I loved it! I generally dont like Mary Sue stories but love Padfoot so I gave it a try.Author's Response: Mary Sue??
Libby is not a Mary Sue, hun. . . Report Review
Alright. So it was ok. Not spectacular but an alright try for your first slash fic. I liked it but it moved really fast and could have been a few chapters long. It was also dripping, oozing with sap. But it was pretty good.Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate that. I'm thinking about trying another one, but yeah it could have been better, but that was just a one shot. I may even try another one soon, making it longer. That would be quite fun to try. Like I say, haven't been down this road before, so it's new to me. Report Review
w...t...f...Author's Response: Hehe Report Review
OK this time im not going to put everytime you have done it in here but harry re reads his letters alot.. almost every letter.. like he doesnt get it the first time.Author's Response: He's supposed too. Wouldn't you reread your letters if you were trying to sort out your feelings and maybe figure out who the other person was? Report Review
I like how you say that harry doesnt know if its a guy or girl but you refer to the "stella" as him alot...Author's Response: Hehe, thanks. Report Review
The sun was breaking through a curtain
the sun broke through the curtains
sun was blazing from the window through the gap in the curtain
the sun broke through the gap in his curtain.
OK WE GET IT HE HAS A SUN AND A CURTAIN THAT ITS GOING THROUGH... seriously that is 4 out of the first five chapters that started off with that.. Its not so original anymore. but other than that... the story 'sokayAuthor's Response: Okay, I'm sorry you didn't like that, but it was how I was describing the day. Please don't use caps like that. Report Review
hmm... Only a few problems. Electronic devices dont work at hogwarts because there is too much magical interfereance.. It says so in book four. And... How is Draco going to feed his fish o.O??
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