Well done =] Update soon, please.

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Beautifully written =] Please update soon.

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Keep up the great work =]

Author's Response: Thanks!!! :D

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I love it =] Update soon please ^-^

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm working on updates right now. I hope to have some up before long. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope you come back for the later chapters.

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Excellent job =] Can't wait for another update ^-^

Author's Response: Cool thanks for reading this far! And also thanks for reviewing and such.

Also, you have a great penname :)

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Aww. That was wonderful. Simply wonderful. (Not in the sense that Molly losing her children is 'wonderful' xD). You have excellent grammar, and I love your writing style =] Brilliant job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :]

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Beautifully written =] There isn't really much more I can say xD Your story-line was excellent, as was your grammar. Great work!

Author's Response: thanks - getting on to your story. :)

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Very well-written =] I can't wait for an update! Keep up the great work x]

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I can keep the story up to your liking :-). Chapter 13 is about 25% of the way done, but I should have more than half of it finished by tomorrow.

Thanks again!

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I really like this so far =] I'm especially you fixed the formatting problems from the earlier chapters; I end up skipping lines if they're too close together xD Great job, and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: ^^ yeah, i' going to fix that up soon. but i'm glad you struggled though it!
Mali

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