im really liking this story, write faster.
Is there gonna be some Michelle/Remus action?
...Author's Response: LOL! There sure is lmao!! Report Review
Gee, whoever wrote this must be really cool! Report Review
AAAGH! *blows nose*
Thats SIX times ive
read it and IM STILL
*moans* so beuatiful...
HOW COULD YoU DO
THAT TO LIBBY!!
look what youve done.
i used to be a perfectly
sane, hpff is trashy
person and now im
sob sobAuthor's Response: Aw, i'm sorry. lol. we all get obsessed, don't worry. haha. Report Review
sad but...Author's Response: Thanks! It'll be up soon :) Report Review
dont make will and rhian sex
their kids will be quater blood!
nice. im loving the griffindors cheering.Author's Response: thanks for your review! Report Review
A few too many adjectives; makes reading very heavy.
Nice overall.Author's Response: I can assure yout he following chapters are lighter for a long while, I wanted the prologue to be separate from them for the most part, but I am glad you thought it all right even with excessive adjectives :) . Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Not too soppy, well written.Author's Response: Thanks :)
nice, but stop making her not evil. also get her tomake out with rodolphus, sleep with kaethe then dump him and expose sirius to his girlfriend. Report Review
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