{reviewid: 2221867, reviewer: 'CrazyPurpleBat'}
21st September 2009:
I really like it but I gotta say I'm more of a fan of Harry/Ginny pairing. But this has been my favorite pairing of Harry that was not with Ginny! Rayne is a really cool character great job!
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{reviewid: 1348795, reviewer: 'mioneronweasly'}
20th March 2007:
very good chap!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1089105, reviewer: 'Izzieluv'}
2nd August 2006:
Okay, this is good, and i hope beyond hope hermione's parents are there, and a backyard wedding would be cuter but hogwarts is cool to
Author's Response: No sorry their not at the wedding. I like a Hogwarts wedding over a backyard wedding. Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1060166, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
13th July 2006:
I hope they do forgive her!
Author's Response: They might, or they might not.
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{reviewid: 832168, reviewer: 'HPsmartone32'}
29th December 2005:
okay.. i'm stupid.. i thought that i read them all... but i hadn't.. so i'm re reading this one (AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!) and then reading the others.. then when i get to the 8th.. i'll poke you for more!! hehe!! AWESOME story... really really!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 710121, reviewer: 'Rozanne'}
26th September 2005:
oooh update updaaaaate! I really like plz carry on as you are doing so well. You're not so horrid at updating- you're fine.
Author's Response: Haha thanks anyway - but yes I am horrid at updating! I am planning to update ASAP when I get my computer back, which I discovered yesterday I am not getting back this thursday like I was supposed to. But now it's going to be another week because they shipped my laptop to Toronto without telling me! GRRR!! I promise I will update ASAP!
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{reviewid: 696381, reviewer: 'soxykata'}
16th September 2005:
Wow. I move to a different town, five hours away, befor you updated.
Author's Response: Thats wonderful. Read the A/N in the latest chapter before you run your mouth about these things
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{reviewid: 682993, reviewer: 'HPsmartone32'}
5th September 2005:
okay well please try to update SOOOON
Author's Response: will try
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{reviewid: 680293, reviewer: 'eaglesrule_ravenclaw4eva1155'}
3rd September 2005:
omg, plz update ur on ma faves so i can keep checkin 2 see if uve updated!! I luv it!!
Author's Response: I left a new AN at the end of chapter six. Check it out to see whats keeping me from posting the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 662725, reviewer: 'sabrinapotter1'}
23rd August 2005:
wow thats gd i do hope hermiones parents forgive her!!!!!!!!!! cant wait for chapter 7
Author's Response: Soon
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{reviewid: 659917, reviewer: 'soxykata'}
21st August 2005:
Oh, I don't mean to be rude or anything, but this is taking a really long time. Just set aside a good half-hour and write. Or if you have a bunch of school or something, just put ten or five munites into it each day and then post what you have after five days. Thats all you need!
Author's Response: It's ok. No I am not in school I actually do have alot of time on my hands at the moment. But I have writers block. I took a break from trying to write it because that usually helps. But I will try again tonight. Also I did have a good intro I liked to the next chapter but my comp mess up and it got deleted!! Grrr.
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{reviewid: 644333, reviewer: 'Ron_Luver6'}
12th August 2005:
Amazing!! I LOVE it please update!!! please please please :)
Author's Response: you know I suck...but will do soon
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{reviewid: 639141, reviewer: 'katieweasley'}
10th August 2005:
i LOVE :p its my favorit
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 595758, reviewer: 'lolaweasley'}
15th July 2005:
hello, i like ur story!! it's a bit sad that ron and hermione are going thru such a tough time but it's great! are u gonna be updating anytime soon?! i'll keep checking in! good job!
Author's Response: I just wanna finish HBP...then I will start writing again!
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{reviewid: 585741, reviewer: 'scabbers_weasly'}
9th July 2005:
Wow!!! Another brilliant chapter! How can you leave it with a cliffie like that?? You must update soon, please!! I have to know what happens next! Good luck with your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I really really want to update ASAP but work is taking up all my time!!! UGH!!! I have a few days off next week so I will hopefully be able to write then.
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{reviewid: 578553, reviewer: 'hpchick13'}
5th July 2005:
Awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I plan on it :)
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{reviewid: 578295, reviewer: 'Anakin%20Skywalker%20Fan'}
4th July 2005:
Please update sooon. Awesome chapter btw
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 576924, reviewer: 'HPsmartone32'}
4th July 2005:
I have a quick question......is harry's girlfriends name pronounced like 'rain' or 'ryan' ?
Author's Response: Its pronounced Rain
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{reviewid: 576182, reviewer: 'firebolt15892'}
3rd July 2005:
holy $hit that's a long chapter! finally u wrote!!!! i was beginning to think u gave up on this story. well good job!!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks! No I wouldn't give up on it!
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{reviewid: 575405, reviewer: 'HP%20Hobbit'}
3rd July 2005:
I LOVE IT!!! You are very good at writing this story, you really should keep writing when you get the chance! :P
Author's Response: Thanks I will
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{reviewid: 572216, reviewer: 'Korey'}
30th June 2005:
I love this story beyond well-a lot-.Although, I would really like you to update Only Second Best. SOrry if I'm rushing you, also, if you like Draco/Ginny fics would you mind r/r my fic? Thanks. -Korey
Author's Response: Thanks!
Yes, I have been meaning to update "Only Second Best" I will do it soon.
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{reviewid: 571787, reviewer: 'redheadwizard'}
30th June 2005:
awww good chapter. they are all becoming one big family! update asap!
Author's Response: Lol Thanks
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{reviewid: 571075, reviewer: 'soxykata'}
30th June 2005:
Finaly >.<
Author's Response: Yup
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{reviewid: 570776, reviewer: 'iloveronaldweasley13'}
29th June 2005:
I love the plot line for this story. I have a soft spot for all Ron/Hermione stories, and ones with good plots like this take the cake.
However, (I terribly hope I'm not sounding rude or too critical!) I've spotted typos, mispellings, some cases of bad grammar, among other things. Also, a few things: I think the story would be far greater if you took the time to describe things a bit more; the story doesn't seem to flow in certain areas, because it seems 'choppy' in a sense. Some phrases within sentences could be worded differently (and in a more understandable and better way). Other than those little things, I absolutely LOVE the story! Thanks for writing up a great read. ;)
Once again: I terribly, TERRIBLY hope that I didn't upset you or anything. After reading through this, I realised it sounded rather rude, but that's not my intention at all! I'm really sorry if it sounds as if I'm being mean, or too critical...I don't mean to sound that way! :(
Author's Response: Hey Thanks for the review. I didn't find this rude. I like to hear peoples opinions. :)
I know that this story isn't the best written, and too be honest I kind of do that on purpose. When I started this story I was new to writing so I don't feel I was very good. I feel I have improved alot and I think it shows in some of my other stories more. So I don't put the same effort in this as I do the others. I hope that makes sense...:P But I know I could go into more detail like tell you what the characters are thinking more. I think I do a pretty good job at discribing. Maybe I could step it up a notch.
As for grammar and spelling. Well I just totally suck at it. I am hoping I am getting better. Thanks for the great review!! =D
-Justine
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{reviewid: 570551, reviewer: 'Houlestar'}
29th June 2005:
I'm taking the time to review. Please update it sooner this time.
Author's Response: ...
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