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Review #1, by Avanell 2Fingers Crossed (& Hope for the Best): Albus & Rose: A History

22nd April 2016:
Fabulous update...I should hate Albus too, but will give him a chance. Can't wait for what's soon until we get some Malfoy? :D And interesting meeting Arkie from back in the school daze...I mean, days :P

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review!
Yeah, Albus... he's interesting, I both love and hate him. I'm mean, it wasn't a very cousinly thing to do to Rose!

He's in the next chapter, which I've fully written, just doing some editing on. So, soon!


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Review #2, by Avanell 2Fingers Crossed (& Hope for the Best): Decisions, Quidditch & the Potters

10th April 2016:
Very intriguing update! Loved Hermione's chat with Rose, then the game. Interesting, I already hate Lily. And so curious about what happened with Rose and Al! Were they close before? When will Malfoy come into play again? I hope he never liked Lily...I'm a fan who always wants him always liking Rose, and Rose struggling to figure her own feelings out :D
I normally don't like stories that start after Hogwarts, but adore Rose's position and that she traveled after school. Went out on her own, right? Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you, once again, for reviewing!!

Lily, she's... she's a bit different, and I can understand why you hate her! I've pretty much made her a stuck up spoilt brat!

Rose and Al's history is actually in the next chapter. So, I won't give anything away about that! :P

Malfoy will properly come into the story very soon, and once he does, he sticks around!

I generally just read Hogwarts based stories myself too, so I can completely understand that. Thank you for giving this story a chance! She did travel out of her own, and hopefully I'll be able to get in some more details about it the future chapters.


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Review #3, by Avanell 2Should've Said No: Should've Thought Twice

9th April 2016:
Interesting short story. What was Ron intending to do, lol...? I don't normally read this type but saw your name on it :)

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Review #4, by Avanell 2Pride and Scorpius: Home for Christmas: Dawnsfirstbloom

3rd April 2016:
Loved Dawn meeting Harry...what an interesting homecoming of sorts. Great update!

Author's Response: Hi there my faithful reviewer.

I'm glad you liked Dawnsfirstbloom meeting Harry. I thought it might be a bit much for someone that she has heard of as a folk hero all her life. Moreover, the person who is directly responsible for her being able to attend Hogwarts. And to have Rose just call him Uncle Harry!

It is an interesting homecoming, and there are more shenanigans to come in the next chapter. I wonder exactly what the reactions of her friends are going to be ...

Thanks for the review, as of this response the story as a whole has had 6900 reads and this chapter has had 20,thank you all.

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Review #5, by Avanell 2Fingers Crossed (& Hope for the Best): The Tour

26th March 2016:
Loved the line (Rose's thought) ending with the NDE. Nice introduction to the job and the arena rooms. And of course Malfoy is on the team ;) I think I thought that and was happy to read it. Can't wait for their first interaction. I hope you include some of their relationship (or lack thereof) during school. Seems more the latter. Great update!

Author's Response: Thank you! That's probably one of my favourite lines so far too!
I'm glad you enjoyed it and hopefully didn't think this chapter was too boring!

Yes, he is on the team! And, you'll be happy to know that there is a bit about them in Hogwarts soon :)

Thank you so much for reviewing!!


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Review #6, by Avanell 2Actions Speak Louder than Words: Bent: Rose POV

25th March 2016:
And I was #69 for chapter 1! That's my birth year ;) Very interesting party. Scorpius is so sweet! Of course, lol. Love it! :D

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Review #7, by Avanell 2Actions Speak Louder than Words: Broken: Rose POV

25th March 2016:
Interesting start to this took the lure of being (hopefully) reviewer 700 to check it out. I've been tempted will definitely read more :)

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Review #8, by Avanell 2Fallen Through Time: Cornered

20th March 2016:
I just peaked at this chapter and noted this story in my log...Very curious to read when more chapters are published! :)

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Review #9, by Avanell 2Fingers Crossed (& Hope for the Best): Back to Reality

18th March 2016:
Interesting start to your story. Funny, it kind of read that Hermione loves reading and in loves both but then it was obvious she just shared her mom's position regarding the sport, lol.

