Reading Reviews From Member: utkari02
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Review #1, by utkari02A Sneeze and a Kiss: Being ill

7th March 2007:
Very very cute!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you very much!

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Review #2, by utkari02I Hate: I Hate How It's Cold

21st February 2007:
Who is it???

This was great, I just want to know who it is! Is it Ginny? Is it Ron? Is it an OC??? I'm dying to know!

Good imagery, a bit hard to read at times, but got through it alright.

Tell me who it is!!! :P


Author's Response: aw thanks your review was so nice. and to tell you she was an OC. And if you could tell me how it was hard to get thought that would help me improve as a writer.
Thanks again!

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Review #3, by utkari02Frozen Hearts: Rubble n\' Pop

7th February 2007:
Hey Steve. I know it's been a long time since you've updated. (a really long time) but was wondering if you still have this story in you just busting to get out? If so, I'll definately be here to read it! I great enjoyed your others as well!

Best of luck!

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Review #4, by utkari02Congratulations: We would like to welcome you to the wedding of Hermione Granger and...

3rd February 2007:
Oh, come on, you have to resolve that! No Ron, I don't really love you, it's been Harry all along. hehe, I'll keep watching!

Author's Response: I wish!! But, I'm sad to say, I really don't know how I could....

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Review #5, by utkari02Love before Death.: Awards and Honours.

2nd February 2007:
Well, I finally made it through the story. It was fun to read, but every single one of your characters were completely out of character. And I know that's fine and all, I was just pointing it out. I mean, could you have made the girls seem any more helpless? And what was with all the kissing? I'm sorry, it just didn't seem plausable at all. But I suppose it's the writers perogative. It seemed way too fast paced, and rather choppy, but I can't really say that I would have wanted to read any more of it. Wow, that sounded a bit harsh, but I didn't mean it in that way. I'm not trying to be rude, but you seriously should have gotten a beta. Anyhow, wishing you the best of luck in all your future fics.


Author's Response: Thanks. However, I would like to defend myself on saying that this story was my first and I had no idea what to write and how to do it. I just rushed it because of the actual feedback I was getting and still do. Anyway, if you wish to view my changes, read my newer plot. That is greatly improved I think. Harry Potter and The Four Heirs needs a little work on it, but it is okay. This story and its sequal WILL be rewritten to my new and better writing style.

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Review #6, by utkari02:

29th January 2007:
Wow, great chapter! I'm not a big fan of Ron, so I'm kind of glad that you made his character rather shallow in the dreams. haha. And I'm liking how you're portraying Draco so far as well.

Can't wait to read more!

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Review #7, by utkari02:

29th January 2007:
Hi neiva!

This is fabulous! This is my first story I'm reading on HPFF. I'm a big H/Hr Shipper, and did a search, and on the first page of results, yours was the only one that sounded interesting. I'm glad I decided to read it! I'm looking forward to finding out how this tale unfolds!


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