Well...your "getting good" is not progressing. It's a good think that you can take critizism. Are you like 5? Why do you write in ALL subject-verb sentences. Try some variety. As the editor of the Hellhole Times I'm always glad to share some writing tips. However, I feel that you are a lost cause. To say it bluntly...your writing sucks. Have a lemon zesty day. (That's how I end all of my columbs).
P.S.-- Can I use your chapter for a "What Writing Should Never Be" colum? I will be sure to credit you. Report Review
Wow wiggidy wow! That was awful, i'm a better writer than you, and that saying something because I write for the Hellhole Times. You should never ever EVER write again. I hurts people, I burns their eyes out. I hurts my five harry-potter-obessed children. Damn you. Report Review
I haven't gotten a chance to read your story, but I did notice that you have a really mysterious looking dude on your banner. Who is it?Author's Response: Please see my response to your previous identical review. Report Review
I haven't gotten a chance to read your story, but I did notice that you have a really mysterious looking dude on your banner. Who is it?Author's Response: LOL! Well, I'd love for you to read it, of course, but in the meantime, it's Ralph Fiennes....the actor who plays Lord Voldemort. Gorgeous, isn't he? Report Review
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