brilliant as ever my dear one.
i'm thinking i might use dear severus for this image, i'm sure i could find a picture of a snape-like little boy singing, possibly in drag.
love you you great mushroom (i mean that in a good way.)Author's Response: that would be lovely thankyou Report Review
piccie of jean? yay, nay? screw it as artistic director of this little popsicle stand i shall do what i want! YEAH!
tee hee hee.
seventh year boys are damn sexy. boo ya!
i invented a new word
well its sort of a word sort of an anagram (is that right? laught out loud = lol? whatevs)
ahah! its a word/anagram lovechild!
well i loveth it.
i shall stop now...eth!
later.Author's Response: of course. you very much make me lol. perhaps we could do a Remus picture? maybe with a werewolf as well? (well obviously, a wolf. please don't use the werewolf they had in POA because frankly, that was retarded. It looked like a bald monkey with fangs. So yes.) Whatever you do, it will be smashing, because you are a creative genius, and I love you. xx Report Review
i really love this story. i've read it before, a few times actually. it sits in my favourites for when i get into a mood. i just can't read happy fluffy fics when i read somethign sad and depressing. this is something i can turn to to not transfer me from sad to happy but to make me cry yet still feel ok.
i probably sound like a lunatic.
it's just... you write them as imperfect and special and lily as something binding and whole that comforts as well as seeking comfort. its the world and the people in it explained in four different people. the broken the beaten the bruised. all of those who help yet find it hard to seek help. the destructive and the mending, the hurt and the whole. people who remain faceless and in shadows when compared to those that seem naturally attractive to us. the mothers, the fathers, the broken childeren. all of it.
i cry at the start at how sad it all is, i keep crying. i cry at the end because of the injustice and lies. yet i'm not depressed because i know that the truth helps. that the people so broken found what they needed - even if it was evil and cruel - because its how it is supposed to be.
i don't hate peter in this because the choice to kill his friends made him. he may have found regret, remorse and pain in losing them, but he found himself in the fact that he could show the loyalty that lily spoke of.
i probably should stop now, you have over a hundres reviews telling you how great it is so i don't need to say it.
what i will say is short (especially after the mess i've just written for you).
it moved me. Report Review
i like how she reapeats her self. it makes sense that she's thinking but it just keeps flashing through her mind.
in and out.
in and out.
the theoretical cookies are probably all gone but the thought of irony remains.
"anna's in a box."
and there is nothing left but the promise of something.Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for the trippy little review! Report Review
i never thought in all of my years of being that i could hate james.
but i do now.
the pranks are great, the sleep talking ingenious because there isn't anyway it could be linked back to the pranker (is that even a word?) bt i really love it.
the banner is on it's way, i emailed it to you a little while ago so should be there now. like BAM! that is how fast the net is. so very cool.
well keep going with this story and your writing is just as good as pheonix lullaby's.
freddy >.Author's Response: Aww. Thank you so much, Freddy. I really like the banner. I know it's not what I asked for, but it looks really cool. I can't thank you enough. I've been trying to get a banner for awhile. Report Review
sweet. i'll make an image on wednesday after tasmazia. k?
i'm thinking of animatin your banner. you know how i said i had the one with harry and lis on each side of the eyes, well i though of keeping it the same just having them flicker in and out like a dodgy tv. yay? nay?
see you son.
>.Author's Response: nah i like the way it is at the moment, if that's alright with you
hey you get back today eh!
did you get my email with the chapter images i should enjoy?
not meaning to be pushy (almost wrote pishy lol) Report Review
poor sirius. sniffle. i mean i knew it happened and all but it's still upsetting.
please update soon.
freddy >.Author's Response: Thanks for the fantabulous review Fred! Report Review
as always, as brilliant as an aubergine.
they are quite cool.
and purple.Author's Response: I think they are very cool too.
xxx Report Review
she is lavlav's mama?
didn't see that coming.
cherry red doc's. sigh.Author's Response: ah i know i want some Report Review
nellie wellie bellie, is really quite oblivious sometimes. but i love her dearly.
and i guess peter too.
traitorous little rat.
i also like the idea of nellie the super hero. and nellie spending christmas at james' house.
but the bit about her parentals mad me sad. at least they're ok.
sorry, i couldn't find any typos but well my spelling isn't exactly very good, and i do have a bir of an oblivious streak.
plus i couldn't type to save my life.
10/10Author's Response: i'm glad you love the characters.
i love peter :D
he's on of my favs.
yeah, at least they're okay and it does serve plot purpose.
haha, i'm sure you could.
xxxxx Report Review
i absolutely love the story.
so i made you a banner! ta da!
ok so here's my email email@example.com
email me and i'll sned it to you.
then if you need other banners or chapter images, don't hesitate to ask.
9/10Author's Response: Thanks so much for the banner Fred, it ROCKS!!!! Report Review
"Boys are so wierd."
so my gibberty-anne, waddup Dawggg?
i do love stalkeres being stalked by someone who disaproves stalking.
'tis a good chapter, image will be up soonish.Author's Response: ha ha yes
thanku for images Report Review
turnip.Author's Response: for you Report Review
you can't do that. it's mean. you can't just leave it RIGHT when he discovers them. though i thought he sort of already knew? probably my brain doing things but it's just some of the things that sirius said that hinted he knew is all.
hope you did well on your politics test and please update soon.
