{reviewid: 1403307, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
2nd May 2007:
I really like it so far, good AU. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You totally made my day. Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1393206, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
24th April 2007:
Really good so far. I like that the story is from Lily's Father's view Keep updating!!!
Author's Response: Yes that seems to be the most popular thing so far.
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{reviewid: 1347358, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
19th March 2007:
This is really good, depressing, but good.
Update Soon Please 10/10
Author's Response: I DIDN'T MEAN IT TO BE THAT DEPRESSING
FUN AND KISSES
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{reviewid: 1336372, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
11th March 2007:
Oh what a cliff hanger! I feel the 'She hates me' was a little to repetitive but this story is really good so far! Update soon!!
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{reviewid: 1320583, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
25th February 2007:
Haha very funny! Update soon 10/10
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{reviewid: 1320093, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
25th February 2007:
Good chapter! I like the way you portray Lily and all the marauder's as well as the ickle slytherins they seem true to character. Please update soon I'm anxious to know what happens :)
Author's Response: It's how I imagine the Slytherins as kids, seeing as they are so horrible as adults, they must have been a drag to have in class, right? :D
C.C.
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{reviewid: 1320014, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
25th February 2007:
I really liked this chapter one of my favorite things about it is the foreshadowing on the "prank" Sirius is going to play on Snape. Small part I know but good none the less :)
Author's Response: Ha! I'm glad you caught that :D Even though the story is getting darker, Sirius is still up to his old pranks, and we should all love him for it. =)
Thanks for reviewing,
CC
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{reviewid: 1319171, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
24th February 2007:
oOoOo private owl... what could this mean... update soon!!
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{reviewid: 1319160, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
24th February 2007:
That was really good. The nice bra comment was real witty :)
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{reviewid: 1318657, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
24th February 2007:
Really cute!
Author's Response: Gald you liked it.
Thanks for the review,
LMW
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{reviewid: 1318619, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
23rd February 2007:
Really cute!
Author's Response: thanks for the review! glad you enjoyed it :)
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{reviewid: 1318505, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
23rd February 2007:
Really good chapter! call this a wild guess or somthing... but I would say James is a tad upset. update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry... you're really close! he might be more than a tad upset, though....
*gives pie, because cookies are used too much*
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{reviewid: 1314182, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
20th February 2007:
I've been cheecking back to see if you've updated and I'm so glad you did. I really liked this chapter it was almost bittersweet. I liked the part with Lily and James at the Qudditich pitch, the best, it seems like a bit of a turning point. I feel so sorry for Sirius what with his family life and now no marauder's by his side and pushing Lily away I wonder how much longer he can take with out James? I hope your test all come back with good news, and hope you get better. Great Chapter 10/10
-Elisabeth
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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{reviewid: 1312524, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
19th February 2007:
You hate this chapter? How can you? Ha, I really liked it I especially like where you left off. It definitely keeps me checking back for updates.
Author's Response: I really didn't like the chapter at all. I felt like it was weak... But I'm really happy that you and a lot of my other readers liked it! Updates within a week! Thanks!!
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{reviewid: 1311295, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
18th February 2007:
Very good so far, this story reminds me a lot of one I read awhile ago, but at the same time its different. please review soon, I think this was my favorite chapter :)
Author's Response: I think this is my favorite chapter too.
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{reviewid: 1308587, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
16th February 2007:
Good Chapter! and I think the length is good how it is, its hard for me to write long chapters to :) keep it up.
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{reviewid: 1303881, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
12th February 2007:
I'm glad this chapter was a flashback. I really liked it, their was small reminders that they where on a 'break' yet you still where able to make them relaxed and comfortable with each other presences.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1299185, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
8th February 2007:
Really liked this, update soon!
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{reviewid: 1293275, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
4th February 2007:
I liked this chapter, especially the line "Who else thinks James shouldn't work with the knife today," I think that it's showing that even though something odd is happening to James, life isn't coming to a halt the marauders are still acting like everything is dandy, that is until the end of this chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, leave it to Sirius to be the comic relief XD He'll be that a lot in the later chapters, and trust me, this story needs one. Thanks :D
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{reviewid: 1293246, reviewer: 'Fallen_from_Grace'}
4th February 2007:
I don't really understand the beginning, but I don't think where supposed to yet. Its very interesting and something new. I hope James isn't to far gone. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks :D Nope, see, I write differently then most... I'll give you the situation, but I won't give you any details... It's my way of keeping you hooked into the story XD
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