found

Review #1, by sinwillys822 

16th July 2009:
oh boy looks like harry has another prophecy to deal with.

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Review #2, by choir_monkey 

19th November 2007:
great great chappie
and man oh man is harry in T.R.O.U.B.L.E
gosh
xoxo

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Review #3, by greendayrocks 

27th December 2006:
btw why isnt there a portarit of dumbledore? surely there would be and maybe this could be used in other stories

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Review #4, by RemusBlack 

24th June 2006:
“Do I really need one?” Harry asked in surprise. (invitation)
Where did "I want to be treated like everybody else" go?

But very, very good!!!

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Review #5, by sheri 

22nd June 2006:
is the prophecy REALLY referring to harry??? seriously? or is that supposed to be a twist?

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Review #6, by Beowulf 

12th May 2006:
"Tardification"! Ha, you realy are good at that, however following that logic the party could go on ad infinitum as it would be separate in all 4 dimensions hence "time and relative dimension". Oops, as boring as Harry there, really should learn to keep my mouth shut. Anyway really good background, all those little things add to the realism of the piece. Great stuff.

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Review #7, by Jatkinso3546 

30th January 2006:
Excellent chapter! Keep up the fabulous work! jac

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Review #8, by Judyl 

26th January 2006:
I love the way you braid in more and more threads to the plot, leaving oh! so many possible outcomes. You keep us thinking between chapters. Thanks again for sharing your talent with us. Perhaps you'd wish to change the word expect to except in the part where Harry is talking to Shacklebolt.... typo, I'm sure. Sorry to nit-pick. Judy Lorantos

Author's Response: Thanks for the quick beta. Here's hoping I haven't overreached on the macramé.

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Review #9, by Tash 

25th January 2006:
Great Chapter not another one is the poor boy ever going to have a normal life

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Review #10, by Katerina 

25th January 2006:
I have read all your stories thusfar and have waited to review because I loved them all. You are quite talanted, especially in the area concerning Snape. I find myself actually liking the guy. I cannot wait for you to keep posting, and keep up the good work.

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Review #11, by Beth 

25th January 2006:
Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you , thank you!! Perfect timing, pace, energy, and more Snape and Lupin--just enought information to keep us all at the edge of our computers, as though we haven't been here for the last three weeks anyway. If the next chapters are all this good, take your time!! Excellent!

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Review #12, by Kimera 

25th January 2006:
According to C.S. Lewis, when someone completes an extremely difficult task, the reward is not praise but to have another, even more difficult task placed before you to do. I guess that's what makes a hero, huh? Long live Harry Potter.

Author's Response: Haven't read him since I was 10, but that does sound like one of those universal truths, at least of hero mythology.

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Review #13, by terralynn 

24th January 2006:
Ooooh, another prophesy. Poor Harry. Kind of exciting though! :) There are a couple of instances in this chapter where you left out a word: "“Mr. VanEschelon, WHAT are doing out?” Snape demanded" is one of them, and I think there's one involving Ginny somewhere near the end... I only mention it because you generally do a fabulous job, so these just stood out a bit more than they would in a fic that wasn't so well written. I'm excited to find out what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Hm, thanks. Wonder if my html Save As ate some things...

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Review #14, by DUMBELDAVE 

24th January 2006:
Wow excellent chapter, Another Prophecy . . Oh Boy DAVE

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Review #15, by Sailor C 

24th January 2006:
As always, wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what becomes of the Prophecy, and how the Dueling Competition will turn out. Great work, and I'm looking forward to the update!

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Review #16, by micking 

24th January 2006:
glad to have you back. I will read this chapter and get back with you. Hope the hurricane spared your family.

Author's Response: Fortunately I don't live where they hit, so we are quite spared and where we visited was in remarkably good shape, considering.

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