This story is so great and I loved this chapter. Really amazing summary for your story by the way, pulled me in immediately and the banner is lovely! I think these two need each other. They both have personal problems that seem to be (hopefully?) dissolving since they met each other. I think they are just perfect and I really hope Ava is really moving past Ian now. It was cool to see a deeper side of Louis - his problem with not dating because girls can't help but like him.

I just don't even know what else to say it's really great!! You are a great writer. Loving it :)

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Wow that was incredibly exciting and surprisingly hilarious. You are amazing it's unbelievable how awesome your writing is I could read this story over and over and over again and never get bored. I am so glad Fred stunned Evelyn to bring her to safety haha I'm sure she will understand. Love when Agatha drives!! This chapter exceeded my expectations (as all chapters of this story do). Thank you thank you thank you, and update again when you can :)

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Darcy should find something she can hold over Louis so she can get out of this blackmail haha but then again, where would be the fun in that? It's pretty funny she has to be his girlfriend, but she will probably end up liking it. Their arguing is funny, and I like his confidence in the fact that she will fall for him eventually. Hope she does!!

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story, and that you like Darcy and Louis! They're really fun for me to write, so the fact that you like reading them really makes me smile! Thank you so much for the great review!
Cassie :)

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Yay George and Angelina!! The proposal was incredibly sweet and I liked the little part about him hearing Fred. Loved the part with Ron and Hermione haha he would want a Quidditch Pitch in the backyard and she would certainly try to add more bookcases. Very cute and lighthearted.

Still sad for Harry and Ginny, but hopefully they learn more about themselves and about what and who they want after this time apart. Not too thrilled about Ginny and Oliver, but she does deserve to have some fun.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so happy that you liked the proposal, and George hearing Fred's whisper. Also, finally some Ron/Hermione, I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)

I understand that everyone wants to see Harry and Ginny together, as I do too, but you're right. They've got some figuring out to do before that can happen. And yeah, Ginny and Oliver... she's really just trying to fill the void. I understand that this is not the pairing that people want to see, but, well...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I love hearing what you think!! :)

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I'm glad to see everyone is getting along!! Pretty cool that Scorpius bought himself a house already haha wonder how Hermione and Ron will feel about Rose going to hang out there with him. Those two are very cute together.

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Love the Al/Bree parts!! So sad for Rose. I'm sure it's very hard for her to watch Scorpius with this seemingly perfect girl. I suppose she just has to wait it out. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! XOX Please keep reading and reviewing :D

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Very beautiful and sweet!!

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I can only imagine what could possibly happen when she finally tells him. Hope she tells him soon!! He's missed enough time he could be spending with his kids instead of Hattie!

Author's Response: Hey,

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Who knows, I know silly Albus but you never know what'll happen!

-Potterfan310
Soph :)

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Aww :( Why aren't they talking they need to work out their problems!! However I'm pleased to see that they aren't jumping right back together. This is clearly a serious issue between them that will take some time to work out. Would love to see more Ron/Hermione in the future but it's your story so you focus on who you feel is important for the particular chapter. Loving your story :) Keep up the great work!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you see it that way - they do need a little time. Thanks for telling me about the Ron/Hermione thing - I'll definitely keep it in mind! It makes me so happy to hear that you like this, thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)

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Oh my goodness. Brandon, James, and Al. This girl has some crazy relationships going on!! I hope she's able go sort out who she wants without too may people getting hurt. Love their group of friends though. They are all very funny!!

Author's Response: Ugh, ikr! Don't worry, there's only going to be a few more chapters of all this {fkcjzhjsgvnlzskeihwensv} before she sorts herself out :) Ohhh, the next gen crew are the best, aren't they? Thanks for rewiewing! x

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I like what you've got so far. I really like the characters you've created. The relationships are pretty unique to me. I feel awful for Rose having to deal with those feelings of betrayal from her boyfriend and her best friend. I wish she could forgive Scorpius but I wish even more that he and Olive hadn't done that to her.

I liked seeing more of Al in this chapter and getting to learn more about him. It was nice that he reached out to Olive to try to make her feel better by letting her know about his past.

I still am not sure who Olive will end up with. I'd like to see more of Louis and then maybe I can decide. I'm also curious about what is going on with Spencer and why she's changed so much.

