Can't say I liked this chapter that much. Lot of spelling errors to start it off. And you added a halloween holidays, which takes away the big halloween feast at the castle, something which i always enjoy reading in the real books. and everyone's reactions were actually a disappointment. I was hoping for so much more, it seemed to end way too quickly and they didn't really do anything but ron and that quick chokehold. so this chapter fell far short of my expectations and i had high hopes for this one. sorry that i insulted it pretty good but that IS what these chapter reviews are for, so the readers can give their opinions.

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Sheesh, why does the fat lady keep changing the passwords, that's got to be annoying for everyone. and i liked the last paragraph, when harry say "maybe...i'm pregnant?" and he's right, they can phrase it or try to explain it anyway they want, it won't change everyone's reaction, lmao, which i'm looking forward to seeing.

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Yup, thought that was going to happen when I finished reading the last chapter. Lmao, I bet this will set a Hogwarts record for amount of gossip once it gets out. And I guarantee it won't take long for a few peole to find out and spread it throughout the whole school. I'm really want to see Harry's and Ron's reaction to the whole thing, gonna be so great.

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I'm sure others have told you that boys can't get into the girls dorm so I won't bother. But regardless it was hillarious, lmao. Ron probably got more steamed in this chapter than in any fan fiction i've ever read, and i LOVED IT. i absolutely love it when sparks fly. I sure hope that the rest of the story is this good.

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AH HA HA HA HA HA, LOVED THE ENDING. Just the thing I was waiting for, when Ron found out and erupted like a volcano. I was praying that sparks would fly and boy did they fly. Great chapter, best one so far.

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Wait, when Seamus says that last bit to Harry and Ginny does he already know, or was he just acting on a hunch? When I read that I thought "maybe everyone already found out but they just don't know yet" but I guess I'll find out soon enough. And seeing as you've used multiple Taylor Swift songs so far you must be a pretty big fan. My little sister is too, you'd probably get along pretty good. And I particularly enjoyed their shouting match when harry and ginny came back from the "library" lmao. if it was me i would have grabbed a bag of popcorn and can of mt. dew, sat on the couch, and watched it like a tennis match, lmao. Pretty good chapter and I'll be looking for more, although i have to point out there were a fair few spelling and grammar mistakes. By the way if you ever want to read my two stories go ahead. one is a one-shot and the other is a novel that is just about done once i get the last couple chapters posted.

Author's Response: when seamus says that to harry and ginny, he says it because everyone knows they SHOULD be together, like they knew ron and hermione should be. haha oh yes, i am a very big taylor swit fan. i thought that each of those songs fit into the storyline pretty well. i hope to update soon. ahh yes, i am a terrible editor. i'm trying to get better at catching my mistakes. and i'll be sure to read your stories. thanks for your review. =]

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what, secret dating, that's never a good idea. you have to look over your shoulder all the time to make sure nobody is around and it drives you insane trying to keep the secret. it's much nicer when u don't have to keep it a secret. hopefully they won't have to do that for too long, lmao. and this must be the first fanfic where ginny is concerned about what ron thinks, lmao, usually it's just harry that thinks that. but hey, that just makes it that much more interesting. great chapter, i'll move on now.

Author's Response: you're right, secret dating is HARD. but let's hope it works out for ginny and harry. =] i was hoping i would add a minor twist into the plot by having ginny be concerned as well as harry. but don't worry, i think eventually her well-known "who gives a crap" attitude will be seen.

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lmao, wow, maybe ginny isn't as smart as we all thought if she was unable to realize that harry was talking about her. glad to hear that this relationship with bridget didn't last too far into the story, didn't like it from the start. and that little potter charm line was pretty funny too, never heard that before. you know what song i would have ginny sing to bridget if she came trying to get harry back. i'd use bon jovi's "you give love a bad name" their my favorite band and it's one of my favorite songs.

Author's Response: thanks for the suggestion, i might use that. great idea. haha, i like to think of ginny as just... blinded by love. she figured she wasn't good enough to have harry be talking about her. thankfully, she got the picture eventually.

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the song isn't familiar but i do know who muse is, talented band. and i'm kinda having a love/hate relationship with this fanfic. love because of how unique it is but hate because of all the things like an ipod, vcr and such that aren't in the wizarding world and in the real books wouldn't work on hogwarts cuz muggle items aren't supposed to be able to work there. regardless though it's still fun to read.

Author's Response: yeah i realized about half way through writing these chapters that i wasn't really "wizard editing." so i decided just to flow with it. if i had caught myself earlier, i definatley would've fixed it. but now, i just like to pretend that hogwarts and the wizarding world has become a little more advanced. =]

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Oh boy, lmao. I can tell this is gonna be good. Once I read the last two sentances I said to myself "oh yea, I'm going to enjoy reading this and hopefully be laughing nonstop." Please don't disappoint me, lmao.

Author's Response: haha thanks! i hope i don't disappoint you!

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All right, this chapter was much better, finally got to the action. Although I do wish that Harry and Ron had also been apart of it instead of just Hermione and Ginny. Regardless, much better than the previous chapters.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks. I see that you are an action fan, so am I and I have tried hard to put my vision of the little battle into word.