Author's Response: Whoops, maybe I should re-word that part a little better!
Thank you for reviewing!


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Review #10, by Avanell 2Best Mistake: I've Told You Now

11th March 2016:
Uh-oh! Those darned kids...all of them speaking up when it is ROSE's situation!

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Review #11, by Avanell 2The Reunion: Ron and Hermione

11th March 2016:
Very sweet one-shot! Keep writing for sure. :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!!!

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Review #12, by Avanell 2Ronald & Hermione: Ronald & Hermione

6th March 2016:
Funny story...poor Ronald, trying to be Romeo :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #13, by Avanell 2Blind Sided: What The Hell.

6th March 2016:
Surprised that Hermione is against Scorpius, too. She should always be more logical and care for how people change. But that's just me, and it is YOUR story :) Other than that, loved the opening! Yes, a kiss will do...hopefully next? Or soon? :D

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Review #14, by Avanell 2Wrongly Known: Chapter 3 Bet, its my tree

5th March 2016:
Interesting story thus far!

Author's Response: Thank you! xx

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Review #15, by Avanell 2Pride and Scorpius: Home for Christmas: Scorpius

21st February 2016:
Great update! Loved Albus meeting Mrs Malfoy. And poor Scoprius, having to ask in such a manner (in the Manor, lol). Speaking of the Manor, loved the descriptions. Also enjoyed how he thought of Rose and what her parents and Albus' father had been through in the house.

Author's Response: I really like the character of Astoria. For someone we know nothing about from cannon, she must be an interesting person married to Draco. I always picture her as a force for good, shaping the young Scorpius into someone who would be worthy of the love of Rose. For that matter, a force for good in the life of Draco too.

I'm glad you liked the meeting between her and Albus. I really worked hard to get it right.

As to Scorpius, long have people been wanting a bit more from his point of view and a bit more about some of the things that drive him. I hope with this that some people see where he is coming from. Especially that bit with Rose's parents. It really speaks a lot to how Scorpius is as a person.

As for his father, I still hope that there is some mystery there, that I have not revealed too much. We see that he is stern and strict, Scorpius especially thinks so with a few choice assides that he drops. We shall see a bit more of Draco at a later date.

Thanks again for the review, as of this response the story as a whole has had 6389 reads and this chapter has had 33; thank you all.

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Review #16, by Avanell 2Kiandria and her Magic Wand: Chapter 21- Information overload, but only one fact matters

20th February 2016:
Fabulous update! 1. I can't remember, but I hope she isn't using Rose's name in her observation notes. 2. is there a reason why she keeps having the migraines? I mean, I just wish for an update without them, but if there is a purpose for the story, then I'm all on board! Can't wait for the quidditch fun. And more ;)

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Review #17, by Avanell 2The Roof Top: The Roof Top

5th February 2016:
So sweet! Lovely short story. Adored the proposal and the evening Ron planned. But...chilled merlot?!! LOL.

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Review #18, by Avanell 2Kiandria and her Magic Wand: Chapter 20- A Potter-Weasley Never Reveals their Secrets

31st January 2016:
Excellent update! loved that Kia saw Rose's memory and managed to get things calmed down between them...for now? LOL! Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh Kia, so caught up in everyone else's drama. Lol. Next update coming soon! Thanks again for the review!

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Review #19, by Avanell 2Crown Fire: Gryffindor's Scrolls

24th January 2016:
Interesting update...liked the talk about automatic and controlled processes and them working with magic :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I was a little nervous about this chapter, because it's mostly filler, but I wanted to give a plausible reason for Harry being able to do wandless magic!

