Goodness... -looks at people 'rolling on the floor with laughter'- I didn't think it was THAT funny... Vaguely amusing, though. ^^ From what we can tell from canon books, the sorting hat is spot on. Though, it may just be me, but I thought it was just a bit boring... I mean, I was hoping to find some unique insights to what may or may not have went on in Ron and Hermione's sorting, but instead, I just found myself thinking, 'yeee-up. That's basically what the hat most likely said to them. wow'. I was sort of hoping for some new ideas, you know? Ah, well, it's nice anyway =) You know, I once considered doing a fic like this, but I don't like Ron and Hermione enough to write them correctly. D= Ah, well. nice job.
~SnobAuthor's Response: Yeah, it is a little boring, I suppose. *shrug* I guess I wrote it for a cheap thrill, and mainly because the plot bunny had chomped down on my ankle and wouldn't let go.
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Unfortunately, you've once again left us readers far too long without a chapter, but luckily this was a good one. ^^ I would LOVE to see a sequel- perhaps one during which their parents are starting to push Camilla and Severus to continue the pureblood line by having children?
~Snob Report Review
Hi there. Nice chapter, I like the demension/alternate universe thingy you've got going on... So I guess the first dimsneion he went to was what you thought 'cannon' might be in the seventh book (which comes out tomorrow at midnight! Woohoo! I'm going to Borders for their book party thingy... ^^), and this new dimension is another one completely where Harry fails and Voldie's headmaster. I'm interested to see where events differ in this new universe compared to the other two to make it so different from the others. =D Eh, anyway, sorry about the rambling. I'm extremely hyped for book seven! Yay! Ohohoh, and I found your account on ffdotnet. I didn't know you had one! I left a review for chapter one on on of your fics, not sure which one, just to say hi. My account is microwaved_noodles (ehm... I was making ramen noodles at the time...) and so. ehm... Yeah! Still hyper. 8D Welp, I'll letcha go now. Toodles! ^^
~SnobAuthor's Response: Hope you enjoyed the book. I certainly did. And thanks for the review. Someday I'll hit 4k over there...
More fun coming up shortly. Report Review
what a little brat. D=
ah, well. I trust you. =)
~SnobAuthor's Response: Haha, I agree, thanks so much for trusting me and for reviewing!! Report Review
Aww. That was lovely. =) I love Bellatrix/Snape pairings, and the background you gave the two of them was amazing- I could really see something like this happening in canon. Poor Sevvie... Poor Beatrix. =( I loved how you paired the song with the fic- or did you pair the fic with the song? Ah, well, it was brilliant either way. On my favs!
Author's Response: This is actually my favorite one. My sister gave me the idea and at first I didn't like it. "Snape and Bellatrix?" Not cannon, but I gave it a whirl and so! ^_^ Glad you liked it! Report Review
Aww... It would have been far more interesting if he had been sorted in Gryffindor, with him being the 'son of Snape' and all. Poo. =( I still like it though. =)
Author's Response: I know you think that...but don't worry.You don't think I blindly did this without a plan, do you? Afraid it won't be interesting anymore eh? Well do I have some surprises for you ;) Report Review
Aww. It's a boy. =) Oh my, I hope Harry doesn't start getting jealous of Severus' new son... Perhaps that's why he was feeling 'disconnected' Glad he's patched things up with Tonks, though they still seem a bit frosty with eachother. Or is that just my imagination?
It was lovely to see Moody again- I was beginning to worry for the little bugger. And what was with Belinda? I never liked her, you know... Hmph. A quick question, I thought it was a bit unclear: does Harry really think that his journey into the parallel universe was just a dream, or is that just what he told Severus so he wouldn't get into trouble?
Anyways, thanks for updating! Another good chapter. ^^
~Snob Report Review
I hate this pairing, because in order to make it work, one or both of them have to be completely OOC, but you've managed to make it work somehow. Good job. =)
~SnobAuthor's Response: That's very true about the OOC-ness - most of the stories of this pairing go that way, and the only way to make it work without having that happen was to have them part. I'm glad that you liked this story nonetheless, and thank you for reviewing. =) Report Review
-sniff- glad I could read about Grimm one last time... Nice fic. I love the pairing and new background information given about the two.
~SnobAuthor's Response: Thanks! Poor Grimm, I'll have to write a load more of fics just about him to keep him alive a bit longer. ;-) Report Review
I hate this pairing, but I've got to say, his was nicey written. Good job, very well done.
