WOW!! I LOVE this story! Rory is so awesome! Her personality is so great!! She and Sirius HAVE to get together, if they don't I think I'll cry!
Aurora has a lot to deal with...and her mom is awful! She needs to be slapped!!
Okay I LOVE it and please update soon! *adds to favs* ~Lily

Author's Response: Thanks!!
Rory is so much fun to write becuase she is relatable to a lot of things and people.
Sirius and Rory are cute together, we just gotta hang on long enough to see their relationship through.
Aurora is a double personality of Rory/Eden and it is slowly killing Rory inside-but don't worry Sirius is always around to make sure she's okay.
Next chapter should be up either today or tomorrow!
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and adding me to your favs (it makes me feel great!!)!!~Cady

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CUTE! and yet sooo sad! they HAVE to get back together! i think your chapter lengths are okay! well i can't wait for an update!! great job on it so far! 9/10~Lils

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awww it was cute and it explained everything and i love the ending so much i think i hate it! in a good way thou!!! 9/10~Lils

Author's Response: haha Yeah, I understand. The ending makes me really happy too. Thank you very much!

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CUTE!! i really liked it, good job! 9/10! ~lils

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AW! SUPER CUTE! write more sweet ones like this please they are so good and cute and sweet and i LOVE them!!! 10/10!

Author's Response: thanks!
I'm writing a couple more J/L but they aren't quite as cute. The really romantic ones are fun, though

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CUTE!!! i LOVED it and really hope you write more like this soon!! 10/10
GREAT JOB!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you loved it. :)

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good story kinda rushed and stuff but good! 9/10 keep writing!

Author's Response: SORRY FOR THE RUSHING... i HAVE ANOTHER STORY READY TO BE WROTE AND IT WILL BE SOOO MUCH BETTER. TRYING TO FINISH SO I CAN WRITE IT! ! ! !

FUN AND KISSES

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YAY i liked it a few typos but nothing to big
write/post the new one-shot or 2nd chapter i wanna know their date, honestly i could see the whole date thig coming and thought it could have been put in a different way but urs works too! update soon please! 8/10

Author's Response: I will update soon....Just have to wait for a few other chapters to go in first, but it will get published soon.

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okay yeah i am so glad it was a dream cuz i was thinking that is so not Lily Evans in anyway or stretch! but the story was funny and i love the song! 8/10

Author's Response: hehe, yeah if Lily really did act like that...whoa James would be in troub;e ;]

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OMG they can't break up! why are they fighting so much?!?! they were cute together! anyway please update soon the story is fantastic! and YAY a sequel!! 10/10

Author's Response: Of course they can! They just did. Lol, you'll find out why they were fighting so much (or at least why Sirius got pretty mad at her that first time) in the last few chapters. I will seriously be updating very quickly now, since it's all finished being pre written. Thanks for the review!
-Erin

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oh that was sad he fell out of the window! and i felt things went kinda fast and could be explained a bit but it was good, is Lily PMSing? sorry to ask but she is kinda moody and has major mood swings! i thought the cutting was kinda awkward in the story right now, i love the detail but i don't know why he does-guess that comes later, but so he lost his memory that has been done before and i don't know where your going with the story but is Lily gonna help him and find what a great guy James actually is? well i wanna know what happens so please update soon and sorry if my review was mean or rude- i am sorry- but i was confused and wanna tell ya what i think. 6/10 just work on slowing things down a bit and maybe not making Lily as moody.
good story though-there maybe that makes up for all the bad stuff i said about it but it isn't that bad it could be a really good story and i can't wait to read more! (wow this is like the longes review i've ever done!)

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wow, thats so sad and depressing but it makes for a good story. i can't wait to read more and see how James helps Lily so please update soon! 9/10!!!

Author's Response: THANK YOU VERY MUCH! ! ! !

IM HALFWAY DONE WITH THE 2ND CHAPTER.

FUN AND KISSES

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i love the story and the chapter was really good and i can't wait till u update again! 9/10

Author's Response: THanks! :D

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i'm loving the story and can't wait for an update hopefully soon!! 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to rack my brain for the next chapter. :]]

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What is his next move? i am dying to know meanie that leaves me with cliffhangers!!! the story is great and funny and i love it! plase update soon!!! millions/10

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i'm liking it and can't wait for another update-soon hopefully!! i think this story is going to be fabulous (i loved your other story Thin Lines) and i would like to erad this sirius/Karmini pairing it will be awesome i have no doubt about that so i can't wait for more so please update soon! 9/10

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WOW! that was fabulous the way you discribed lily was AMAZING! this really does sound like the inner James and the love he has for her and i loved the meanings behind how people wash their hands it was very good. all of the discribtions were very deep and i loved the story it was great!! 10/10

Author's Response: yay! im so glad you reviewed! ive been wondering what people would think about it. im so happy you liked it. ive been told some of the descriptons were boring but im glad you thout other wise.

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oh this story was FABULOUS i loved it!! it was so great! it is so goin gon my favs!!! millions/10 ~Lily

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i really like this story and everyting about it and i can't wait to read more so please update soon! millions/10
~Lily

Author's Response: I'm glad. The seventh chapter is waiting, so you just have to be patient for a little while. thanks for the review. -Rowan.

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okay i LOVE the story and all of ur works and i can't wait to read more and i hope u do well on ur SATs! love the story millions/10!

Author's Response: Thank you and thank you. I think I did really bad on the SATs but I can take them over thankfully. They just cost a lot of money, which is stupid since you need to take them in order to go to college. Anyway, thanks for the review!
-Erin

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hahahahaha i LOVED this story it was so funny and sweet! i love all of your stories and can't wait to read more!
lots of love ~Lily 10/10

Author's Response: thanx! glad you liked it!

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it was cute! good job 8/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

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cute, funny and i loved it!!! awesome job!!! 9/10 ~Lily

Author's Response: Thank you alot

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OH who is it? i am dying to find out!!! really update soon please!!! the story is funny i love it and can't wait for more so please update fast! 10,000,000/10

Author's Response: Thank you i will update as soon as posible

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AW it is really cute and different than using Cinderella i really like it and can't wait for more! update soon please! 9/10

Author's Response: Cinderella is my least favorite princess! Snow White doesn't seem to get enough attention and she's my favorite so I had to write with/about her. I have 2 other Disney/HP story ideas. I'm a loser I know, but those are my two favorite things to write/read about lol. I'm so glad you liked it!

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