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Review #20, by Avanell 2Finally: The sorting

24th January 2016:
Darn it Rose...I actually prefer when SHE gets in the Slytherin or Scorpius gets in the same house as her - Gryffindor or Ravenclaw. But alas, still enjoy these stories. just wish she wasn't so stubborn! But of course we know what will happen ;)

Author's Response: That we do ;)

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Review #21, by Avanell 2Finally: Hogwart's Express

24th January 2016:
Fun beginning...some grammar issues but that didn't get in the way.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will work to not have as many in the next chapters.

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Review #22, by Avanell 2Pride and Scorpius: Home for Christmas: Rose

20th January 2016:
Love, adore Ron and Hermione. Especially how she still sweeps him off his feet. But if she's recording, he can change the channel :P Another part read like Teddy's dad, Remus, was a muggleborn. Why am i so picky tonight LOL...weekday perhaps. Usually I don't mind and keep reading. Wait...maybe I am forgetting something lol.

Love Hermione's stories of the past...the old bat in the bookstore reminds me of P&P's Lady Catherine, lol!

Loved how Rose went to see her brother after the big reveal and after dinner. Awesome update! Loved it all.

Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for the great review as per usual.

I really, really love the pairing of Ron and Hermione. I can understand why JKR might say that she thought, in hindsight, that Hermione should have ended up with somebody different, but that's not the point. I really think that the two of them are as great as they are together because of their differences in character. The two make a better pair together than they do as the sum of their parts. They compliment each other. Hermione always knew this, but it took Ron years for him to realise, but once he did, that was it for him.

I wanted to capture what I felt would be their love, still strong and vibrant, years and years later. It is a little taste, but these three chapters in a row will all be about the parents and showing them all and giving us a glimpse into the adults that they have become.

A good catch. I had completely forgotten that Ted Tonks was Teddy's grandfather. For some reason in my mind I'd skipped the whole generation in between. I shall go and fix that straight away, thank you very much, so that the only hint that I'd ever made a mistake shall be excised from existance - except for that sentence in your review which from now on will make no sense. ;)

I am so glad that you liked Hermione's stories from the past. I tried to make them believable, logical and in character. It is so gratifying to me that my readers can pick up upon some of the scraps that I leave of my influence: Pride and Prejudice. That 'old bat' as you put it was definitely modelled upon Lady Catherine, I'm so glad you picked up on the parallels.

I'm also happy that the whole thing with her brother worked too. For me Hugo and Rose have two very different characters, it's one of the reasons for me that the two of them don't fight so much. They have not really known life without the other one in it, but their tastes and desires run in very different directions - so they don't rub up against each other much. For being such a mild character as I wanted him to be, I wanted to show my readers that there will be a good reason to place him in Gryffindor (if in fact that's where he goes ...)

Thanks for the review, as of this response the story has had 5725 reads in total and this chapter has had 34,thank you all.

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Review #23, by Avanell 2Kiandria and her Magic Wand: Chapter 19- What in the wand?

17th January 2016:
Ugh! You can't leave it there! :P Can't wait to read the meeting. Loved the incident and the wand discussion (along with a little memory - Kia is beginning to lie a bit much and wonder how much she should or should tell - and to who. Maybe the Weasleys, or just some of them? I actually vote for Hermione and Harry if the adults get involved, lol) Awesome update!

Author's Response: Haha, cliff hanger! :) Had to have a couple of good ones in there. The incident was fun to write. And it seems that finally I've goteen to the stuff regarding the title. Poor Kia, so many secrets and lies...well, they will have to come out eventually. As these things tend to, but as for whoo and when that will be left to the chaper updates!

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!

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Review #24, by Avanell 2The Time Travelers: The Truth?

16th January 2016:
Funny line at the end...nice updatE!

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Review #25, by Avanell 2Jitters: Ron

16th January 2016:
Very sweet story...enjoyed how he saw her in the morning and thought how perfect and better it was going to get :) Lovely!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) i hope that what I imagined in my head from their wedding day was written well!

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