CONTINUE! I MUST HAVE MORE! Report Review
BRAVO! MAGNIFICO! STUPENDA! CONTINUE! Report Review
Um... quick statement: Albus Dumbledore was born to Kendra and Percival Dumbledore in 1855, if this story were accurate, he would be seven. 1872 would be a 17 year old Albus. AND WHERE IN THE NAME OF MERLIN'S MOST SAGGY Y-FRONTS IS ABERFORTH! Report Review
For a newbie, that is by far one of the best fanfictions I have read. Usually it takes 1 or 2 stories with low reads to boost morale and change styles. But this, perfect from the go! Bravo!Author's Response: Thank you for your review, You have really made my day.
If you want to read the next 2 chapters of my story go on to my website www.jaz-hayward.piczo.com and see what you think of the rest.
And again thank you and really love writing and hearing good reviews about my work really cheers me up.
And again because you have really cheered me up thank you.
Luv JAZ (Messr_Professor_Prongs) Report Review
BRAVO!! Report Review
Odd, very odd.Author's Response: thanx? lol :) Report Review
Bravo! Such a marvelous begining! All wh heard of Teddy after his parent's death was Our Teddy is Snogging our Victorie.
Please, do go on!Author's Response: Oh I will. Teddy and Victoire fans, here I come. lol
Thank you for your review. Report Review
IT's REPUBLIC STAR DESTROYERS! OBI-WAN, and ANAKIN PROBABLY HAS MUCH MORE THOUGHTS, MOSTLY THAT SEEM LIKE RIDDLES! Report Review
Happy Deathly Hallows Everybody! Report Review
Muy Excelanto! This is the first time I've ever heard of an Argentine Fan Fic Writer. I wonder, what do you know about Eva and Juan Peron, La Peronistas? Report Review
Bravo! Bravissimo! It would tie in well with my new one-shot: The Funeral of Harry James Potter! Report Review
THis is to clarify my Authors Purpouse,
ChocoFrogo was correct, James is supposed to have Hazel eyes and glasses, but that will be broached in a future chapter. The Marauders will rise again, more great and headache-full than ever before.
D.E.11 Report Review
Okay, to Clarify, Harry James Potter was born in 1980! It was October 31, 1981! The HP series takes place in the 90's (And Possibly early 2000+ in DH) YOUR STORY IS FULL OF INACCURACIES Author's Response: I've said it before, I'll say it again. I KNOW. I DID IT ON PURPOSE. Report Review
Something good. Keep it up, and you may win the Voldie/Harry/Jack award I invented, a Triumvitae of crazies! Yay Report Review
This is so wierd, I have never read this before, but my main characters, 'Chronicles of the
Children' has the same children names and the fact that James and Sirius are Twins. IRONY!Author's Response: Wow! That is weird!!! That is really Ironic. Thanks for the reivew! Report Review
The cabin A67 was reserved for J.J. Astor, Plus, it was FIRST CLASS. No moron would bet first class tickets! Now, Thiurd class, i.e. the movbie, would have been E67F E-Deck, Room 67, Forward. Secondly, B23 was Thomas Andrew's Suite, and Remus affording First Class? Your story is riddled with errors! Now, if you had examined the crew roster on R.M.S. Titanic, you would see that Lily's fiancee was really the cheif stoker of Boiler room One. IT DOES NOT MAKE SENSE!Author's Response: well in my story I was going as A was on the lowest and C was on the highest floor i know it may not make much since but that's how i made it :) and second this is loosely based of the movie titanic it's not that actual movie put into litarature so it's still a fanfic
thanx for review :) Report Review
Other than that, very good, Bon Chance Mes AmisAuthor's Response: that's in spanish in french mother=mere, mais, merci beaucoup!
~lissy Report Review
Disgustingly Evil, Sirius was unmarried, EVIiL! This is the worst story I have ever read! :) Ha! Report Review
ha! Brilliant! Report Review
James was the Seeker, Not a chaser, James Potter, Seeker, Gryffindor house team, and he and Sirius were the Weasley twins of their time. Report Review
where is the Rest of it? that is your million
Dollar question, and Bravo so farAuthor's Response: Where's the rest of it? Right here. *taps head* I just need to find the time to actually write it all out and get it edited.
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Quite interesting, but still, a bit of a drag. A bit more DRAMA! Add drama and let the world see the true glory of Le Phantomme de le Opera.
But other than that Bravissima! Author's Response: Heh, wow. Before I deleted this, people were telling me this story was WAY too fast paced! Lol, that was a change :P. Don't worry, there will be more drama later on, I haven't really gotten into the true plot yet! Thanks for your review, I appreciate you not being harsh when adding criticism, and I'm not being sarcastic! Merci! :D Report Review
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