~SnobAuthor's Response: Haha, so many people hate SS/Hr, and I can't blame them, really. =P It's great that you enjoyed the story still. Thanks very much for reviewing! Report Review
I wasn't aware that you'd started this fic until just now- and I read it in one sitting! Ugh, my eyes hurt... Anyways, I was very surprised when I realized that Harry had arrived in the universe we call cannon- him meeting with the HBP compliant Severus certainly was interesting. I was also shocked when I realized that you were almost giving an explanation of how cannon Severus found out about the Horcruxes... I almost wish that Harry would meet up with that Severus again to see his reaction (and cannon Harry's) when he finds out that in another universe he adopts Harry... Nice job, please keep up with the frequent updates!
Author's Response: Oh, gee, would I carry the plot through like that?
I don't know... Report Review
This is really adorable. =3 Please continue soon! I love it! This seems like it'll be a great Draco/Luna fic!
~SnobAuthor's Response: Thanks for the premanition. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter.
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Ahh! I've been waiting forever for you to update, and this chapter was so worth the wait! I love big revalations of secrets... Anyways, you were gone for a while, yes, but in my eyes you've completely redeemed yourself. Thanks for updating!
~SnobAuthor's Response: Yay! Redemption! Glad you approve, Snob. Report Review
Brilliant. I love the Severus/Beatrix pairing, it's adorable. =D I also like the Lily/Remus thing, it's a nice contrast to what you usually see, and besides... I'm in hate with James. And Sirius... Gah! Those stupid little prats! Anyways, The only thing I don't like is the 'Sev' part. That's going a bit OOC for Snape to want people to call him 'Sev'... Everyone but him seems in character, though. Anyways, cheerio!
~SnobAuthor's Response: Yea, I know, I'm really paranoid about Snape being OoC, but it's hard for us to know what he was like back when he was younger, maybe he was... nicer than his cold exterior as a potions master - I have a lot of theories about old Severus lol! Yeah, sorry about the Slytherins being a bit OoC, but I don't think I'll do away with the Sev thing... could come in useful to the plot later...
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Good job. That was better than the last chapter. =) Report Review
-gasp- -ohzsnaps!!!- =o
That's all I can say. =)
~SnobAuthor's Response: Thanks!
That's all I can say! Report Review
It's good, but it's getting to be a bit boring. I would suggest introducing your plotline, and soon.
~SnobAuthor's Response: Just be patient. I think you will be pleaseantly surprised in a couple of chapters. Let's let them get to school first! Report Review
Oh wow, great way to end a chapter! xD I can just picture her bored expression when she said, "Enlighten me." Don't know why, but I found that very funny. And don't worry, I completely understand about the no Snape/OC thing! Just some strange thought that always comes to mind for some reason in most fics. =p So... I liked this chapter. =) It was sweet- you had some Sirius is a filthy-cheating-bastard stuff, and some whoopie, Peter! action. I like how often you're updating, too. I haven't touched my fic in a long time. =( Writer's block, you know. 10/10, as usual!
~SnobAuthor's Response: Ah, the dreaded writer's block. I understand completely but I hope you update soon! I really like your fic! A 10/10! How great! You guys are the best. I'm really glad that you took the time to read! Grrr must go do homework...I would rather write. Why am I telling you this? I really couldn't say. I'm just going to wrap this up before I get even more off topic. Thanks a lot! Report Review
Wow. You took alot, I mean ALOT alot from Pirates of the Carribean Two...
~SnobAuthor's Response: Sorry about that, if you didn't like it. The next chapter they get out. I didn't, REALLY didn't mean to use so much in the begining, but this chapter kinda wrote itself. The next is nearly finished, so I should update soon!
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Ella Report Review
Hiii again! =D I adored this chapter! I actually squealed. Twice! -squeal- I love fics that show how Severus er... for want of a better term, turns to the dark side. Oh, and... after seeing MiSsMuRdEr666's review for chapter four, all I've got to say is this:
NO! That would completely ruin the entire thing... Sorry to pop some Sirius lovers' balloons, but Sirius was an arrogant, hypocritical pretty boy who tormented his fellow students in school because he had his own morinic insecurities! And he IS a hypocrite. Anyone remember his little speech about Umbridge? "The world isn't divided into good people and Death Eaters, Harry." Yet look how he treats Severus. Another little bit of advice he gave Harry in the fifth book: "Judge a man by how he treats his inferiors, not his superiors." And look at his torment to Kreacher and Snape when he was in school. People only like him because he's man pretty and Harry likes him. But... don't get me started on Harry. I might explode. 0_0 Hmph.
