Such a good chapter! I love June turning the tables on Albus. It's quite unexpected and I love her taking charge and threatening him for once. It's great! Please keep updating, this is a lovely story and I'm eager to read more!

-Lizzy

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D She'll threaten him properly as the chapters go on! She's growing and growing as we read more. Thanks for the support, Lizzy!

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Yaay another chapter! I loved June in this one; I really feel for her. I love Albus' cross-dressing past; it was hilarious, and I loved how June got one up on him when she duplicated the photo.
The development of Al and June's relationship is happening at a natural pace so it's believable. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Haha, Albus's insidious cross-dressing past seems to be beloved by a lot of readers. And the photo will be playing an important role soon enough!

Thank you so much for the review :)

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I love how the day I start reading this it gets updated! Anyway, it was another lovely chapter. Albus' behaviour makes me very angry, so well done on the fab characterisation! Also I loved June standing up for herself at last. Your writing is lovely, as always. Can't wait for more (I know, already, but hey, I'm greedy like that :P)

Author's Response: Haha, well your review did help convince me to update! I'm incredibly lazy without motivation. Albus deserves nothing less than anger and loathing, but he'll get his act together (eventually), as will June.

Thank you so much! And I'll try to update soon - the next chapter'll be tricky to write. :D



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I love this story :) I love June, and I love the plot (so far) and how I've never read anything like it before. Too many stories on here just look the same these days but this is so lovely and original. I can't wait to see how it pans out!

Author's Response: You're lovely and thank you for the review! I've really put some effort in keeping this story apart and I'm so happy you liked it :)

Thanks again!

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This is fantastic. Please update soon, because I'm dying to find out more about the world that Rose and Scorpius are living in. :)

Author's Response: thank you! i shall update as soon as possible!! I'm glad you like it!

xx

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I like it ^_^ Write more Weebsy :D

Author's Response: We'll see :P
Thanks anyhoo, love

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Wonderful! I enjoyed this a lot, and I hope you continue to write it! That was a hint, by the way :)

I love the way you write about the wizarding world in the 19th century. It's a pretty fascinating idea too! 10/10 of course.

Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately I think I've probably lost my inspiration for this story, but I will most assuredly try to recapture it. I'm so happy you liked it, and thank you for reviewing!

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You totally made me cry there :(
Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

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Aw c'mon. Don't leave us hanging! Great chapter :)

Author's Response: I know, I know. I felt kind of evil when I posted this, but I figured you'd all get over it eventually, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I've still got to read "Breathing" - it looks wonderful.

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I like it. I really do. James(II)/OC stories are my favourite after all and this is a suberb idea. Can't wait to see how the story goes : D

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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You almost made me cry, I swear. I feel so bad for Ella right now. I hate her family! I think that this explains Ella's character perfectly. 10/10, of course ;P

Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry - it wasn't my intention, I just wanted to explain more about Ella as you pointed out.
Thanks for a lovely review and rating!

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If he isnt Sirius...Regulus perhaps?

I loved it, how it's really original :)

10/10

Author's Response: Perhaps... perhaps... ;)

Thank you for reviewing :) I'm really glad you like it!

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I loved it :) It reminds me of Reign of Fire, which was my favourite film for ages.

Author's Response: thankyou so much! P:

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Is it bad that Rose totally reminds me of myself? I loved it, as usual so 10/10 methinks?

Author's Response: haha of course not! I'm glad my character is relatable.

thanks for the ten for ten its so nice of you
=]

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Loved it.

You write them beautifully :)

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I cannot believe it's over. I've followed it from the beginning, and its up there with the HPFF best. You deserve your Dobby. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your support! :D

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Lovely. Just lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. =)

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Oh I feel sorry for Rose! I thought it was really good, just like the other chapters. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: i know, poor rosie. the girl's life has simply gone mad.

thanks for the review!

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I think I'm in love with this story :)

I've been meaning to read it for a while and I'm glad i have

Author's Response: ahhh thank you so much.
i'm glad you took the time to read it.
i just have to update now.
im so lazy. ^^;

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I think this is lovely :) I think you deal with the issue of leukemia in a good way as well :) Can't wait for more

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Aw that was cute :) but also quite bittersweet, in the sense that Sev is looking forward to going to Hogwarts but ends up having quite a miserable time. It was good :D

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Hehe loved it as usual!
I thought it was nice that Hufflepuff won :P
10/10 keep it up!

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ooh how could you end it there? I hate suspense, and I can't wait for the new chapter so i can see what happens!
x

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Wow, it's so good! I always get so excited when i see you've posted a new chapter!

10/10

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much!

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Aw that's sweet :)
I do like this, i really do.
And it's nice to see someone writing Roger Davies, since I think there's so much opportunity with him, since his character isnt really developed in the books.
10/10, i'm waiting for Chapter number 5!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know! I love it because I can write so much about him without being too out of canon.

Thanks for the review!

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