I love how he reads her mind at the end.
=)

Keep writing!
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you, Lauren. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

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I'm your new fan!! hehe.
Very good start to your story,
intriguing, interesting, I loved it.
10/10
Lauren

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Aww, I'm kind of sad it's over now... *tear*
Anyway, that was really good.
Now go update your other stories!!!
haha.
xoxoxo

Author's Response: thank you!

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No offense, but I really have no idea how you got 72 reviews for this chapter. Everybody is completely out of character. Hermione would never refer to Draco as "The King of Slytherin" nor would she ever want for him to kiss her. And Draco wouldn't want to kiss Hermione either. But that aside, your writing is extremely rushed and quite frankly.. boring. I'm sorry if i'm offending you but I just think it's ridiculous that YOU got 72 reviews for this one chapter when there are other amazingly written fanfics out there that don't even have 72 reviews all together. I'm sorry.. but that just seems terribly unfair to me.. Though all this doesn't mean that you couldn't improve. Just practice with your writing, focus on keeping your characters IN character and writing with a little more detail... I apologize if i'm coming off terribly rude right now but I just think SOMEBODY needs to be totally honest with you. I seriously don't mean to offend you and I wish you luck with your writing. xoxo (:

Author's Response: alright, firstly let me point out i got 72 reviews THREE YEARS AGO! No one reviews that much any more. Plus they were readers who enjoyed my other stories and decided to read another. Second, this is the SECOND chapter! I was a terrible writer a few years ago, if you want to see newer work please look at my page and read those before judging my writing style on this one chapter. I know you arent being rude but I think you should look at all the variables before calling someone a bad writer. if you read on in this story descriptions are improved AND characters are more incharacter. Besides its MY story so I can write it how I want to write it. Sure, they are out of character, Im sure as hell not the only writer who has this problem. Plus its a draco/hermione that is totally out of character to begin with. Thank you though for not being too rude, as I was trying to do the same.

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loved it. Pleeease update soon!(:

Author's Response: Will do :)

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Seems a little rushed, but love the story line.
Please update soon!

Author's Response: I know its a little rushed, and I'm sorry, but I'm glad you like the story line! :o)

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Aww!
How sweet. :)
What was the letter Cho sent? :S And why is Eloise going to the Potter mansion? please update soon!

Author's Response: YAY, they finally admit their feelings! You will have to wait and see what the letter said, and Eloise is heading to the Potter mansion regarding the letter. I will do my best to update soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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EEE
FINALLY YOU UPDATED!
This story is going to be REALLY good,
I can tell:D
Please update sooner
than before
xox
laurenn

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Aww.Poor Tristan =(
Please update soon. I don't want to rush you but at the same time, I really want to read the next chapter and find out what happens!
Anyway, awesome chapter. :D

Author's Response: It'll be out eventually.
Thanks!

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Hey, love the chapter. You're an incredible author, as i've mentioned already in many of my previous reviews. XD lol. Anyway, keep writin and have a great summer! :)
lauren

Author's Response: Aw, thank you.
I'm glad you think so!

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Well, I found the series on another site, the original site it was posted on and have already read the whole series so LOL! But yeah. Thanks for posting this story because I never would have ended up reading it otherwise. :D much love,
lauren

Author's Response: Ahh.. meanie... I have gotten like 3 ppl who have found it.. so do me a favor and don't tell anyone else... shhh.. lol... i still hope u enjoyed it though

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I like!! :) Update soon. Adding to my faves!

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OMGOMG
loved this chapter
omg
please update soon
i'm dying to find out what happens next!!

Author's Response: LOL... next chapter is already waiting for submission!!

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YAY
HE'S FINALLY GONNA TELL HIM!! :D
update soon

Author's Response: hehe, I will try!!

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awesomeee!! please update very soon!!


Author's Response: I shall... i'm waiting on the next chapter.... should be up in the next couple of days!!

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I loooved it:)
Please update sooner though,
I've been waiting for what seems like years for you to update this XDD lol
Ciao for now`

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry for taking so long, I was kind of stuck while trying to write the next chapter, and school got real busy and stuff so...

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DAMMIT!!
what is with you and cliffies?!?!??!
I JUST got home from camp and was soo tired but I couldn't stop myself from reading this and i'm happy I did read it cuz it was so so so amazing.
K i'mma go sleep now
Z

Author's Response: Thanks so much... and yes the cliffies are killer.. i agree... next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow!

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FINALLY YOU UPDATED
haha
thanks for another awesome chapter
update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, your welcome!
And thanks!

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Dun dun dun
Darnnit!
ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER.
You evil, eeevil, sick, twisted, cliffhanger making psycho path! XD
make another chapter
please
please
can. not. wait. longer. must. read. more.

Author's Response: LOL... i love reading your reviews... its impossible for me to have a bad day afterwards... lol... and yes it will be up in a couple of days!

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Hey, i'd loove to make you a banner, email me at flyingbananaz@hotmail.com

Author's Response: I will do that, thanx :)

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"Go, Harry," said Snape.


SNAPE CALLED HIM HARRY. =O
That's not very Snape-ish XDD

Author's Response: Yeah I know... Snape is very OC... but I still love him.. the next chapter should be up by tomorrow morning

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Good mornin'!
I love love love love this story. One of the best on HPFF.
seriously.
anyway, have a nice day ;D

Author's Response: Wow.. thanks so much.. i love it too... the next chapter should be up by tomorrow morning

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OMGYAY
The sequel is up and i am so happy.
i'm going to read the rest of the chapters now
but will have 2 review later,
i'm s'posed to be sleeping and the keyboard makes too mcuh noise lol

Author's Response: lol

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ZOMGG.
Amazing!!
So very very amazing.
I loved reading this soo much.
PLEASE POST THE SEQUEL
ASAP
bfn

Lauren

ps. i beg of you! please post the sequel as soon as you possibly can! If you don't I will cry, cry, cry! XDD

Author's Response: lol.. the sequal is waiting to be validated.... and will be up by tomorrow night... and i will hopefully have a new nifty banner for it as well by the end of the week.. thanks so much for the awesome reviews

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Yay.
Harry isn't dead.
Sirius isn't dead.
Everybody's aliveee!
And btw Zera was that snack Harry got from Hagrid, remember? What happened to her?

Author's Response: Hmm.. still not sure what you are talking about... I searched through every chapter and could not find the name... nor do I remember it... remember i'm not the one who wrote this... lol... gimme a chapter number and i'll read through it

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