-sigh- Well. now that I've gotten the Sirius-should-NOT-by-any-means-end-up-with-Lucinda rant, I'll say tata, dearie. =) 'Nother brilliant chapter. My favorite one yet!
~SnobAuthor's Response: Hellooooo, I rather liked your rant. It was quite invigorating, refreshing. You know? Like, not everyone is in love with Sirius Black, the handsome, the heroic, the brave, the caring, the hot! Refreshing. I love your reviews and as sad as this might sound, I enjoy reading them to know ends. It's quite pathetic. Not your reviews, no!, my lack of life. haha. Anyway, I must agree with you in some parts about Sirius but dun dun dun... Lucinda might change her mind about Sirius. Aren't I the worst?
hugs and kisses.
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Ahh! I loved this chapter! And the one before it! It was so wonderfully written... I love how you've incorperated Severus into the picture as well. The poor dear... -sigh- For his scene he was completely on character, what with being defensive, not wanting help... I also liked your poem for Beast, very well written. I wonder who it could be... I have my money on Sirius or Pettigrew, or perhaps even Remus. I want it to be Severus, of course, but I have to keep sternly telling myself, 'no, this isn't a SnapeOC fic, you idiot', but I don't think I want to listen... =p Oh well. =) I also liked the idea of Peter liking Lily- you always hear about the other Marauders and Severus, but never Peter. Good job, and update soon!
~SnobAuthor's Response: As much as I would love for Katie to fall in love with Snape...its not going to happen this time. Sorry...But I am so very glad that you like the story and that you took the time to leave such a great review! Thanks!!!! Report Review
Just to clear things up a bit- does the trio know about Draco and Luna? I thought they didn't, but apparantly Neville has an idea. Or are they just acting hostil towards him because of what happened with Pansy? It doesn't seem in their nature to be protective of a Slytherin, much less Pansy, but you never know. Good chapter- the ending did cath me by suprise! Though, she did kiss him first, so I suppose the hit was just for being so cruel to Pansy... Hm. I hope she isn't too angry with him! D= Anyways, good job, and update soon!
~SnobAuthor's Response: Me, clear things up in a response? No such luck, love ;-) New update to come soon. No worries, your questions will be answered shortly. Report Review
I would suggest making chapters longer, or making more things happening in them. This chapter was just about her waking up. Chapter Five was all about her exciting journey from her room to the Great Hall. Chapter Three, well... nothing really happened in chapter three. My word of advice is to make a word minimum for yourself. Other than that, keep it up. I'm also VERY interested in Severus and this new Defense teacher's relationship. (hinthint). Did I sense a bit of sexual tension? xp The pairing said 'others', so I'm a bit wary of what 'others' you plan to put together. Care to give a hint? Anyways, it really was too long of a wait! Update soon. =)
~SnobAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you for the wonderful review :D. I am trying to fix things regarding how boring the story has really been so far because I must admit, I wouldn't have stayed with it this long if I was a reader. I'm also quite interested in Severus's relationship with Professor Neritic, it's one of my favorite things. You may be sensing sexual tension XD. As regards to others, I'm seriously revamping the story, so it may end up that 'others' gets kicked out. I think even my little Slytherin trio is going to get the boot, which does sadden me, but I realize they don't have much of a place at all. I'll try to get it all sorted out the way I want and to make it more interesting. I'll also try to get it posted much faster, but I can't promise because my life right now is seriously busy XP. Again, thank you for the wonderful review! :D Report Review
-grins- Much, MUCH better! I love it! -grins- On my favs. =)
~SnobAuthor's Response: Thanks. :) I'm trying. :D
P/s: Hopefully I can work a little bit more on the next chapter... Report Review
Gr. I don't get why people leep saying, "ooh, it's badly written" when it's in the HUMOR section. Stupid buggers...
Anyways, I thought it was really funny. Just the idea of Voldemort getting killed by getting run over by Sirius on his giant motorcycle is too funny. =)
~SnobAuthor's Response: thank you, and yeah, humor is supposed to be funny! and i'm glad a lot of people find it amusing. and once again thank you!
~lissy Report Review
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