{reviewid: 2360070, reviewer: 'patchworkscribbles'}
11th June 2010:
I loved every single piece of this chapter. Actually. It was perfect.
-Patch x
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{reviewid: 2347774, reviewer: 'nikka'}
16th May 2010:
Great chapter. Hermione and Ron's voices were very accurate for what you would expect given the circumsances. I am not a huge fan of this ship, unless it's next generation, but I am enjoying it thus far. :)
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{reviewid: 2096057, reviewer: 'RandomRyter'}
13th April 2009:
""Accio Cow""
Alright, I have to admit that when I read this I really thought Miranda would come flying into the scene. Oh well.
And I never knew Hermione's B-day was September 19th! That's my birthday! Nice chapter, by the way.
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{reviewid: 1936860, reviewer: 'kendra_dumbledore'}
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30th May 2008:
really good story cant wait to keep reading
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{reviewid: 1919550, reviewer: 'Monica'}
10th May 2008:
Ron ♥ Hermione...he just doesn't want to admit it to old, stink-head Miranda! I'm glad that you knew about the whole Hermione being 15 thing. Most people I know get it totally wrong.
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{reviewid: 1918291, reviewer: 'Amy_SeverusLily'}
9th May 2008:
Wow! Awsome story so far!! i LOVE IT. I detest Miranda (reminds me of a young Umbrdige!!). Cna't wait to read nxt chapter!!!
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{reviewid: 1901147, reviewer: 'rachel_evans_potter'}
20th April 2008:
she ruined the moment of love!
NOO!!!
already i hate her
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{reviewid: 1896845, reviewer: 'nika'}
16th April 2008:
I LOVE IT! haha ive forgotten to comment a few times coz i was so interested. i cant wait to see what happens next. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! :D
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{reviewid: 1873123, reviewer: 'quidditch77'}
23rd March 2008:
WOW. Best chapter yet. The way that Hermione and Ron were looking at each other toward the end was beautiful.
I loved these three lines:
("Hello, how are my girls doing?" he asked, smiling slightly and feeling very nervous.)
(She has worry line on her forehead; it crinkles like a cute smile. Her eyes hold more wisdom, which isn't surprising.
How can someone become more beautiful in such a short space of time?)-She thinks she's gotten more ugly but Ron thinks she's even more beautiful. I love it.
(Though, when she looked into his beautiful blue eyes she could still see the little boy on the train, who had dirt on his nose. )
Well done.
-quidditch77
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{reviewid: 1848053, reviewer: 'Karindi'}
29th February 2008:
Aww, I wish that 'Mione had told Ron and he'd transferred to that school in england 'cuz then that stupid Miranda-bitch be there. Cutie-pie Hannah. Ooo, Ron thinks Hermione is beatiful. That's great. *grinning* Poor Ron he missed out on some of the biggest things a father DON'T want to miss. Anyway, a great chapter, you rock. And keep up the great work.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1822874, reviewer: 'marisalovesharry'}
8th February 2008:
Of'course any one would.
Ron and Hermonie belong together you know.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1782562, reviewer: 'PheeTheBee'}
7th January 2008:
aw its so cute (:
this is really good =D
my fave fan fic as of now
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{reviewid: 1735613, reviewer: 'slytherensangel26'}
2nd December 2007:
awwe that was so sweet. hope they get rid of the Miranda soon!
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{reviewid: 1689867, reviewer: 'jenkent'}
29th October 2007:
Good chapter! Great job on the Ron and Hermione holding Hannah scene.
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{reviewid: 1685703, reviewer: 'xXmalfoysgirl4everXx'}
26th October 2007:
I really didn't care about all that stuff...the story is rather good in my opinion. Ron and Hermione better end up together!
Miranda needs to exit the picture.
10/10
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{reviewid: 1667715, reviewer: 'InnocentBeginning'}
14th October 2007:
That was a very emotional chepter - loved it.
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{reviewid: 1641277, reviewer: 'Dobby7'}
23rd September 2007:
It was such a beautiful scene until the end when stupid Miranda called "Ronald" into the house. I'm no longer angry with Ron, but instead Miranda. GREAT STORY!
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{reviewid: 1637847, reviewer: 'RIP%20FRED'}
20th September 2007:
amazingamazingamazing.
sad, but amazing nonetheless.
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{reviewid: 1597240, reviewer: 'mysticalshadows'}
26th August 2007:
didnt he have brown eyes before?? lol 'love-square'
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{reviewid: 1438930, reviewer: 'T%20vivacious'}
30th May 2007:
Brilliant chapter! I love the family moment broken by the "woman". The arguement was really good too, it was valid on both sides
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{reviewid: 1434075, reviewer: 'roshy'}
27th May 2007:
they are getting closer just give them a few day . i hope
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{reviewid: 1432232, reviewer: 'QUEEN'}
25th May 2007:
I LOVE IT BUT YOU HAVE TO FIX Ron looked over at Hannah, who was happily playing with her toy; he then turned back to Hermione. "Yeah I do," he said, his face flushed red. " 'Does Lockhart ring any bells?' "
At this comment, Hermione's cheeks tinged pink. "I was twelve, what do you expect?" she asked, her gaze falling. SHE WOULD HAVE ACUTALLY HAVE BEEN 13 IN THE 2ND BOOK (REDO YOUR MATH THERE)
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{reviewid: 1420142, reviewer: 'SlytherinsFeather'}
16th May 2007:
awww, nice, excuse my saying, but mirandas a bitch lol
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{reviewid: 1408835, reviewer: 'HermyJane'}
7th May 2007:
Wow.I was almost in tears when Hannah said "Daddy". I just want Miranda to GO AWAY! This story is one of the most touching fics I've ever read; it evokes such strong emotions.
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{reviewid: 1403320, reviewer: 'hermione_granger_15'}
2nd May 2007:
i hope to see hermione and ron get closer and get back together. i also want ginny and harry to get it on. heh.
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