Well I like it to a point. You seem have them going to class at night. They just got there, Had the sorting, ate and then going to class and not bed... Did I miss something???

Author's Response: Don't know how I've missed that after all this time! I'll change it. Thanks for feedback.

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I dont like the fact that two 11 year olds are going to the Alley and to Kings Cross BY THEMSELVES! Does not seem likely... But I like it otherwise...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing ^_^. Sorry that you found that part less than believable. I'll try to make sure future chapters maintain believability, or to give a good enough explanation. Hope it didn't deter you too much ^^;.

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I am sure someone already told you, but if not... NEWTs are in the 7th and final year NOT 6th year which you say Albus is in. Like the story so far.

Author's Response: i totally didn't even realize i did that! i think i got james and albus mixed up in my head or something. im going to fix it right now haha

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Great Chapter... Please Don't Stop...

Author's Response: Thank you and I won't!! Thanks for reading!!

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It was a great fill in Chapter with much needed info added.. I agree that WILL never got to ask any questions of Harry... Love the way this is going... NOW HURRY UP and post the next chapter...hahhaha

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Not funny ending this here. I wanted to find out about Harry and Will... Keep Writing...

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I have to ask why you keep spelling "Off" and "eighter" wrong??? It is not "OFF" like "Please turn "OFF" the Light". It should be "OF" Meaning to, Set aside for; taken up by: a day "OF" rest. Then there is: "either" meaning, The one or the other: Which movie do you want to see? "EITHER" will be fine. I have a feeling there is something behind this... Doing great...

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, and the spelling? It's just me not noticing things because I love to update fast and furiously. Lol. I'll do my best to avoid it. I seriously don't have a clue why I continue making those same mistakes.
Thanks again for this. :)

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The Mistakes are few and not so bad... Just try and re-read it and you should be able to catch most of them... Just a few Typos. A couple Of lines did not make sense because you missed putting in a few words... But all in all I really love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. The Sorting Hat! is the last part...

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I really like this story and wished you would think if finishing it. Very well written.

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Jame's Birthday Please. Love the story. Also If your going to Continue with it (That is if you are) why do you have to bother breaking it up at all? Just wondering...P.S I could not stand waiting to see if they got Ron back I waited until you had both chapters up. Keep up the good work...

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much, I really appreciate it!

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Great chapter. Worth the wait. Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you and I shall try.

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I just found this story and love it. I think I started to read the first chapter, but was put off thinking it was all going to be set in the 10th Century. Having read it, I really like it. I love the Historical facts too. I live if Florida and run a pool cleaning business in a retirement community where a lot of Brits stay here part time. I love England and I am always asking them about the country. I also Google Map it and see what it looks like today. I can not wait for the story to continue. Keep up the great work. Thanks for taking the time to write it... Mark

Author's Response: Many Thanks Mark, you should be able to find many of the locations, including Tang, on google maps. Glad you are enjoying the story and it's portrail of the 10th century. My hope is the historical notes add some more colour to the narative it seems you think it's worked. Please feel free to contact me via my meet the author page of by Owl in the forums if you have any specific questions, I'll do my best to answer.
Thanks once again Mark,
best wishes.
Tom

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Keep Writing...Check Spelling too. So Far So Good... I like where this is going.

Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing! I know there are typos... I've already gone back and fixed them.

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Just found this feed and spent the day reading it. I really like the story. Keep up the good work and can't wait to get the next chapter. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)

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Sorry I Can NOT believe he had never met Uncle George. George would have to be dead like Fred. But I do like the story so far.

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It was a hard read. You were jumping all over the place in the fighting. I could not really keep up with what was happening. Who was fighting, who through what spell or got hit. Just was not very clear. Keep working on it. I do like the story line. Mark

Author's Response: thanks for your input :) I really didn't feel great about this chapter and just couldn't put my finger on it, so your thoughts really help. I totally agree with it, too, and I'm already in the process of editing. Keep R/R !!! Thanks!

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This just gets better and Better. Keep up the great work. Mark

Author's Response: LightningScar,

Thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Mrs_Granger

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Only 3rd year and up can go to Hogsmade, Could not have been Two 2nd years catching them kissing. But like the story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, but i'm thinking that over time they let the second years go too, also thirteen year olds are slightly less likly to gawk at a kissing couple. Thanks for reading and reviewing though! - Kirsty

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I like this story and how it's coming together. Keep up the good work..

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I like the story a lot, BUT I do not agree with you bring Fred back. Telling the public about The Horcruxes or about the Elder Wand. I know this is your story but I just don't think some things should be changed...

Author's Response: Hmm...I'm not sure I understand your review. Did I accidentally say Fred instead of George at one point?

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Not Bad, not bad. I will save this one and wait for the next Chapter. Keep working Hard. Proof Read too. But So Far I Like Where this is going..

Author's Response: thank you! :D:D i just now finished writing chapter 3, but i have to wait until HPFF reopens the queue. chapter 3 is actually a decent length! :D please keep reading! and people, please tell me how to make it better! this is my first post so i need to know how im doing! thank you so much for reviewing i can't tell you how happy it makes me!! :D:D plz keep reading everyone!! :D:D:D:D thanks!

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Like it so far. Lets see what is next. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thank you so much!! thans for reviewing at all!! :D:D:D:D:D:D i love everyone who reviews! :D:D im writing chapter 3 right now. its longer than the first two chapters, i promise! ooh! im just so excited that people are reading my story! :D:D:D please keep reading! i have to wait until they start letting people submit stories again until i submit chapter 3 so please keep reading and reviewing especially! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

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I must tell you that after the last chapter I DELETED the FEED for this story. I was SO MAD at you. I thought I would read one more chapter to see where you were going with this and now I am glad I did. Still Mad as Hell at you for what you are doing to Ginny. No One Messes with Ginny!! hahahhah

Author's Response: You were not alone with being angry at me. I am glad you are still giving the story a chance to develop. It might be that Ginny will pull something good from this tragedy.

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The Story line is good so far. BUT you need to check your spelling.

Author's Response: Ya i know.

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This is a wounderfull Chapter. Can't Wait to read more. Mark

Author's Response: Dear Lightning,

Welcome to my story. I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter will be out in about two weeks. I've fallen behind due to work requirements. Stay with me you won't be sorry.

Until next time,

Marc

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