Very good chapter, I've followed this story from the very beginning. Not only do you have a multitude of talent as a writer but an amazing imagination and I highly enjoy this story. I cannot wait for the next chapter and I promise from here on out to review every chapter and much more thoroughly. You put the time in as a a writer, I'll put the time in as a reviewer. I'm sorry I have not reviewed before this, I have been extremely busy and it was tough sometimes to even read the chapters, but I did and I love your story!

Author's Response: *is speechless* Ummm...wow! Thank you! If you want to silence me, just give me comments like this one. I can’t really put in words how your review makes me feel, it’s that awesome! I wish more reviewers thought the way you did. So many of us work hard on our stories and some hardly get reviews. This review is fine; I forgive you for not getting to the other 17 chapters. I understand how busy life can get.

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hey pretty good so far, really good cliffhanger, you should have someone beta your story though, it might help with the reviews, i was thinking of doing that myself. Wehn you review my stories let me know if you've updated

Author's Response: ok i'll try to get a beta.thanks for the review!i'll try to let you know when i've updated!

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