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55 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FenrirGreyback 

21st October 2013:
I really like the way you 'paint the picture' so far, I'm hooked...

*FenrirGreyback

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by Prongs1981 

30th January 2013:
Oh goodness! That was pretty intense! Okay, well I'm going to keep reading now. :)

Author's Response: That's good news. Hope you enjoy the rest! :)

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Review #3, by luna8614 

1st September 2012:
very touching chapter. I cried at the end.

Author's Response: Awww :( Glad you liked it!

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Review #4, by Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever 

12th July 2012:
That was really good, but sad as well! I wish that this was actually true!!!(: (10/10)

~Number_One_Ravenclaw_Forever

Author's Response: Aww really? haha

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Review #5, by Opalpixiechick 

16th May 2012:
Love ur story so far. I can't wait to see what happens to him. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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Review #6, by AgentMuffin 

7th August 2011:
Nice writing, very decriptive and good character personality's.are you a writer or just really into the series. over all very intresting hook.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) I do write in my spare time but I don't have anything published (yet! haha) I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far.

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Review #7, by ilovedobby 

19th July 2011:
YOUR STORY IS SO AMAZING! I LOVE IT! YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE TO JK ROWLING AND ASK TO GET IT PUBLISHED BECAUSE IT'S SO GOOD!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm not sure it's quite on that level, though haha

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Review #8, by welshgirl 

12th June 2011:
wow this is amazing, no wonder you got a dobby!!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you :)

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Review #9, by YouHadMeAtHogwarts 

18th January 2011:
Lovely start... Cant wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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Review #10, by schoenberg12 

21st October 2010:
this is awesome! ilove the ideas in this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it :)

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Review #11, by strawberrydarhling 

18th June 2010:
Oh... that was so sweet, yet so sad...

Well done with this, you've done a great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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Review #12, by morjin 

31st May 2010:
hmm.. interesting, I'm intrigued about the finding four so I look forward to reading more.. I just don't know if Mavis and Martha are appropriate names for women living hundreds (or like you say thousands) of years ago.. plus how would they know it's 3am? They didn't have clocks back then lol Anyways, I will keep reading, it still seems like a promising story!

Author's Response: Much of this story isn't based in solid fact, i'm afraid. I don't write it to be perfect, it's just for fun. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, though :)

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Review #13, by SusieBones 

7th April 2010:
this is really good! i can see why it won a Dobby!

Author's Response: Aww thank you :)

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Review #14, by dark_magic_master91 

4th April 2010:
I liked this chapter. hmm...I cant wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Sadly, though, i'm not sure that this story will continue anymore. It's quite tricky to find the time... :(

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Review #15, by treacle_tart107 

27th September 2009:
I really like how this chapter starts, especially the description you use. To be honest, i actually thought the woman was going to be either Rowena's mother or Salazar's mother. Either way, Godric still fits in perfectly! I also like the way you portrait the characters and the way they talk. It makes the story come to life.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you think so. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, should you read on! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #16, by i love you sort of 

4th August 2009:
whoa! dramatic enterance!

Author's Response: yes indeed lol

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Review #17, by Litluver12 

27th July 2009:
WOW!! This is amazing, I love the idea of the way Godric Gryffindor was born... Great Job! 100/10 -Litluver12 ;)

Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you like it :)

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Review #18, by rowenaravenclaw94 

23rd January 2009:
how very oliver twist. good job! 10/10! godric is such a great name!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: Yes, i suppose it is haha Thanks for your review! :)

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Review #19, by Frogprincess 

8th January 2009:
great job, good description with the climb up the hill. makes me want to read more about Godric, see what does happen to him.

Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you're hungry for more! :D enjoy the rest!

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Review #20, by rjorrin88 

30th October 2008:
great start already hooked

Author's Response: Ooh, glad to hear it :)

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Review #21, by WeasleyTwins 

2nd June 2008:
This is an absolutely wonderful start to a story. Amazing writing. Intriguing, really. *Hurriedly finishes so as to start reading the next chapter.*

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you like it :)

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Review #22, by Karindi 

27th May 2008:
Wow, good beginning. I love it, like mucho. The beginning reminds me of a movie, can't remember the name... this is going to be a very exciting story, I can tell. but who is this mysterious mother? (the dead one) Very well written.

Author's Response: thank you. i can promise you a lot of excitement and adventure in this story. Thanks for reviewing! :)

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Review #23, by Jacqueline Noir 

24th May 2008:
What a nice start for the story! But, thinking at Lord Voldemort's history I expected Salazar to be Rona's Child. But Godric is also good. I like his appereance though...
Good start!

Author's Response: No, you'll see how it all fits much later on :) Thanks for your review!

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Review #24, by AussieAnatomy627 

12th January 2008:
That's so sad that his mother died! If it was a rich family and if his last name really is Gryffindor, wouldn't they recognize it?

Author's Response: You'll find out a little more about this further on in the story...

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Review #25, by violetriddle 

3rd January 2008:
aww thata sad adn this is good

Author's Response: Thank you

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