Aww fluffiness :D Loved the chapter, I'm so glad that you updatedAuthor's Response: It was pretty fluffy, wasn't it? Report Review
interesting, I think I'm going to like this story Report Review
heheh, this story is brilliantly written, and such unique character! Report Review
lol, love the chapter, really well written, can't wait for an update ^_^Author's Response: Thank you! :D It makes me so happy every time someone says that what I write is well written.. x) I'll try to update soon! Report Review
awww how sweet *is teary eyed now*Author's Response: Awhh I'm sorry... is that good or bad... lol ty for the review! x Report Review
'being caught in sexual position that were innocent in their points of views'
there's an idea, lol, BRILLIANT story I am so loving it!Author's Response: Ooh ty, and thanks soo much ^_^ Report Review
Great chapter very well written can't wait for an update ^_^Author's Response: Thank you, I'm gald you like it. I'll update as soon as I can Report Review
Really good story I really like the plot Report Review
Love the story so farAuthor's Response: thanks i'm glad. Report Review
No, don't leave it at that, I was so hooked onto the story -_- *le sigh* until next time :)Author's Response: I suppose the chapters must end somewhere. I do feel bad that you were left hanging though. I suppose if you were hooked, you must be enjoying it to a particular degree so thank you! And thank you for taking the time to review! Report Review
heheheheh brilliant chapter!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
hilarious, the chapter was extremely funny and enjoyable great work ^_^Author's Response: Thankers!
I was a little apprehensive about this one and I even considered just keeping it as a one-shot but I thought 'what the hell! I've written it now- it can jolly well go up!'
Thanks for the review
Lv Wizardora Report Review
oh wow, I love the diary idea, I've seen it done a few times, but yours it deffintly well done, to get to know each other, and you reall did mean a chapter a day, wow, haha I say that a lot don't I? Sorry.
Anyway, back to the story, unlike alot of people, you have a good perspective of Lily, not the clichÃ©, but more... correct? I don't know how to say it...
And The Lily/James realtion, normally people make it she shouts and screams when ever he touches her, but the one you've written, she just get's annoyed that he keeps asking her things and being a bit sleazy at times... or cheesy. ^_^
Brilliant update, I hope you enjoy writing as much as I do reading it Author's Response: Hello :)
Thanks so much for your continued support!! And I'm glad it's obvious that I don't believe Lily and James were in shouting matches all the time. They surely did have their differences, and I don't think they never argued - loudly at that - but surely not all the time. But when her temper does snap, you'd want to be far away *grin*
And yes, it's disgusting how much I enjoy writing this. It will only be 6 chapters in total and 5 are done... so hopefully I'll get to keep up the chapter-a-day.
Thanks so much!! ~PBM :) Report Review
woah sweet as chapter, I like how you've got a unique pairing and a unique story it looks like this is going to be a beautiful and tragic romance story, I can't wait to see what happens ^_^Author's Response: Thanks very much for reviewing!! =) I'm currently finishing off the final chapter, so you won't have to wait too long for the updates :) If all goes to plan, one per day... ^_^ Report Review
o.o... well then... nah jokes, I've read much worse (scaring pairing-Rita Skeeter/Bellatrix Lestrange)
Really well written chapter though, I can see your writing has imporved greatly since the first chapter ^__~Author's Response: Oh, thank you. Sorry for the Pansy/Hermione one. It was necessary... ^_^ Report Review
Reading this story made me feel so... dedicated to something, I felt as if I was there, and at times I felt as if I could smell the burning of flesh, you are an inspirational author and I hope you write professionally ^_~Author's Response: Oh, wow, Foxy Lady, thank you so much! Considering how much I want to be published someday, your review means a lot. I'm glad to hear that you liked the story, and thought it worked well.
~Megan Report Review
very good,and romantic (aww) I love this story i gave me the impuse to write my own fem-sash (different era and pairings) yayAuthor's Response: *sweat drop runs down my temple* I'm fearing ALL Romione shippers would kill me for this chapter. Thanks, you like this story. ^_^ Report Review
hmm... nice story, nice chapter, I find that some of this is pretty sweet and original while other bits are slightly clichÃ©, be careful with being clichÃ© aside from that it's a wicked story ^_~Author's Response: Yeah, I hope it doesn't get too cliche, I don't want it to be. Maybe once the story gets more developed, it will even out. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
nah it was good really good, I swear ^_^Author's Response: thank you!! that chappie took me 4eva to write n i'm glad u like it! Report Review
woah, what a cliffhanger, o.o what happens next...? I want to know so badley lol, I LOVE this story so muchAuthor's Response: Thank you. I'll update soon, so you'll see what happens next. ^_^ Report Review
Nice chapter, alot of laughs in this one htat escaped my lips, hahah, Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
nice ending to the chapter, an this is a really interesting story, I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! =D Report Review
haha nice chapter, really well done. And from friends to enemies back again eh? cool lol Report Review
It was brilliant, quite a Rolling On the Floor Laughing, especially the beginning. 'S always good to be a pain. lolAuthor's Response: Thank you!
~LB Report Review
O.O oh, oh no Faith can't be dead *tears* she's a surviver!
*sigh* oh well Bobbie seems to have the same attitude as Faith yayAuthor's Response: yeah i know but the story wouldn't work if she didn't kick the bucket (to put it nicely. hehe) thanks for reading! and reviewing. Report Review
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