ah i have had a huge break from this site and was overwhelmingly excited to see an update from this story when i came back. wonderful writing, i do hope that the next chapter comes soon, this story drags me back in every single time :)

Author's Response: thank you! update should be soon!

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hey! good to see some family interaction in the story... it's a good turn away from all the intense interaction with sirius. fairly sad chapter all the same though, really emotional and really... real. it was well written, like you could really feel what the characters were feeling. it wasn't just the moping, emotional type, it was people getting frustrated with the situation and not knowing what to do. i liked that, it was extremely normal like in reality.

keep up the good job! :)... sirius again soon though? lol...

-aphrodites dream xoxox

p.s: why isn't your banner working? :(

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woo hoo!! lol, been waiting for this moment for so long!! sooo glad lol!! thankyou for writing such a beautiful, happy chapter. i'm so happy :) can't wait for the next one, this was written really well, by the way... really really good job done on this one... -aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing and bothering to wait it out for things to begin to work out. again, thanks loads :D

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ooo... the tension is good :) i loved these lines: “Because I’m actually a very lovely person…� “I don’t see it.� “Well if you opened your eyes—“ “I like them closed.� haha, they were very well written! i loved it... i could picture that stubborness so clearly in my head! i'm glad you can find the time to get a chapter out close to exams, i'm proud of you lol, because i know i could definitly not! thanks for another chapter, very well done! loving the sirius/ally interaction :) -aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you were able to see the stubbornness that they both posses because it does become an issue for them in later chapters and I wanted to get that aspect of their personalities across. And thank you so much for you big reviews, I really look forward to them.

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o, some tension. a good chapter, although i love the interaction between sirius and ally it was a good idea to put this in, to get someone elses point of view on their relationship, or lack of lol.
a nice change to see that lily isn't exactly friends with the lead charatcer in the story, adds to the originality... although i seem to think they will become a little closer to friendship because of all this drama betwen sirius and ally...? i dunno, maybe i'm just absolutley off track though... lol.
well, it was good to see another chapter up so quickly! hope you keep up the interesting storyline :)
-aphrodites dream xoxox


Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews, they've been brilliant. I had most of these chapters pre-written so they've been up pretty quickly. But I haven't started the 4th chapter (bad annie), been to caught up in my other story, oops.

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well done again! i'm really enjoying this story, ally is a very believable character and very easy to like. loving the tension between sirius and herself... it's promising something interesting i'm sure :)
hope you update again sometime soon!
-aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the reviews. It's true, I really can't help myself when it comes to songs. I have about 14 I've written down that I want to include at some stage. It's sad really, ;). Chapter 3 is in the process of being validated. Hopefully it will give a little more insight into Ally. I'm glad you like her.

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very nice start! i'm off to read chapter 2, but i like the incorporation of song lyrics, i've always loved inspirational songs in stories :)
well done!
-aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: Thank you!

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i'm so glad to see you back! true, it was a filler but still very well written and explained, i actually really enjoyed it. but i definitly cant wait for some more sirius lol...
good job! keep it up!
-aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: thanks a lot
more sirius is up

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hey, great chapter to start off again with! got me hooked once again... you've left me wondering so much, there's sooo many opens doors, it's really well written!
-aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying my story :)

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oh, haha, brilliant ending! that last line made me laugh...
great job, i love shakespeare and you've definitly used some beautiful text from his work.
-aphrodites dream xoxo

Author's Response: Well, thank you! :)

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whoa!! that poem was absolutely gorgeous! you're really talented :)
that was a really great one-shot, even though it was only one chapter it had enough plotline to keep me hooked the whole time...
congrats on such a great story!!
-aphrodites dream xoxox

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm rather proud of that poem, so I'm glad that everyone likes it so much. I did my best to imagine how he was feeling. Well, again, thank you!

