This is one of my favorite songs, so I am partial to this story. :D Report Review
Oh my god, I was in hysterics!!! Trying to imagine...Krum breakdancing.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Aahhh.It's nice to see a story about karate. I am a second degree brown belt, in Isshinryu karate, so I somewhat understood the terms. I think you should have developed Hannah's evilry a little more, but I really liked the ending!!Author's Response: Thanks. I decided to write this story because I really enjoy Karate. I'm only a red, almost green belt.
Thanks for the tip with Hannah, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
I hope you read the sequel and like it as much as this one. Report Review
Awww...that's a lovely story. The only question I have is...How is Harry going to deal with Hermione's newfound love?Author's Response: I may have to have a sequel for that... Thanks for the idea!!! Report Review
I kind of want to know why she is so scared of homeless people. Maybe a relative got mugged by one, resulting in eventual death or some thing? Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
She's scared of homeless people because, umm.. well, I guess they just frighten me sometimes. Like when they approach you talking all funny. Sometimes they just frighten me, so I put that in Hermione.
But your idea's good. I might edit that and use it.
Again, thanks. Report Review
Personally, I think you did a good job writing from a guy's point of view. I didn't see any effeminate emotions there! The only suggestion I have to make is the ending seems like Ron's anger is gone, and that he seems neutral about it, like he was looking back on it. Other than that, it was a nice story!Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the suggestion! I'll look into that =D. I love hearing other people's opinions and lately my reviews have been lacking them. Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you liked it. (wooo for no feminism!). Report Review
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