ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. 10/10

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Haha, texting by owl, that made my day XD

Great great story so far! I haven't stopped to review because it's so good :)

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I'm in the same boat as you. None of my stories have been updated in over a year, but this one is too good to ignore!! I really like it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I've been working on a bunch of other stories and then my muse ran away and I just COULDN'T write anything on this one. It's been really annoying, and I didn't want to force myself to write either, because it's just not a good thing to do. But I'm glad I got some inspiration back, and I hope that I'll be able to keep updating this one :)

Thank you!
- Cathy

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This story is lovely! It got me back into a fanfiction mood

Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm glad I could get you back into a fanfic mood :D

- Cathy

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Lucas is an ASS. This is very well written so far. Not very many spelling or typing errors at all! Which is something that can be used to judge the quality of the writing right away.

Author's Response: He really is, the little jerk.

I'm very glad to hear that! Usually I've got a few typos and such, but it's really grammar that's my biggest flaw. Mainly because English isn't my native language and such. But I am working on it :)

Thank you so much :)
- Cathy


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I like how you made her a loner from the group. In most of the Next Gen fics (even mine) Albus and Rose are very close because of how close they are in age. :)

Author's Response: Yeah :) I think my Rose and my Albus are quite close, but they used to be closer before. I think that Rose and Hugo in this story are close, as well. But Rose seems to have a much closer relationship to James in this story than she does in most stories, and that's very interesting to write about :)

Thanks for reviewing!
- Cathy

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I'm glad you're posting again! These last two chapters were fantastic

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Hm. Crushes abounding? Great story, dear.

C:

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Oh! I like this twist! Very creative. Your writing is quite good, too. Free of blundering errors or cliches

kbav

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Lovely, short but well written.

kbav

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Yay for Luna and Ron!

I really loved the way you wrote this. ^^



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

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Very nice. You write well with minimal spelling or other errors.

kbav

Author's Response: Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it!

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Nice! lol

Kind of a choppy chapter, but I still like this.


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That was a cute exchange. Very sibling-like. You do a great job at making all of them mesh.

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I like that you paired those two. Still a wonderful and unique story.

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Yay! Some emotional tension that doesn't involve bickering

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Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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I love this pairing. Good one shot!! Very passionate.

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Definitely favoriting this one. Very exciting!

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This is very good. Intense and not too cliche

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Aw, that's cute! I like your writing style, clean and not too many details. I can't wait to check out more of your stories!

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Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Cute! Kind of short, but cute.

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Never liked Pansy much, but that was harsh of Blaise!

I forgot to mention that I loved the Wicked reference in the last chapter's banner!

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Author's Response: Yeah, I thought so, too. Thanks for your review. The banners were made by slytherinprincess. Aren't they great? :)

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Suspense! The best spice to any story.

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Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.

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This is very well written so far. I like it. I must admit that being in an AP Lit class has ruined reading fanfiction for me a bit, because there's no mystery left in some things, like blindness and faraway strange places.


But, nonetheless, I'm excited to read more!

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Author's Response: Well, I sort of understand where you're coming from. I studied lit, but not AP. But I still enjoy writing stories, so I hope to get better at it; especially after learning the things I did in literature. :)

Thanks!!

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A wonderful sequel, I must say. I love your writing style. I'll have to come back and read some more. =D

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