Oh wow. This story is one of my favourites that I've seen on the Web. You made Lily and James seem so real to me. They felt like real people. I also found that with your story, us eager readers could relate to them. I was enthralled by the way that you illustrated Lily as a character. Her depth as a character simply drawed me in. Your vocabulary and sentence structure was fantastic. Sorry to sound like an English teacher, but i find that these qualities are becoming harder and harder to find among fan fiction writers. Thank you for many inspirations!! Report Review
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