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18th May 2013:
Great chapter...started here for some reason and now looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you like what's in store.
Ellennify
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12th May 2013:
Loved this line: I don't think this will be posible if your cousins are chasing me with the Gryffindor Sword.
Ha-ha! another great update, would like some of Scorpius' thoughts please :D
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do. Thanks for reviewing
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12th May 2013:
Very cute of Scorpius to spend time with Rose :D Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! You people inspire me to continue writing.
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12th May 2013:
Great scene at the end of this update! More exciting than the battle. Awesome update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I figured that it would be more exciting. So glad you liked it I'll have an update soon and thanks for the review.
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12th May 2013:
I meant to comment on the time difference and instant travel issue last post, and you answered it! Well, in some ways.
What a lovely story! I enjoyed it...just wish there was more :D
Author's Response: To be honest, figuring out the instantaneous travel and resulting time difference spun my head out, I was checking that I had gotten it right so many times before I finalised it and hoped that I'd worded it right to make sense. So it worked out that when Ron & Hermione left England in the morning, when they got to Australia, it was evening (9hrs difference basing it on London gmt+1 for dst and Sydney gmt+10) and vice-versa for leaving (left at night and got back the morning of the same day)
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it and I'm glad that you enjoyed the story, unfortunately I'm not very good at really long stories, so for now I'm just writing lots of short stories.
Happy reading :-)
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6th May 2013:
Very nice second chapter. Excellent story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2785351, reviewer: 'Avanell%202'}
6th May 2013:
Nice intro...very intriguing!
Author's Response: Thanks heaps... as soon as the third chapter has been validated I will be posting the spin off story of the Elder Wand!
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6th May 2013:
From the chapter summary, I thought Malfoy would be in their house, lol
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'll start editing stuff to avoid confusion.
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6th May 2013:
Interesting story...thanks for sharing English is not your first language. Looking forward to more :D
Author's Response: Thanks really for reviewing. I have already got some ideas and more interesting parts are coming.
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5th May 2013:
Another fabulous and exciting update! Loved it :D
Author's Response: Well thank you the next chapter will be a little more intense. As always thank you so much for reviewing. Next chapter should be up this week.
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5th May 2013:
I'm all too familiar with the april 1 joke...I think I made an exception to read yours? Regardless, LOVED this update!!!
Author's Response: Yeah when the joke first went up it was still Sunday the 31st so it took me a few minutes to catch on but when I did I couldn't stop laughing. Anyways thanks for the review glad you liked the chapter.
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4th May 2013:
Oh, the fun we have with our mates. :) Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: how right you are my friend, haha I'm am so glad you are enjoying the story thus far and I will update asap
Curiously yours'
TOWRTW
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6th April 2013:
Great update! Loved the call to Ron and Hermione...and Sirius is just too much fun :D
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31st March 2013:
Very intriguing update...loved it! Need more...soon, please! :D
Author's Response: In two weeks, as always thanks for the review Avanell.
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29th March 2013:
Great update! A few errors, but no worries on that. Love the story!
Author's Response: thank you I will be sue to try harder in less errors! I do hope you enjoyed the chapter and will keep reading thank you all the same.
curiously yours
~TOWRTW
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23rd March 2013:
Great, fabulous update! At first I wanted Rose to come back at him and list the things she did to him, but glad she later said it more general and with maturity, despite them not liking her "hiding" her past. Need more now! :D
Author's Response: Yeah it wouldn't have flowed very well if she had listed the things that she had did to him, besides she hasn't kept count. Scorpius has out of guilt, Rose handels things a bit differently she attempts to "Forget" in a way. Also I felt that Rose gave much more of an explanation about her past, she didn't talk a whole lot about what she did but more about how bad she felt about it which was what I was aiming for.
I am hoping to update this weekend or atleast early next week depending on the validation wait. Thank you so much for the review.
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23rd March 2013:
Wonderful epilogue! Love their growing family, and the young couple to be possibly...??? Sequel? ;)
Author's Response: Maybe, I'm not sure how I would carry on the story but you never know :) Glad you like it :)
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23rd March 2013:
Great story! Been awhile since I've read a Veela story. Some errors and other stuff, but enjoyed this intro and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Grrr! lol jk I know there are a lot of errors, im just glad i got my story up and all and glad you read it thank you i will up date soon i promise please read and enjoy!!
mischievously yours,
~TOWRTW
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23rd March 2013:
Delightful story! Loved our couple's parents meeting for tea and the stories, the memories. Awesome! And so nice after I started an angsty story. No thanks, not tonight :D Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad this was a nice anti-angst story for you!
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17th March 2013:
Great update! Good Hermione is better (of course she is, hope she keeps doing so in all ways) :D
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17th March 2013:
Wow, intriguing but still people died :( Sad. Great update.
Author's Response: I know, but someone had to die! Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2776456, reviewer: 'Avanell%202'}
17th March 2013:
Brilliant update! Loved it.
Author's Response: Hey, Thanks!
I was really busy wish my other stories but I'll update this one in a bit... got the next chapter done already!
Hope you enjoy it.
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16th March 2013:
Wow...incredible. Loved the emotional parting with Ron...forgiveness and promises...and love. Awesome!!! Brilliant!!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you :)
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10th March 2013:
Fantastic update! So much more to consider and can't wait for it to be revealed...and of course, the rescue (hopefully Hermione does much herself - of course, she'll likely connect some important dots together).
Author's Response: Thank you :) Glad you're liking it, keep reading :)
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10th March 2013:
Great story. Loved the conversation with Petunia and then Dudley.
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