Sooo original! This story is addictive!
It makes me sad to think she can't have her own kids though. :( Hahahaa, can't wait for the romance to heat up!!
Poor Elaina deserves to be loved.
I'm super impressed that you came up with this idea, keep it up! :)Author's Response: Oh, thank you. It is kinda depressing that Elaina can't have her own kids, but it's a half-breed thing. Like, in real life, mules. But even if she could have children, I don't think she would. She wouldn't to risk them turning out like her.
And just between you, me, and the rest of the internet, relationship part 1 gets off to a start next chapter ;D
~TFM Report Review
Loving your story so far.
I am so curious about her past! Don't leave me to be eaten alive by it, hahaha update soon please!
& So close, so close, so close!!!
I am a sucker for romance, I request that Remus bucks up and just snogs Kate. ;)
keep it up!Author's Response: I'm glad you have enjoyed this! I will try to get on the ball and write some more for this, but lately I've been taken over by Narnia and King Caspian. I refuse to give up on Scars though! It will be finished someday. Report Review
My only complaint: please hurry and make Remus fall in love with Ivy.
I am a suuucker for romance, hahahaha!
Update soon! It seems like your story is reaching the best part (as in there's more Remus/Ivy interaction), real excited. :)
keep it up!Author's Response: =D
you just put a HUGE smile on my face.
hahaha, yeah, i'm pretty much CRAZY over rom-coms, so i know how you feel.
thanks so much for the sweet review! i'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
~ally Report Review
Yeah, it sucks not getting any reviews to look forward to.
I only just started reading your story, I'm on chapter four; but I decided to take a quick break before throwing myself back into it. :P So here I am! I thought you deserved a review. :D
Your story has some really great descriptions!
It seems like you've done loads of research for your story too.
Love the language, haha love this era!
Gonna keep reading!
It's been most fabulously written so far though!
PS> Drool, Thomas sounds pretty hot. ;)Author's Response: Aww, thank you! This story hasn't been nearly as popular as I would have liked or as my other stories have been. However, with the obscure topic/pairing, I understand the minimal feedback. But you get endless kudos from me for reviewing! ; )
I'm so glad to hear that you've been enjoying it so far. I've actually become really attached to writing this story.I love how different it is and how much freedom I get with characters/plot/descriptions. I love it! Plus, I've always been rather infatuated with the Middle Ages/Medieval era, so writing in that style is so much fun :DDD
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing again, I love you for it! lol.
P.S. I must admit, in my mind, Thomas is a MAJOR hottie ; ) Report Review
Good story so far! Keep it up!
Please update soon. Gotta know what happens next!
;D Report Review
WOOT!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
I need a tissue...frig...my nose...MY NOSE!
Oh kayyy now I REALLY need a tissue.
This is the first time ever a HPFF has made me cry, and man that's called TALENT.
REMUS WHY!? WHY!? Shoulda proposed sooner!
Great, now I'm crying all over again...tissue...tissue...Author's Response: Lol. I'm so sorry for making you cry!
::hands over a tissue::
I cried while writing it, so I expected everyone else to cry too. Lol.
OMG (ignoring the fact I just said that) you've never cried during fanfic?! I cry all the time. Needless to say, the real HP books make me cry too...at least the 6th and 7th did ::blushes::
I'm glad I made you cry now! Lol.
Yeah, Remus should have done it while he had the chance, but that just adds to the angst! Tehe.
I'm glad you liked it nonetheless! Report Review
Oh My GOD.
NO! What's happening to Brenna!?
PLEASE! DO NOT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS!
What's happening to Brena!?
No!~Author's Response: Tehe.
I love it when people freak out.
I also love cliffhangers, you'll find.
You'll just have to wait for 13, won't you?
Tehe. Report Review
Please update soon!
Frankly, if you don't I'm going to GoogleEarth you and find out where you live and KILL YOU!
...whoa, I sound mad.
I think I am...oh my.
Well, you should be flattered really, FANTASTIC chapter!
Keep up the great work!Author's Response: wow!! let me tell you, i am flattered! although yeah, would prefer if you didn't come kill me... but oh well.. :P
thanks so much for reviewing!
glad you liked it!!! :) Report Review
What happens next!? What!?
She HIT him!?
Please, PLEASE update soon! Report Review
Aw Sirius and Lovette are so CUTE!
How sweet...though Lily's parents dying wasn't so sweet...
I liked the way you wrote it though some people write this part a little to melodramatically.
Great story! Please update soon!Author's Response: I am sorry I have not gotten the chance to reply properly. If you have any further questions, just send me another review. Sorry for the inconveince. Thank you. Report Review
...Great starting chapter!
But why did you change all their names?
I'm just getting started but I can tell I'm going to be hooked! ^^
Thanks for updating keep up the great work!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
oh, great story
haha I'm hooked!
ah I love sarcastic and stubborn characters.
ahem anyways please update soon!Author's Response: i am glad you found ana then!!!
thanks. Report Review
okay, I know you're on hold and everything, but can yo please PLEASE update soon?
I love this story so far and it's killing me not knowing the rest of it...T-T
Keep up the amazing work!
as always a 10!Author's Response: Hopefully I will be done with Pretty Girl or Just to Watch You Sleep soon. Then i'll update this. ^_^ Report Review
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
I seriously do!
Please update soon and keep up the AMAZING work.
I'm usually not interested with HPFFs on pregancy and stuff but you've got me hooked!
I cannot stop reading, lol
please hurry and update! Author's Response: thaks so much! A lot of people tell me that, which makes me feel so honored! thanks! Report Review
it's finished...Author's Response: yeahh loll i had the same reaction. Report Review
I love this chapter!
Uwah...please hurry and update!
Amazing chapter, amazing story.Author's Response: Thank you. ^_^
I will update as soon as I can. Report Review
I love the way you write! Your story is hilarious!
update soon!Author's Response: haha ok thnx for the review!!! much love and absence of heaters Report Review
aw come on...make Sandy change...please?
anyways just lost it there...please update!
It's a really good story!Author's Response: We shall see...sorry no slips this time haha. Report Review
Keep up the fantastic work and please update soon!
*sigh* this story always makes me feel so giddy and fluffy inside...Author's Response: Thank you!
I will definiately try! Report Review
your story is hilarious!!
I love the way you write!
keep up the AMAZING work and please updat soon!Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! I updated ealier tonight, so please check it out! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
please update! you're doing great!Author's Response: thank you!
I will try indeed! Report Review
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