Why did you have to kill the baby though? Anyways really good story, hope you will update soon!Author's Response: I'm sorry, it was a major thing I could not get around it. But just wait. Things are going to be... wel remain drastic
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(It's your friend Chelsea Turner by the way)
Absolutley brilliant! SO much better than some of the stories on this site!! And i'm not just saying that as a friend i really mean it, hope you add the next chapter soon!! I haven't had chance to read your other stories yet but i will soon. I chose to read this one first because, although all of your storyliines sound good, this one sounded the best.
Please update soon!!
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um yeah it's good,however, your chapters (all) need to be so much longer!! i've just read every single one of them and it only took me like 45 minutes!! also, quite a lot of your spelling is wrong (sorry but it had to be said!) and yes you could use a bit more descriptive language so as to improve the imagery and as such improve how vividly we see it when we read it.
but overall seems to be going rather well!!Author's Response: i completely know they need to be longer. lol. but im just not smart enough to make them long and not sound completely retarded. and i know that i make a ton of mistakes. i type a mile a minute and dont reread anything lol... but anyways thanks for the constructive critisism. it really helps with my writing... and just to let you know your the first person to actually do so lol... well besides paige(siriusgirl2010) but that doesnt count lol... thanks for reviewing... Report Review
very good story, however, isn't draco malfoy Lucius' son not Blaise?Author's Response: Hee Hee no one knows who Blaise's dad is. so I made it Lucius! Report Review
wow! that was a really emotional and descriptive chapter! Very good and very well written! I hope to read more soon!Author's Response: thanks, I will be updating as soon as possible when my muse returns :) Report Review
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