Yes! Continue, as soon as you can!Author's Response: yes, I'm currently watin' for my next chapter validation and worki' on my next one.
thank you! Report Review
Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! Report Review
Oh, that was so cute! Good job. It's such an unusual pairing, but with so many possibilities, and you did a nice job with it. Report Review
Can you please do Fame? Listen to the lyrics from the musical, and you'll see it fits with Voldie!
I'm gonna live forever, I'm gonna learn how to fly...HIGH! Report Review
Oh my gosh, I love this story! It's cool how you tie in the little details from the books and put them in sucessfully. Your characters are well thought out too. But what's Remus going to do if Adrian's around to be the rule-abider?Author's Response: Maybe actually get Sirius and James to follow the rules. Report Review
Wow...that's pretty odd, but entertaining. Your prophesy was REALLY specific. cool thoughAuthor's Response: thanks Report Review
Oh my gosh, I love this! Great job. I've never read such an interesting story about Merope before! (Nice Jane Eyre reference with Ingram over there)Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! Haha yep a little nod to one of my favorite books. I was almost going to name her Darcy for "Pride and Prejudice" but I thought Ingram went better with her name. Report Review
Awesome chapter. (Poor Ron, is he getting your reviews or have you already smoted him?) The whole Kings Cross scene made little sense, so I'm glad you've made it into something which makes less sense so it make perfect sense now.
â€śYes, yes.â€ť Harry placed his hands in his pockets and considered his situation, but he quickly gave up because nothing made any sense and evidently that was perfectly normal.
Isn't he still naked?Author's Response: Pooooor Ron. And I think you're right, Harry's still naked... that's just something I'm really not used to writing. Hm, I'll have to go back and edit that later. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is pretty cool. Report Review
Funny, in a odd sort of way. Good job. I'm going to stick around for the rest of this. Report Review
He does have some displaced anger, but considering his life and even his genetics, it's understandable.
Great job. Love it, as always. Just update soon!Author's Response: Thanks, I will update in about, 5 minutes :P. Report Review
Pretty clever note, but I think she was born on August 11.
Thought maybe it took time to do away with her and plant the new one.
How did anyone know they would be in contact with Harry? It's not some random coincidence that they met after all?Author's Response: I think you misunderstood something. Yes, Ginny Weasley was born on August 11, 1981. However, the girl we're talking about is Voldemort's Heir and she was born to Bellatrix Lestrange on August 10, 1981. The next day one of the two baby girls was killed, and one was taken out of the hospital. With Bellatrix and Voldemort involved, guess which baby didn't make it.
About your second question, I assume you're talking about the Weasleys meeting Harry. No, that was no coincidence. That was planned, by Dumbledore, most likely. The Weasleys are a pureblood family, and they know just enough to know that you don't talk loudly about a place being "packed with muggles" in a muggle train station. Dumbledore could have very easily told them Harry Potter would start that year, and they needed to say something that would catch his attention. Then Molly showed him enough affection to keep him there. Simple plan, really, and one of Voldemort's more brilliant ones. Report Review
Did I really spend a week waiting on this, and it's really this bad? Ugh.Author's Response: Yes, you did. Then again, this won't be the first or last time you do something bad. Don't give up hope and keep writing. (This review has been an eyesore on my page for too long. I really don't respond to my own reveiws on a normal basis. Report Review
Oh my gosh, if I didn't dislike her, I would totally have had my heart broken for her...Author's Response: I know what you mean. Even I felt sad writing it =[ Report Review
Pretty awesome. I'm writing a Slytherin!Harry fic as well and I wanted to see how various writers differ with this. Good job by the way, the flashbacks are kind of confusing, but its still good. Report Review
Really interesting idea. You have a good writing style, and you made the whole ego/id thing much easier to understand than my teacher did! Good job! :)Author's Response: Wow, thankyou! Haha! A fellow psych student! Lmao! Funnily enough - that's why this fic appeared - psychology revision!!!
Thanks for readng and reviewing! ^_^
Happy Easter! Report Review
Was there ever a part one?Author's Response: Haha no. Report Review
Ron's eleven. Would he really be having such thoughts about a girl?
Interesting all the same though.Author's Response: You caught my mistake. Sorry Report Review
Interesting time shift. Anyway, I like this and I can't wait till you talk about the Fourth Year. Great job :)Author's Response: Thank you Report Review
Glad you explained the House Elf speech :)
Cute. Report Review
The process of reading one's mind is Legimancy, not Occlumency, but I like the cliffhanger. Nice. Report Review
I know Nick is a small child, but you may want to work on the way he speaks. Not every small child sounds like a House Elf.
But otherwise, good writing. Report Review
Awesomest. Chapter. EVER!Author's Response: Gee *blushes* Thanx! Report Review
Oh my gosh, this is awesome! Usually, these types of stories are written really badly, but I'm hooked on this one. Good job! I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
You may want to check the Lexicon on the updated Potter family, and watch your editing. some parts sounded weird (and not on purpose).Author's Response: thanks Report Review
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