Reading Reviews for Extempore, Chapter 5: Five
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Review #1, by Harriet T Cauldron 

17th January 2007:
My God! Ryle #5 for apparating made me laugh so hard, my brother thought I was having a ceizure. Though my brother is the epileptic one, so he really doesn't know what having a ceizure looks like. Trust me, the person doesn't look like they're laughing. Anyway, i'm moving on to read the next chapter because I seriously need to know what Tonks says. 10/10

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

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Review #2, by PhoenixStorm 

13th October 2005:
ooo, now this was an amazing chapter. I'm really enjoying reading this story. This part I especially like: "Just pretend, for a moment, that you love me enough to forget that you’re a werewolf who’s a few years older than me. Pretend that none of it matters to you as much as it doesn’t matter to me..." clever. very clever. I very much admire your Tonks. Remus is an idiot to not listen to her, really. I can't wait to read the next chapter (which is already posted!), so I think i'll go do that now. Not a very long review, but I want to go rea dmore :D

Author's Response: Hey, that's a better reason than any to leave a short review :) I'm glad you like this!

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Review #3, by ivoryangel 

3rd October 2005:
great job with this one too. remus being drunk--there is something i thought i would never see! it was pretty hilarious, however, and i loved how you wrote it! can't wait for the next! (although that will probably be in around a month...)

Author's Response: Hey, even the best of men have bad days that end in drinking once in a while. He has a hard life. People fall back on bad things when life is cruel.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #4, by Paloma Patil 

24th September 2005:
Thrrrreee...that's hilarious! Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by timeturner 

19th September 2005:
I have to say your descriptions grow better and better with each piece of work I read of yours. The opening paragraph was briliant, the imagery just seeping through the sentences. I especially liked the hot wax running down your back line...that's one of those things difficult to describe and you did an amazing job at pinpointing it accurately. It seemed to end rather abruptly which caught me off guard. It didn't seem like a cliffhanger nor a just seemed more like you were tired of writing. Excellent work as always, girlfriend. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: See, I was going for despondancy, there. I actually wrote all of these chapters together and cut them up after the fact. Oh, well. I tried :)

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Review #6, by NicksGrl89 

18th September 2005:
good chappie

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #7, by crystal allan 

18th September 2005:
You have such a beautiful writing style, have I told you that already? I don’t think I have. And, no, that is not merely hollow praise. You really have a way of describing things in such an uniquely refined manner, and I’ll admit to being thoroughly jealous ; ) Your portrayal of Remus and Tonks is just wonderful – personally, I think you might do their characters more justice than J.K. Rowling.

Author's Response: New Rule: Do not attempt to respond to some of the most flattering rules you've ever gotten in one night.

Seriously, you have no idea how much I appreciate the read and the praise. You're coming very highly reccomended these days, yourself :)

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