There are a lot of stories about action from the perspective of Harry and Ron, so I thought Hermione and Ginny's P.O.V. would be a little different.There is some more action in later chapters. Hope you like them. ;)

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This chapter was a little better, but the ending was really confusing. The last chapter was hard to read and left me wondering where it was leading to. I'm assuming if I keep reading I'll find out. Pretty good story so far, but still lacking the action/laughs that I like.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. This chapter was about people getting rewarded and I was trying to set a stage for the next chapter. I think you will like the next chapter. It has some action.

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Well it was again kinda boring except for the last little bit when you talk about Snape's portrait and McGonnagal saying she prefered the living Snape. I'll keep reading regardless and stay hopeful.

Author's Response: I agree that this was not one of my best chapters. Sorry if I disappointed you. But thank you for your review.

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Well, a little short and kinda boring to be honest. I like reading fanfictions that have a lot of action and/or laughs. And this chapter didn't really have either. I suspect though that it gets better as it goes on, so I'll stay hopeful for now.

Author's Response: Thank you for your honest review. Everyone is recovering to I thought any action or laughs would be inappropriate here. Hope you like the other chapters :)

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Well this was a pretty good opening chapter. Got to be a little creative and tell it through the view points of others besides Harry. I'll keep reading and hopefully this story turns out as good as I'm hoping.

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review. Hope you like the rest of the chapters

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Wow, i'm completely in awe at this chapter. 10 on originality, 10 on depth, 10 on creativity, but only a 5 on grammer and spelling, several mistakes there. everything else is a 10, and i can't wait until the end.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Yup, just as I called it. You heard it from me, and I was right. Meredith got just what she paid for when she got together with Jeremy, a one way ticket to being a booty call. And i don't buy for a heartbeat that the bandage on Nick's arm is to cover up parental beatings. I bet you he's got the dark mark on his arm doesn't he. why else would he have his lower arm constantly covered. i don't know what he's playing at but i can't think of anything else.

Author's Response: haha, well, you'll just have to read and find out :)

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Oh boy, Meredith needs to be smacked. what's sad is that she thinks she just got a bf, but in reality she just bought a one way ticket to being a booty call. i mean, i'm a guy, and i know a lot of other guys, and it'll be the same thing he did with girls in the past, climb in bed the first chance he gets and then he's done with her, he doesn't care. u heard it from me, even though u already know what happens i can tell this is going to happen.

Author's Response: yeahh :]
thanks for the review.

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This fan fic sure is moving quick in it's time line. i mean through two chapters they seem to have progressed through a little more than a year. makes me wonder what's been happening in the months that were skipped. still a good story regardless, just something i noticed and thought i'd point out.

Author's Response:

Yes... Well... nothing really that eventful happens during the months/years that I didn't write anything... they pretty much just lived like a normal family would... but just you wait... you might get to find out later what happened during those years/months :)

Thanks for the reviews :)

Dani

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Alexia's dead, good ridence. good story, i know i didn't review that much throughout it but it was a good story overall. there were some things that confused me down the road but i figured them all out after i reread certain chapters. anyway as i said good story, i'd give it a B.

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Oh boy, this can't be leading to anything good. I bet he explodes with anger as soon as he sees what's on the other side of that door. I can only pray that they don't start having sex and "then" he opens, that would be a complete nightmare. Oh and grammer was still a little off in this chapter.

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i have the next chapter up asap!

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So I was partially right. A fake body to look like him and make everyone believe he was dead, but not the way I expected it to be. Very creative in what you did. There's no way I could have predicted that coming. Still a good story and getting better all the time.

Author's Response: Looks like I finally stumped you XD

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What did she do to him? I can think of a couple things she might have done but I can't see enough clues to figure it all out. What I'm leaning towards is that she planted a decoy body that looks like him to make everyone think he's dead, but that doesn't explain why she would raise a large knife right over his head. It's all very interesting. Guess I'll have to wait for now. Good chapter and I liked this one cuz it was a little longer than the others.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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I don't get it. Why does everyone think they have to have sex in their fan fictions. I'd say like 8 out of 10 fan fics that I read have sex in them at least once, I just don't get it. Are people really that obsessed with sex that they have to have it everywhere. In real life I understand, but in make believe, come on. Don't take that as a negative comment because it's not, I still like the story, but I'll probably never understand why everyone puts sex in their stories. Only negative thing I'm gonna point out is your grammer, that could really use some work.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, and i'll look over my grammer.

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Okay, I've tried to mellow out a little bit since this story has had less action and just try to like it the way it is. And even though I still liked the beginning a lot better cuz of the action, this is still good, just a nice story to help me relax when i've had a stressful day at work. By the way, what happened to your "Summer at the Weasley" fics? they've been deleted.

Author's Response: i'm sorry ):
there should be a big fight soon, if the story goes to plan (:
the summer fics? i deleted them - along with some of my other fics - because i didn't have time to continue them and i hated them. xD. they were rubbish.

thank you for reviewing! (:


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