CUTE!
im really liking this story, write faster.
Is there gonna be some Michelle/Remus action?
...

Author's Response: LOL! There sure is lmao!!

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Gee, whoever wrote this must be really cool!

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AAAGH! *blows nose*
Thats SIX times ive
read it and IM STILL
CRYING!!!
*moans* so beuatiful...
HOW COULD YoU DO
THAT TO LIBBY!!
AAAGH!!!
*hiccup*
look what youve done.
i used to be a perfectly
sane, hpff is trashy
person and now im
obsessed!

WRITE MORE!!
*blows nose*
sob sob

Author's Response: Aw, i'm sorry. lol. we all get obsessed, don't worry. haha.

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MORE!@!
luvin it.
sad but...

Author's Response: Thanks! It'll be up soon :)

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*moans!*
dont make will and rhian sex
their kids will be quater blood!
no!


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nice. im loving the griffindors cheering.

Author's Response: thanks for your review!

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Capturing.
A few too many adjectives; makes reading very heavy.
Nice overall.

Author's Response: I can assure yout he following chapters are lighter for a long while, I wanted the prologue to be separate from them for the most part, but I am glad you thought it all right even with excessive adjectives :) . Thanks for reviewing!

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Nice.
Not too soppy, well written.

Author's Response: Thanks :)


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nice, but stop making her not evil. also get her tomake out with rodolphus, sleep with kaethe then dump him and expose sirius to his girlfriend.

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