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Review #1, by imsirius213Changes: The Begining

6th March 2007:
hey pretty good so far, really good cliffhanger, you should have someone beta your story though, it might help with the reviews, i was thinking of doing that myself. Wehn you review my stories let me know if you've updated

Author's Response: ok i'll try to get a beta.thanks for the review!i'll try to let you know when i've updated!

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