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Review #1, by heliopathDancing In The Rain: Fearless

16th August 2012:
Aw, I really enjoyed reading this. I loved your description and your characterisation of Andromeda- as the other reviewer said, it felt very believable. Well done :)

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Review #2, by heliopathThe Black Family in Seven Parts: The Black Family in Seven Parts

16th August 2012:
Wow.
This deserves so many more views.
I absolutely love this story- well, these stories. You made each of them incredibly moving in their own way; well done for choosing to write about the lesser-remembered members of the Black family. I always appreciate stories that are respectful of canon, and this is an especially good example of how to do that while still making the story your own. In the short spaces that you gave yourself you managed to give each of the characters described an individual personality that felt very real and believable to me- I especially loved your portrayal of Alphard at the end.
Excuse me gushing, but yes.
Well done. :)

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Review #3, by heliopathWhen Perseus Met Andromeda: When Perseus Met Andromeda

18th September 2011:
I love this interpretation of how Ted first becomes interested in Andromeda. ^_^ A lot of it I would never have thought of, such as Ted's crush on Bellatrix, but you make it completely believable and the characterisation is great. I especially like the little corner where all the elite Slytherins go- that is so completely what happens at high school! Your writing style is also really enjoyable, you describe everything in detail but not so that it seems overdone, as is often the case. Favourited!

Author's Response: I've never read one before - at least, not from his perspective - so I thought, why not? As for Ted's previous crush, I kinda put it in on a whim, to spice things up a little. Also, it fitted better, I thought, character-wise. The Slytherin elite corner is actually a mockery of my own school, where that happens so I'm glad it's more common than I thought! Well, not really, but you know what I mean ;)

Thanks for the compliments and for dropping by!
Aph xx


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Review #4, by heliopathStupid: Stupid Secrets: #19-20

16th September 2011:
*happy sigh*
I was feeling a little down today, and this was the perfect thing for me to find to buoy up my mood again. I loved this chapter- it's possibly one of my favourites. While I find the idea of 11 year old James thinking about soulmates a little odd, you made me believe in it. And I totally love your portrayal of Sirius here.

Author's Response: awww you just made MY day a whole lot better :) so glad you liked the chapter! I'm so glad I made you believe!!
thanks so much for reviewing!
~EBP


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Review #5, by heliopathStupid: Stupid Secrets: #16-18

12th September 2011:
Alright, this is unfair. HOW DARE YOU NOT HAVE ALREADY PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER?!? I am on tenterhooks! Gah! Oh poor Lily... I know that all will be well, but still, she's been left hanging at a rather awful moment.

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing- and I'm sorry!! I had to do it sometime, didn't I? they'll be more soon, I promise :D
~EBP


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Review #6, by heliopathTo Think: To Think

21st August 2011:
Oh... my...
I wasn't really sure what to expect when I started reading this, but great job. This is wonderfully written, and really, really moving. I was especially touched by the James & Harry section. 10/10.

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Review #7, by heliopathA Beauty All My Own: No More Secrets

5th January 2008:
:D you finished it! thankyou so much! as i predicted, happy ending (yay!!!) and i don't think it could have been better.

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