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wow, that was really beautiful and heartfelt and although it did move quite quickly, it didn't make any difference in the wonderfulness of this chapter! loved it lots, well done!
can't wait to see whats in store for these characters... argh! can't believe next chapter is last... i'm so glad you updated though, it has been a long time lol! was so worth it though, once again, a beautiful chapter :)
xoxox

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ohhh, nice job, lovely chapter, i loved it!
and too random is wonderful, referring to your reply to my other review lol :)
i'm interested by evee and malfoy, it's intriguing...
yay, i'll read the next installation tomorrow...
thanks for some lighthearted material for me to read!
xoxox

Author's Response: ah, look at the pack of pink pinstriped llamas. just adding to the random. la la random... ok, I'm far too tired.
anyway sweets, we all need some light-hearted entertainment to get our giggles on.
Ciao mi bella! (I'm hyper cos it's my bday tomorrow and I'm getting old... 19 *sniffle*...)
Elle xx

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lol... oh my gosh, how random are these girls?! lol, loved it...
another great chapter! :)
xoxox
(sorry for the shortness of this review, but i'm not actually feeing too well at the moment...)

Author's Response: how random is too random? never random enough! glad you got a laugh sweets. Love, Elle xx

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hey! lol, nice start to your story! i'm enjoying it throughly already, and you're right, it certianly is a change from the dramatics and angst in 'Shine On'...
the reference towards pirates of the caribbean was so cool... lol, i can just imagine a girl version of jack sparrow!
now, i've got to go and do homework, but tomorrow, i shall come back and read more... can't wait!
sure the next one will be just as good :)
xoxox

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much honey! 'Shine On' is wonderfully done, but I thought you might need a laugh away from your dramatics.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and came by to read it, I really appreciate it. It's just a bit of fun and I'm glad you found it entertaining.
Much love, Elle xx

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yay!! an update... i'm so glad :)
i actually think it was really, really well written... there's nothing bad about it at all!
hope to see some more chapters soon... keep up the great work!!
xoxox

Author's Response: haha thanks! i'll certainly try to

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oh wow... that was really really beautiful!! i actually loved it...
well done on some more fantastic chapters!!!
thanks again for an awesome update!
xoxox

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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hey... yay, another fantastic chapter!! sounds great with whats to come... can't wait for another one!!
please update soon :)
xoxox

Author's Response: another one is up! thanks for reviewing

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hey!! wow... this chapter has cetainly opened alot of doors for new plotlines and everything else under the sun, can't wait to see what happens next!!
great to see an update, lovin your stories!!
thanks for the chapter :)
xoxox

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hey, really great chapter! the scene between leda and sirius when she first entered the room was written amazingly true... it was explained brilliantly! keep up the fantastic work!! can't wait for the next chapter...
xoxox

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m pretty sure that’s what like the Room of Requirement would look like if I was to ever visit it so it was nice to write about my paradise.

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hey... yay, this is coming along nicely still! loving it... leda and sirius are such a good couple, it's great!
thanks for another update, cant wait for the next one... :)
xoxo

Author's Response: it's out. thanks for reading!

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hey... this is coming along beautifull still!
loving it lots... a bit different from anything i've ever read before, i like the twists and scenarios... your writing is great!!
thanks for updating... can't wait for another one!!
xoxox

Author's Response: Thankkk you! The next one is already out. I don’t know what’s going on with HPFF but they’ve just gone on a crazy validating spree! I’m contemplating whether or not to post more right away or let these two new chapters sink in… hmmm

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hiii! i see that you haven't got many reviews at the moment, but that shouldn't let you down because this story is going beautifully!! i'd love to read about what happens next... you're onto something good here :)
hope you update soon, and keep up the good work!
xoxox

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review! :D

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haha that chapter was awesome! i really, really liked it... you can really relate to how the three girls act.
another great chapter, hoping for another one soon!

Author's Response: Oooh tnank you soo soo much! I'm so glad you liked it hehe and I'll definitely try to update as soon as I can!

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nice work! sorry bout the incredibly late review, but i've been away on holidays... yay. but yeah, this should prove another interesting twist in the story, cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Awww, heya, no worries! A late review is way better than no review at all! Thanks hun! The next chappie should be up soon! Thanks so much for being a faithful reviewer!
Love ya
PearloftheOcean a.k.a Sonia
xxxxxx

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