Reading Reviews From Member: chavala
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by chavalaTo Not Forget: To Not Forget

1st February 2009:
I will never forget. Thank you for writing this.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. This is a personal favorite for many reasons.

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Review #2, by chavalaHey, Fred: Hey, Fred

26th January 2009:
I loved this. I started crying in the end. Bravo!

Author's Response: thank you! :)

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Review #3, by chavalaMore Than a History Page: More Than a History Page

19th January 2009:
I loved the way this was written. It does sound like something that would sadly happen. I hate that these little kids wouldn't even know who had died to save the Wizarding World. Beautiful work. Good Job!!

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Review #4, by chavalaHogwarts, A Musical: Back to school

30th April 2007:
I really loved the story! I think that the transitions between points of views could have been more obvious and smoother, but I loved how the characters reacted and the song choices. Good job, and keep writing!

Author's Response: thankyou and thankyou!

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Review #5, by chavalaI'll Give My Life for You: I'll give my life for you

29th April 2007:
Oh my gosh, I loved it! It fits perfectly with the context of the song (love the musical, too). Very well written. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks. This is one of my favorite songs from Miss Saigon.

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Review #6, by chavala:

4th April 2007:
I was really confused by the jump between the two chapters, though. Other than that, I loved it!

Author's Response: yes, that does get a little confusing. decided though that if I actually spread the story out over three years of her life, it would get very long and very boring. There's an even bigger time jump next chapter, but I'll explain it before the chapter starts. :D Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm thrilled you like it sweetie!

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Review #7, by chavala:

4th April 2007:
Wow. I really like this story. I love how the person actually talks to you, and you can relate you her. Keep writing!

Author's Response: thanks so much lovely! I'm thrilled you like it!

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