Love it! I'm looking forward to the confrontation :) Your writing is beautiful. I love how imagery you used in earlier scenes reappears (such as the balloon without enough air). Please update soon!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for saying that :')

The confrontation is going to be... interesting :p

Thank you for reading and reviewing, hon!

*Maria

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Love it! Very unique story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

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Love this story! Please don't wait so long to update the next chapter!

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so i read the present way back in the day when you wrote it and it was and still is basically my favorite fic. i re-read it a few days ago and then discovered this and it easily made my day (or the 20 minutes it took me to read the 6 chapters you have so far). I could honestly read your writing forever. Even the most mundane scenes from your writings (i.e., the late night scenes in which sirius' demons reveal themselves) are the moments that are most well remembered to me. I'm so captivated by the characters you've created (lets face it, you've gone a bit above and beyond what Jo gives us on certain characters) and the scenarios in which you've placed them.

Amazing.

I eagerly await the chapters to follow.

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Cute. :) Kinda cheesy, but i think that's what you were going for, and it worked. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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