oh boy looks like harry has another prophecy to deal with. Report Review
great great chappie and man oh man is harry in T.R.O.U.B.L.E gosh xoxo Report Review
btw why isnt there a portarit of dumbledore? surely there would be and maybe this could be used in other stories Report Review
“Do I really need one?” Harry asked in surprise. (invitation) Where did "I want to be treated like everybody else" go? But very, very good!!! Report Review
is the prophecy REALLY referring to harry??? seriously? or is that supposed to be a twist? Report Review
"Tardification"! Ha, you realy are good at that, however following that logic the party could go on ad infinitum as it would be separate in all 4 dimensions hence "time and relative dimension". Oops, as boring as Harry there, really should learn to keep my mouth shut. Anyway really good background, all those little things add to the realism of the piece. Great stuff. Report Review
Excellent chapter! Keep up the fabulous work! jac Report Review
I love the way you braid in more and more threads to the plot, leaving oh! so many possible outcomes. You keep us thinking between chapters. Thanks again for sharing your talent with us. Perhaps you'd wish to change the word expect to except in the part where Harry is talking to Shacklebolt.... typo, I'm sure. Sorry to nit-pick. Judy Lorantos Author's Response: Thanks for the quick beta. Here's hoping I haven't overreached on the macramé. Report Review
Great Chapter not another one is the poor boy ever going to have a normal life Report Review
I have read all your stories thusfar and have waited to review because I loved them all. You are quite talanted, especially in the area concerning Snape. I find myself actually liking the guy. I cannot wait for you to keep posting, and keep up the good work. Report Review
Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you , thank you!! Perfect timing, pace, energy, and more Snape and Lupin--just enought information to keep us all at the edge of our computers, as though we haven't been here for the last three weeks anyway. If the next chapters are all this good, take your time!! Excellent! Report Review
According to C.S. Lewis, when someone completes an extremely difficult task, the reward is not praise but to have another, even more difficult task placed before you to do. I guess that's what makes a hero, huh? Long live Harry Potter.Author's Response: Haven't read him since I was 10, but that does sound like one of those universal truths, at least of hero mythology. Report Review
Ooooh, another prophesy. Poor Harry. Kind of exciting though! :) There are a couple of instances in this chapter where you left out a word: "“Mr. VanEschelon, WHAT are doing out?” Snape demanded" is one of them, and I think there's one involving Ginny somewhere near the end... I only mention it because you generally do a fabulous job, so these just stood out a bit more than they would in a fic that wasn't so well written. I'm excited to find out what happens next. :) Author's Response: Hm, thanks. Wonder if my html Save As ate some things... Report Review
Wow excellent chapter, Another Prophecy . . Oh Boy DAVE Report Review
As always, wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what becomes of the Prophecy, and how the Dueling Competition will turn out. Great work, and I'm looking forward to the update! Report Review
glad to have you back. I will read this chapter and get back with you. Hope the hurricane spared your family.Author's Response: Fortunately I don't live where they hit, so we are quite spared and where we visited was in remarkably good shape, considering. Report Review
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