This group of friends has a lot going on!! I really like the story. Update when you can!

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Pretty good! I'm interested to know what Bree might do when she finds out about the bet Al made. It's probably only a matter of time and she is not likely to be happy about it. I hope Rose and Scorpius are able to get together eventually. Dom and Charlie are adorable!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Please keep reviewing! :D

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I feel bad for Harry :( They shouldn't believe these horrible rumors after they've been his best friends for such a long time. Thank goodness for Hermione, of course. I hope Ginny gives Harry a chance to explain!

Author's Response: I couldn't agree more. Harry's not getting any fair treatment right now, and you're right, thank goodness they have Hermione! Thank you for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it! :)

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Liking the story so far. I'm a little confused on whether she is supposed to end up with Albus or not. Tate seems like a pretty cool guy so far. Update when you can!

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Very sweet story with a nice ending! Everything tied up nicely for everyone. I'm glad Andrew didn't kill James. Good job!

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Such a great ending!! And it was a really amazing story. You did a wonderful job and congratulations on finishing it! I really loved your characters and am so glad Al and Addie got their happy ending. There was a lot of madness through it all but I know this is one I will come back to reread. Thanks so much for writing this and for posting it here! I hope you'll continue writing, and I can't wait to read more by you :)!

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Wow twins!! How sweet. It's nice that everyone has reacted well to her pregnancy. I think my favorite reaction was Lily's. She is so funny and seems like a lovely younger sister. I am sad Ryan dumped Dom but glad she and Mae are back being friends. I think this has been a cool story so far. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I've been trying to make Lily now more one of the main characters as she's become so involved with Mae's life, especially when she lost Dom. Dom and Mae's reunion was one of the best things for me to write, it was so hard writing without Dom as I always wanted to add Dom in but I couldn't! Next chapter being written now! xx

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It's a nice story, I like Freddie and Clara. Congratulations on finishing it!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I was so happy when I finished my first fic haha. thank you for reviewing!!

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Happy Ron and Hermione are moving in together! And Ginny may have overreacted a bit but it's normal for her to be jealous and worried. It's good that Harry knows who he wants and is able to console her. I wonder who this Ruby person thinks she is!

Author's Response: So am I! ;) Yes, things were getting quite intense their for a while. Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it! :)

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Hmmm. I actually quite like Aiden. He is very sweet and wanted to help her when she was confused about talking to boys. But I suppose having Albus like her is sort of like a dream come true. Would be nice if she didn't have to choose so she could keep her friendship with one of them. I like Aiden I hope she doesn't have to stop talking to him!

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They're so cute! I love that they both fancy each other. The moments between the two of them are lovely!

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YAY! I love these two. And I love reading stories you write about these two. This is a great idea I love little additional things that could have happened leading up to them getting together. :)

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This is a great story and was a very enjoyable read. I would love to know what ends up happening to Matt and Lily but this story ends well with them just being in love and enjoying being around each other. I liked how Matt's story played out and am glad he trusted Lily enough to eventually tell her what was going on. And you did a great job handling the many different characters (cousins/parents/children). I didn't feel like I was lost or overwhelmed by all the different people. You kept the focus on Lily and Matt but still had lots of other characters involved. Great story. Can't wait to read more from you!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! Yes, I wanted this one to have more of an open ended ending instead of having it end with them getting married or engaged (as I did that with Beyond the Shadow). I'm very happy you liked how Matt's story played out since he's one of my favorite characters of mine.

Very happy to hear you could keep all the cousins straight! Even I have a hard time with that sometimes. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Makes sense for Ginny to be a bit worried, but Harry loves her and she has nothing to worry about (hehe maybe). I love the two of them together. Cute having her sneak out to spend time with him. I liked Harry's reaction to her saying they have forever to spend their lives together. Really liked the chapter :)

Author's Response: I think anyone would feel a bit insecure in that situation. I love them too; I think they're my favourite HP couple, and it makes me so happy to hear that you liked this. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it :)

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Loving this story. I like how everything is unfolding at a good pace. You write really well - I was pulled in from the start! I kind of don't want them to fix the "binding" problem because I love when they're together. Hopefully by the time they figure out how to break the spell they will have admitted their obvious love for each other. Can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the great work!

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