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Author's Response: Ty. :)

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I hate to be a jerk and only review the bad but, its all I do. During the part where Bella is making fun of Alice she says she isn't a pure blood, but she has to be if Nevill it pure. Also, during the part where Dumbledor says five names, it acutally six.

Author's Response: If you read my respone to my other reviews reflecting Alice, I know that she was a pureblood because Neville is one. However I wanted to add that in to show that there is a general hate for the Slytherins besides James and Lily's group. And the Dumbledore thing, whoops, but thanks for pointing that out. Once I get to my other fanfics I'll come back and edit again.
Thank you!

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Wow I must say that was the best beginning ever. Perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Jenn

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Great. Loved it. Some confusing parts but good overall. Just wish I knew where James and Lily were going.

Author's Response: Hmmmm I dont think even I know that yet ... any ideas??? Kidding xx thanks xx

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Ok well I didn't know you could listen to medal. Its metal with a 't'. Also if your going to add that she likes metal then I'm pretty sure she wouldn't like Nickleback for the fact that they aren't a metal band. Come on if it was a metal band have metal songs, but if its a rock band then say she likes rock not metal, as they are in my opion different. Ex. Slipknot-metal ACDC, Nickleback=rock

Author's Response: well, i consider them kind of both. really, they are something to bang your head to and that is really all i care about, but thanks for your opinion. ^_^ you should be on speach and debate. (i hope i spelled that right. as you can probably tell, i can't spell. )

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Dude. Come on is it me or are these stories getting lamer and lamer. Washing hands. Come on lets do better than that

Author's Response: Its a metaphor. no, dont get it? ohhhh well.

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I'm thinking a sequel would be nice. :-)


Author's Response: More chapters are coming. I promise there are more surprises involved in the story as a whole. :-)

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Another great one! Only a few problems with it, probably not a thing you like to hear. I was more thinking that Ro should have been great in everything especially healing but not Syltherin. Only because then it would be wierd that dark wizards would derive from a holy healing one. Also maybe Syltherin could have been a potions wiz, because both Snape and Slughorn are. Everything was good though. Maybe you can send me your ideas on this one too, I'd like to know.
Reader and Fan,
TMell

Author's Response: I shall respond to these points in an e-mail, as doing so here would leak information about the story. :)

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Aight! of course I will. Also, fearing the worst I started my own fic if u wanna check it out. It seems though that it wont be as good as the seeker universe. i don't have time to read it now as im going skiing but i will asap
my email is tony.mellen@charter.net leave me whatever you want so i will have ur email for when i get back

Author's Response: An e-mail is on its way . . . this could get interesting. :)!

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it was ok. i think the part with the friendship and each person saying part of it is a little... girlish i guess

Author's Response: Alright. Thanks for a review and you are entitled to your own opinion.
Thanks for the review,
LMW

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your a pretty good writer keep it up.


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Hey ummm I thought of another story. Missing moment after Harry and Ginny kiss in HBP. And also keep that seventh year story in mind. :-) from you annoying reviewer TMell

Author's Response: Hmmm . . . interesting . . . keep those ideas coming -- I don't find them annoying!

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Well another wonderful story. I don't think you should write a final battle fic though... you should write Harry's entire 7th year startin with him going to the Weasly's, including the Seeker part and lots of other fun ideas. If you need my email just ask for it in you next story or something because I have alot of ideas for that story just not enough time to write it... and I'm definatly not as good of a writer as you. Again if you want any help just post something asking me to help/telling me to stop bugging you in your next story.


Author's Response: The entire year? . . . maybe. I'll definitely be contacting you though -- I'd love to bounce my own ideas off of someone!

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Now to me this story isn't as great as I originally thought for a few reasons. Dont get me wrong it is a wonder full story but... there are a few things I think are wrong. One is the whole time-turner thing. Two is how Hermione and Ron think that they are going to help Harry in the final battle when I think they wouldn't even suggest it. Another is the horcruxes, you made some of them up but, it just as well could have been Griffendor's sword, we did see Voldemort point his wand at it in HPB. These were just a few of my thought while reading this story, but all in all a very good one.

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It seems to me the further in the reading I go the more pieces that JKR hinted at and some of the knowns are displayed. You have kept up with every artical I've read on the subject and I like that.
It's long too, another plus

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Well silly me forgot to tell you in my other review that if you need anything I will try to help you. Such as ideas or a reviewer before you post. You are probably the best writer on here.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind offer! I may well take advantage of it! And while I'm sure I'm not the best author here . . . well, it's nice to hear it! Thanks so much for all your reviews!

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You my friend are the BEST! Oh and BTW I'm a guy.

Author's Response: My HUMBLEST apologies!!!! Ack, now I'm embarrassed! Sorry.

But I'm glad you enjoyed the story, sir !

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Ok all in all a great story. But all I have to say is DAM! The last insight was what really made this a good one.

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