10/10...xAuthor's Response: haha, i did ;) You'll find out more in that situation next chapter.
thank you so much.
xx Report Review
hey it's me.
just talking bout the banner thing, that i mentioned in a previous review (chapter 5 or 6)
it shows up on my computer as the blank box with the little red X in the corner.
but maybe it's just my computer.
i can aske LATOABS if you want (she's my sister) coz maybe it's something to do with the URL.
but don't fret too much, these things are usually easily fixed.Author's Response: Yeah actually it did it on my computer last night but then it showeed up again and it did it again this morning I've emailed your sister about it so hopefully it'll be fixed soon! Report Review
hey. good chapter, and don't worry about the secret compartment thing, i got it so hopefully everyone else will also.
plz update this one soon.Author's Response: Thanks fredthefrog252! Good 'cause I was afraid y'all readers would be a bit confused on that part. I'll try to update soon! Thanks a million for reading and reviewing fredthefrog252!
-DestinyPrayer Report Review
i was expecting smut.
though i supose that would have been really blatantly obvious.
whatever. where's the smut?
good chapter though.
ps. thought i should mention your banner's not working, you should get LATOABS on it.Author's Response: hah! Lol
I love the title of this chap.
Mainly 'cuz I knew what you sick minded readers would think!!
Thanks for the review, though if you could explain more 'bout the banner I'd appreciate it, cuz on my PC it looks ok, but that might just be me. Report Review
was there a dog in here just now?Author's Response: what?
was there a dog?
what the hell are you on about? Report Review
hello. it's me.
i really like it. doesn't matter that it isn't like usual, sad bit s make the funny bits funnier, breaks up the monotony.
well i've decided that i don't like the banner that i made for you so i shall make another.
because exams are over and i'm bored out of my bananas.
crapola, now i'm hungry.Author's Response: thanks heaps for the review and the offer,
it's a very lovely banner but if you're bored than knock yourself out Report Review
i'm confuzzled. how long has magmatron been attending hogwarts?
and if longer than say this year why is it that she doesn't know remus and mouse-man?
yeah, that's what i thought.Author's Response: only a year that's why she doesn't know them lol
you are a freak x Report Review
ah! tonksies. yay.
great chapter as always.
please update soon. Report Review
oooh. fights up next. excitement.
does that mean that sirius finds out about regulus? coz that would be cool.
please update soonish.Author's Response: Haha, you'll have to find out ;) xx Report Review
sorry to hear bout the hand. i had a friend who was making spaghetti and when putting the pasta in the pot got distracted and dunked her whole hand, scolding it. she couldn't move it at all for ages. but she was highly medicated for the pain so probably not as bad as you.
why do you need to hear about some random reviewers friend with hand pains? beats me.
i ramble. i've been told i ramble.
but the story is as awesome as usual. yup definately up to it's high standards of awesomeness. it's all awesomes-a-go-go here.
damnit i'm rambling again.
i probably should shutup now but well i want to ramble about oliver a bit.
i love how you've written him. he's sort of quidditch obsessed but with layers.
he's like one of those chocolate easter eggs with the creamy caramel filling. you sort of see the egg and expect chocolate, which is yum, but then you are suprised by the incredibly yummy gooey caramel centre.
you see oliver and expect hunk-of-spunk who is obsessed with quiditch, but then he's also funny, charming and eyebrow cocker extraodinaire.
voila: caramel filling.
unless of course you don't like caramel. it could be some sor of strawberry or peppermint cream i guess. whatever floats your boat.
well i think i've rambled enough about chocolate eggs.
i'm actuall really hungry now. damnit.
well 10/10 as always.
please update soon. Report Review
bu bu baaahhhm.
ok so there was my dramatic sound.
what's jean look like? i'll make an image with her in it.
yes i'm awesome.Author's Response: thankyou my darling! we rocked at softball lol.
jean is short and her hair is a different colour every week (think magenta, purple, yellow, green, red etc)
but go crazy with her i don't care. she doesn't have to be too pretty just quite charismatic
thanks luv xox Report Review
oooh! cliff hanger!
i do rather enjoy cliff hangers. they are rather awesome. in a sense i guess.
though they can be annoying. at times.
i'm listening to a really awesome song by prodigy it is called "smack my bitch up!" it doesn't sound like a very nice title i know but the music is awesome.
and i will make an image a soon as i can there's just a lot of stuff going on you should know. Exams :(
but the image for chapter one of maggie is up now! woot.
love you babe. see you at school tomorrow (and the bike centre for caitlin's bash wootness)
oh ho ho! i know what you want mr. man! you want a sausage roll!
actually i want a curried chicken pie. and that's everyday.
i'll shut up now.Author's Response: it's actually only ho ho. it's been annoying me for a while. sorry. i'm a bit finicky about things like that as you know.
though mother has informed me that that may not be entirely correct. oops.
thankyou for the 10/10
it makes me happy, like i'm actually good at this fanfiction business.
once again, thankyou for all your chapter images and banners! you are an ANGEl Report Review
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